聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and use the present tense consistently. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (umm, uh), correct collocations (have coffee, during meals), and provide one specific supporting detail. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and clear my mind. We usually talk over coffee or during meals, and these conversations often lift my mood.

建議: Organize your answer with a topic sentence then specific examples using linking words (for example, sometimes, also). Avoid repetition and complete your final thought. Use plural/singular correctly and small pauses instead of trailing off.

範例: We usually chat about light topics such as daily routines, fashion and TV shows. Sometimes we also discuss politics because we share similar views, and we often recommend our favourite cuisines to each other.

建議: Give a clear direct statement and one concise reason with linking words. Avoid fillers and repeated phrases. Use correct grammar: 'I feel shy' or 'I am an introvert' and finish the sentence fully.

範例: I prefer chatting with one person rather than in a group because I am quite introverted. It is easier to express my opinions and have a meaningful conversation one-on-one.

建議: State your preference clearly, give one or two specific reasons using linking words, and avoid repeating 'because'. Use correct phrasing: 'via social media' and finish your final clause. Keep answer within 2–3 sentences.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication rather than via social media because I value body language and facial expressions. Without these cues, messages are easier to misunderstand.

建議: Begin with a clear direct response, then give a concise explanation and an example of how you resolve disagreements. Correct grammar: 'we don't agree on an opinion' → 'we disagree' and 'we try to understand each other's point of view.'

範例: Not often. I try to avoid arguments, but if we disagree on a plan or an opinion, we discuss it calmly and try to understand each other's point of view so we can reach a compromise.

× Yes, I enjoyed chatting with my friends because I think it's a great way to relax or refresh our mind and umm uh, I, we always chat on coffee or during meal and uh, it snows.

✓ Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because I think it's a great way to relax and refresh our minds. We always chat over coffee or during meals.

Mixed present and past tense: 'enjoyed' (past) conflicts with general habit. Use present simple 'enjoy' for habits. 'Refresh our mind' should be plural 'refresh our minds' to match plural subject. Preposition 'on coffee' is incorrect; use 'over coffee'. 'During meal' should be plural 'during meals' for habitual actions.

× We usually chat about the daily routines fashion and TV shows because we are interested in that and sometimes our chat is based on politics because we share same interest and as well as we also talk about the our favorite cuisines and the.

✓ We usually chat about our daily routines, fashion, and TV shows because we are interested in those topics. Sometimes our conversations are about politics because we share the same interests, and we also talk about our favorite cuisines.

Run-on sentence with incorrect conjunctions and articles: add commas to separate items and use 'those topics' to refer back. 'Our chat is based on politics' is awkward; use 'conversations are about politics'. Add definite article 'the' in 'the same interests' and remove extra 'the' before 'our favorite cuisines'.

× Umm, well, I prefer to chat with uh, one person, not with the group because I feel myself as an introvert person, so I do not feel confident to share my thought or express my thought with the, uh, so many people.

✓ Umm, well, I prefer to chat with one person, not with a group, because I consider myself an introvert, so I do not feel confident sharing my thoughts with many people.

Several issues: 'feel myself as' is incorrect; use 'consider myself' or 'feel like an'. 'Introvert person' should be 'an introvert'. 'Share my thought' and 'express my thought' should be plural 'thoughts'. Remove unnecessary article 'the' before 'so many people'.

× And uh, uh, it is very quite, uh, easier to express my thoughts in front of.

✓ It is much easier for me to express my thoughts in front of one person.

Awkward adverb order: 'very quite' is incorrect; choose 'much' or 'quite'. Sentence is incomplete 'in front of' needs an object; add 'one person' to match previous context. 'For me' clarifies the subject's perspective.

× I prefer to communicate in person instead of on the social media sites because I have a fear of talking on phone or texting on messages because by doing that we can not watch the body language of a person so we can misunderstand sometimes and.

✓ I prefer to communicate in person rather than on social media because I am afraid of talking on the phone or texting. When we communicate that way, we cannot see a person's body language, so we can sometimes misunderstand each other.

Preposition errors: use 'on social media' not 'on the social media sites' and 'on the phone' (or 'by phone'). 'Texting on messages' is incorrect; use 'texting' or 'sending messages'. 'Can not' should be 'cannot'. Sentence was run-on and incomplete; split into two sentences and add 'each other' for clarity.

× No, not really. I don't like good to argue with my friends. Uh, but occasionally it happens sometimes when we are not agree on opinion or an on any plan.

✓ No, not really. I don't like to argue with my friends, but occasionally it happens when we do not agree on an opinion or on a plan.

'I don't like good to argue' is incorrect—use 'I don't like to argue'. 'Occasionally' and 'sometimes' are redundant; keep one. 'We are not agree' needs 'we do not agree'. 'An on any plan' is wrong; use 'on a plan' or 'on any plan'.

× So we talk about that calmly and try to understand each other's point.

✓ So we talk about it calmly and try to understand each other's point of view.

'That' is acceptable but 'it' is more natural here; add 'of view' to complete the phrase 'point of view'. This clarifies meaning and improves naturalness.