聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 문법과 문장구조 오류를 고치고, 불필요한 문장을 제거하며 자연스럽게 말하세요. 예: 동사의 형태(we usually chat), 불명확한 문장(So you tell me Alexis is better)은 제거. 주제문으로 시작하고 한두 개의 구체적 이유나 예를 덧붙이세요.

範例: Yes, I do. I enjoy chatting with my friends because we often discuss our plans and goals for the future. For example, last week we shared ideas about career paths and study plans.

建議: 문법과 어순을 바로잡고 더 구체적인 예시를 추가하세요. 연결어를 사용해 논리를 명확히 하되 말은 간결하게 유지하세요. 예: 'I usually chat with friends about our future and experiences'로 수정하고 구체적 이유(진로, 공부법 등)를 덧붙이세요.

範例: I usually talk with my friends about our future plans and personal experiences. For example, we discuss possible career paths, internship opportunities, and what skills we need to improve.

建議: 의미 전달을 명확히 하고 자연스러운 표현으로 바꾸세요. 'I prefer chatting with one person'로 시작하고 이유(집중, 깊은 대화)를 구체적으로 설명하세요. 문법(people→person, more deep→more deeply)도 수정하세요.

範例: I prefer chatting with one friend because it's easier to focus and have deeper conversations. When it's just one person, we can ask follow-up questions and really explore each other's ideas.

建議: 표현을 자연스럽게 다듬고 이유를 구체적으로 설명하세요. 'I prefer face-to-face communication'로 시작하고 오해를 줄이고 비언어적 신호를 이용할 수 있다는 점을 덧붙이세요. 불필요한 중복 표현을 제거하세요.

範例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it reduces misunderstandings and allows me to use body language and tone to express my opinions more clearly.

建議: 어휘 선택과 문법을 교정하고 구체적인 해결 방법을 제시하세요. 'a crime discussion'는 의미가 불분명하므로 'a calm discussion'로 바꾸고 어떻게 해결하는지(예: 경청, 타협)를 설명하세요.

範例: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends. Disagreements often come from different opinions or misunderstandings, but a calm discussion and active listening usually help us resolve the issue quickly.

× Of course I like chatting with my friends.

✓ Of course I like chatting with my friends.

Sentence is correct; no change needed. It uses present simple appropriately for habits.

× We usually chatting to talk about our future.

✓ We usually chat to talk about our future.

Present simple for habitual action requires base verb (chat), not -ing. Use 'usually chat' to describe regular activities.

× So you tell me Alexis is better.

✓ So tell me, is Alexis better?

Original is unclear and misorders words. For a direct question, place auxiliary 'is' before subject: 'Is Alexis better?' Use comma for address or introductory phrase.

× I usually chat about with friends about our future and experience.

✓ I usually chat with friends about our future and our experiences.

Remove redundant 'about' and use 'chat with friends about ...'. Use plural 'experiences' to match general instances.

× It's help we to focus my future careers.

✓ It helps us focus on our future careers.

Use third-person singular 'helps' for 'it', correct pronoun 'us' instead of 'we', remove 'to' after 'help', and use 'focus on' plus plural 'careers' consistent with 'our'.

× I prepared to chat with only one people brands because when we chat with only friends we can focus more effectively and talk about more deep.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one person because when we chat with just one friend we can focus more effectively and talk more deeply.

Use present preference 'prefer' not 'prepared'. 'People' should be singular 'person'. 'Just one friend' is clearer. 'More deeply' is correct adverb form; 'more deep' is incorrect.

× I prepared to communicate face to face because it can reduce the miss under miss understanding and I can tell about my opinion better.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because it can reduce misunderstandings and I can express my opinion better.

Use 'prefer' for present preference. Combine 'miss under miss understanding' into 'misunderstandings'. Use 'express my opinion' rather than 'tell about my opinion'.

× Yes, I do argue with friends.

✓ Yes, I do argue with friends.

This sentence is grammatically correct; use of 'do' for emphasis is acceptable.

× Disagreements usually arise over different opinion or misunderstanding, and I find that a crime discussion help resolve them quickly.

✓ Disagreements usually arise over different opinions or misunderstandings, and I find that a calm discussion helps resolve them quickly.

Use plural 'opinions' and 'misunderstandings'. 'Crime' is wrong word; 'calm' fits context. 'Discussion' is singular requiring 'helps' (third-person singular).