聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve pronunciation and grammar, remove filler words, and make sentences concise and coherent. Begin with a clear topic sentence, follow with one or two specific supporting details using linking words, and avoid repetition. Also correct word choice (e.g., "traders" -> likely "matters" or "relationships") and ensure subject-verb agreement.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me relax and share ideas. For example, we often talk about films and current events, which lead to interesting conversations. Moreover, my friends give me emotional support during stressful times, so chatting with them is very important to me.

建議: Start with a direct topic sentence and use linking words to list topics. Use correct plural/singular forms and concise phrasing. Add one specific example to make content more vivid.

範例: I usually chat about my daily activities, my studies, and our weekend plans because these topics are relevant to our lives. For example, last weekend we planned to watch a new movie together, and we also discussed our study schedules to help each other.

建議: Use a clear, concise topic sentence and avoid repetition. Give one or two concise reasons with linking words (because, so) and correct grammar (e.g., "an introvert," "one trusted friend"). Keep emotional language controlled and specific.

範例: I prefer chatting with just one friend because I am an introvert and find it easier to open up to someone I trust. For example, I share personal problems with one close friend rather than discussing them in a group.

建議: Good clear answer and relevant example; improve minor grammar ("hypothesis discussions" unclear, "rapport" instead of "report"), and reduce small errors. Keep answer within 3–4 sentences and use precise vocabulary.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can read body language and hear tone of voice, which makes conversations clearer. For example, during work meetings discussing project ideas, in-person meetings help avoid misunderstandings and build rapport more quickly.

建議: Provide a direct, structured response: state whether you argue, give one clear reason why, and mention how you resolve or prevent arguments. Avoid vague phrasing and fillers and correct sentence structure.

範例: Yes, sometimes I argue with friends, usually because of misunderstandings or different opinions. However, we try to resolve conflicts by talking calmly and apologizing when needed to keep our relationship strong.

× Sih chatting with friends because it helps me relax and share ideas.

✓ I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me relax and share ideas.

The original sentence is missing a proper subject and verb; 'Sih' appears to be a typo. Use a full clause with subject and verb: 'I enjoy chatting...' This fixes sentence structure and meaning.

× For example, we often discuss movies or current issues which sparks interesting things.

✓ For example, we often discuss movies or current issues, which sparks interesting conversations.

The relative clause must refer to a plural or uncountable noun; 'which sparks' has singular verb but refers to 'discussions' or 'conversations'. Change noun to 'conversations' and keep comma before 'which' to form correct non-defining relative clause.

× Also, uh talking with friends, traders or relationship and provides many many emotional support during stressful times and hardships in our life.

✓ Also, talking with friends or those close to me provides a lot of emotional support during stressful times and hardships in life.

Original has fragmented structure and incorrect nouns ('traders' likely wrong) and repeated words. Use gerund phrase 'talking with friends or those close to me' as subject and singular verb 'provides'. Use 'a lot of' or 'much' and remove repetition.

× So it is very important to chat with friends.

✓ So it is very important to chat with friends.

Sentence is correct; no grammatical change needed. It is included to show it's fine.

× Actually chat with my friends about my daily activities and studies and our weekend plans because this subjects are relevant and it is very helping for us.

✓ Actually, I chat with my friends about my daily activities, studies, and our weekend plans because these subjects are relevant and very helpful to us.

Missing subject 'I' and punctuation; 'this subjects' is wrong (number agreement) and 'helping' used incorrectly. Change to 'these subjects' and adjective 'helpful to us'.

× We also talk about our hobbies, our favorite movies or sports and it stretches our bond.

✓ We also talk about our hobbies, favorite movies, or sports, and it strengthens our bond.

'It stretches our bond' is unnatural; use 'strengthens our bond'. Also streamlined repetition of 'our' and added comma for clarity.

× I actually prefer to chat with only friend because I I'm actually very introvert and I don't believe people easily and if I believe people they might might break my heart and it hurts me a lot.

✓ I actually prefer to chat with only one friend because I am quite introverted and I don't trust people easily; if I trust someone, they might break my heart, and that would hurt me a lot.

Errors: missing article 'one friend', wrong contraction 'I I'm', adjective 'introvert' should be 'introverted', 'believe people easily' should be 'trust people easily', repetition 'might might'. Split into clearer clauses and correct verb forms.

× So I actually talk with one my trusted friend and share my feeling with him.

✓ So I actually talk with one trusted friend and share my feelings with him.

Missing article 'one of my' or 'one trusted friend' and noun should be plural 'feelings'. Correct pronoun 'him' is acceptable if gender known; otherwise use 'them' for neutrality.

× I prefer face to face communication because it allows me to read body language and hear vocal tone which makes conversations more meaningful and clear.

✓ I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to read body language and hear vocal tone, which makes conversations more meaningful and clearer.

Hyphenate 'face-to-face' as a compound adjective. Add comma before non-defining relative clause. 'Clear' as adverb should be 'clearer' to compare meaning; both 'meaningful and clearer' improves parallelism.

× For example, during hypothesis discussions at work, I find in person meetings more effective since misunderstanding are less likely and report is easier to build.

✓ For example, during hypothetical discussions at work, I find in-person meetings more effective since misunderstandings are less likely and rapport is easier to build.

Use 'hypothetical' not 'hypothesis', hyphenate 'in-person', plural 'misunderstandings', and correct 'report' to 'rapport' (meaning relationship/trust). 'Rapport' is the correct noun.

× Yeah, sometimes I argue with friends in some sense and I think that it must be umm, improved because we should keep relationships strong.

✓ Yes, sometimes I argue with friends, and I think these arguments should be managed because we should keep relationships strong.

Informal filler 'umm' removed; 'must be improved' is awkward—arguments aren't improved, they should be managed or resolved. Clarify meaning and correct conjunctions.

× But sometimes it may bigger, it may become bigger and we must have many issues in between us and it is very delicate for us and.

✓ But sometimes the arguments can become bigger, and we may have many issues between us, which makes the situation very delicate.

Original is fragmented and ungrammatical ('it may bigger'). Use 'can become bigger' and 'issues between us'. Complete the sentence and improve clarity and cohesion.