聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, use correct grammar, reduce fillers and repetition. Add one specific example to support the reason. Also correct verb forms and possessives (e.g., “friends give me…”).

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because they give me useful advice when I’m unsure about something and help me feel less stressed. For example, when I was choosing classes last semester, a friend suggested a timetable that made my week much easier.

建議: Open with a clear topic sentence, reduce hesitation and repetition, and use more precise vocabulary (e.g., “gossip” not “taking gossips”, “recent events”). Add one concrete example of a recent topic to make it specific.

範例: We usually talk about everyday matters, such as hobbies, current projects, and recent events at school. For example, last week we discussed a student exhibition and plans for a weekend hiking trip.

建議: Provide a direct topic sentence, correct grammar (singular/plural, pronouns), remove filler words, and give a brief reason with a linking word (e.g., “because”). Offer a short example to illustrate preference.

範例: I prefer talking one-on-one because it’s easier to concentrate and understand the other person. For example, when I discuss study problems with a classmate, we can focus and solve them quickly without background chatter.

建議: Start with a clear preference sentence, avoid awkward phrases, and use correct expressions for tone and body language. Use one concise reason with an example, and remove fillers and repetitions.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because you can read tone and body language more easily. For instance, during a difficult conversation, seeing someone’s facial expressions helped me understand their real feelings and respond appropriately.

建議: Give a clear topic sentence and correct verb forms, avoid repetition and fillers, and provide a brief specific example of the kind of small disagreements you have and how you resolve them to show coherence and content depth.

範例: I don’t usually argue with my friends because we get along well and avoid serious conflicts. Occasionally we disagree about small things, like which movie to watch, and we resolve it by taking turns choosing or voting.

× Obviously I'd like to chat with friends because like friends they always giving me constructive schedule suggestions while I have something I don't know and also they're improving my mental health so I like to chat with them.

✓ Obviously I'd like to chat with friends because friends always give me constructive suggestions about my schedule when I don't know something, and they also improve my mental health, so I like to chat with them.

The original sentence uses the incorrect verb form 'giving' after the subject 'friends' which requires the base form with appropriate tense. This is a third person plural subject, so use 'give' instead of 'giving' or 'gives'. Also cleaned up word order and articles: 'when I don't know something' is clearer than 'while I have something I don't know'. Suggestions: use simple present for habitual actions (friends always give), remove unnecessary filler words, and keep parallel structure with 'and' connecting clauses.

× Usually, uh, we're taking gossips at our school or in daily life and we usually talk about hobbies or like what are we currently doing and any things that happens recently in our lives. Just sharing about our daily life.

✓ Usually, uh, we gossip about school or daily life and we usually talk about hobbies, what we are currently doing, and things that have happened recently in our lives. We just share about our daily life.

'We're taking gossips' is incorrect; the verb 'gossip' is a verb used without 'take' and does not need continuous tense here. 'Any things that happens' has subject-verb agreement and article issues: 'things' (plural) requires 'have happened' (present perfect) for recent events and 'happened' not 'happens'. Suggestions: use 'gossip' and appropriate tense (present simple/have happened) to describe habitual actions and recent events.

× Umm, to be honest, I prefer to speak only with one friends face to face because if I talk with like a group of people, I can't hear they saying like clearly. But with only one friends, I can hear him like like clearly and I can focus on what he's saying, you know?

✓ Umm, to be honest, I prefer to speak only with one friend face to face because if I talk with a group of people, I can't hear them speaking clearly. But with only one friend, I can hear him clearly and I can focus on what he's saying, you know?

Errors: 'one friends' should be singular 'one friend'; 'they saying' uses wrong pronoun and verb form — use 'them' and 'speaking' or 'they are saying'. Also avoid double 'like' and repetitive words. Suggestions: match pronouns to their antecedents, use correct singular/plural forms, and use 'speaking' or 'saying' correctly.

× Umm, there's no denied I'd like to do face to face. It's because like umm, on social media, I can't know their tone or like I can't watch their face to know or guessing where they what they're going to say next. But face to face I can understand their emotional or like I can watch the small action to define their best.

✓ Umm, there's no doubt I'd like to meet face to face. It's because on social media I can't know their tone or see their facial expressions to guess what they are going to say next. But face to face I can understand their emotions and observe small actions to interpret them better.

'There's no denied' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'there's no doubt'. Use 'meet face to face' instead of 'do face to face'. 'I can't watch their face to know or guessing where they what they're going to say' has multiple errors: use 'see their facial expressions' and 'guess what they are going to say'. 'Their emotional' should be plural noun 'emotions'. Suggestions: use standard expressions ('no doubt'), correct verb forms, and clearer vocabulary like 'facial expressions' and 'interpret'.

× I mostly don't argue with my friends because like all of them were peaceful, you know? We don't always arguing the things we argue is just only because about the small things, you know? And definitely I'm not arguing with my friends always.

✓ I mostly don't argue with my friends because they are generally peaceful, you know? We don't always argue; when we do, it's only about small things. I'm definitely not always arguing with my friends.

Tense and verb form errors: 'were peaceful' uses past tense incorrectly when describing a general present condition — use 'are generally peaceful'. 'We don't always arguing' should be 'we don't always argue' (do + base verb). 'the things we argue is just only because about the small things' is ungrammatical and unclear; corrected to 'when we do, it's only about small things'. Suggestions: use present simple for habitual states, use 'do' + base verb for negation, and simplify sentence structure for clarity.