聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make your answer more direct and cohesive. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid unclear phrases like “post my interesting viewpoint about” and keep to 2–4 sentences. Use linking words (for example, “because” or “so”) to explain why you like chatting.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. I like sharing my daily routines and interesting experiences with them because it helps us keep in touch. For example, every weekend I tell them about a new book I read or a funny incident from my week.

建議: Answer the question directly about topics you discuss, not the frequency (which the examiner didn't ask). Use a topic sentence naming typical topics, then add a specific example and a linking word. Correct grammar and avoid repetition.

範例: We usually talk about work and everyday life. For instance, we discuss challenges at our jobs and plans for the weekend, so we can support each other and share advice.

建議: Keep the answer concise and reduce fillers like “uh” and repeated words. Begin with a clear preference, then explain why using a linking phrase such as “because” or “as”. Give a specific example of benefits of group chat vs one-to-one.

範例: I prefer chatting in a group because we get many different viewpoints. For example, when we plan a trip together, everyone suggests ideas and we can decide faster and more creatively.

建議: Good clear preference and reason. Make your language more natural and fix small grammar errors (e.g., “facial expressions and emotions”). Use one linking word and keep it to 2–3 sentences with a specific example.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it lets me see facial expressions and emotions directly. For example, when we discuss something important, meeting in person helps us understand each other better.

建議: Be concise and clear. Start with a direct answer, then give a concrete example of when disagreements happen and how you handle them. Remove hesitations and unclear fragments. Use linking words like “however” or “when” to structure your response.

範例: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends, but not often. For instance, we disagree when planning a group activity, and we usually resolve it by discussing each option calmly and compromising.

× Every week I will post my interesting viewpoint about.

✓ Every week I post my interesting viewpoints.

Using 'will' suggests a future-only action; a habitual action requires present simple. Also 'viewpoint about' is incomplete and 'viewpoints' plural fits 'interesting' and 'every week'. Use present simple for routines.

× Well I think it's about twice a week because my friends are all have their jobs having having their own jobs to do so we can just only chat frequently during the weekends.

✓ Well, I think it's about twice a week because my friends all have their own jobs, so we can only chat frequently on weekends.

Multiple errors: 'are all have' is incorrect; use simple present 'all have' for possession. Remove duplicated words 'having having'. Use 'on weekends' rather than 'during the weekends' for habitual frequency and remove redundant 'just' or 'only' as needed. Maintain present simple for routines.

× Well, I prefer to chat with many people because I think, uh, when I meet many friends at one time, we can share different things and our viewpoints on of one thing that's that interest me.

✓ Well, I prefer to chat with many people because I think when I meet many friends at one time, we can share different things and our viewpoints on one topic that interests me.

Use 'topic' instead of 'one thing' and remove extra words 'on of'. 'Interest' must be 'interests' to agree with singular subject 'one topic' (third person singular). Also remove filler repetitions and clarify phrasing.

× I love communicating face to face with my friend because I think the conversation online is not that convenient for everybody, but the offline meeting will make me see the facial and the emotion direct.

✓ I love communicating face to face with my friends because I think online conversation is not that convenient for everybody, but offline meetings let me see facial expressions and emotions directly.

Pluralize 'friend' to 'friends' for general statement. Use 'online conversation' or 'conversations' without 'the'. 'Facial' needs the noun 'expressions'. Use adverb 'directly' to modify verb. Use plural 'meetings' for general habit.

× Yes, sometimes, but not often because we have our own things to do. But sometimes I will have some. FL uh, reflects with my friends because we have different opinions on one thing about like.

✓ Yes, sometimes, but not often, because we have our own things to do. Occasionally I have some conflicts with my friends because we have different opinions about something.

Original is fragmented and contains fillers and unclear words 'FL uh, reflects'. Replace with 'conflicts' to express arguments. Use 'occasionally' and clear clause 'because we have different opinions about something'. Maintain present simple for habitual behavior.