聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make tense consistent (use present tense), shorten redundant phrases, and add one specific brief example to make it more concrete. Keep under five sentences and use a linking phrase.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me unwind and catch up on each other's lives. For example, last week we discussed career plans and I received useful advice that helped me reconsider my options.

建議: Avoid repetition and filler words, correct minor grammar (remove duplicate 'we'), and use linking words to contrast topics with a clear example for each case.

範例: It depends on how close we are. If we're close, we discuss personal issues such as work problems and future plans; for example, I once talked with a close friend about changing careers. If we're not close, we usually talk about light topics like food and travel.

建議: Clarify awkward phrasing (“service levels” unclear) and remove short fragment. Provide one concise reason with linking word and a brief example to illustrate.

範例: I prefer one-on-one conversations because they are more personal and less interrupted. For instance, when I speak privately with a close friend I can discuss sensitive topics in detail.

建議: Strong answer but can be slightly improved by combining sentences to avoid repetition and adding a brief specific example of a misunderstanding prevented by face-to-face talk.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can read facial expressions and tone, which reduces misunderstandings; for example, a recent in-person talk helped clarify a colleague's feedback that seemed harsh in a message.

建議: Make sentences more concise and correct run-on structure. Use linking words to show contrast (however, otherwise) and give a specific example of how you resolve an issue calmly.

範例: I usually avoid arguments because I dislike confrontation; instead, I calmly explain what upset me and suggest a solution. For example, when a friend missed an important meeting, I told them how it affected me and we agreed on better planning next time.

× Yes, I enjoyed chatting with friends because it helps me unwind and catch up on each other's lives.

✓ Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me unwind and catch up on each other's lives.

The student used 'enjoyed' (past simple) but then describes a habitual or general truth ('it helps me unwind'), so present simple 'enjoy' is correct to match the ongoing habit.

× It actually depends on how close we we are.

✓ It actually depends on how close we are.

The sentence contains a duplicated pronoun 'we we'. Remove the extra 'we' to correct the pronoun repetition and make a grammatically correct clause.

× If we're close enough, like I mentioned earlier, we can talk about our works, our personal worries, our future plans, something deeper.

✓ If we're close enough, like I mentioned earlier, we can talk about our work, our personal worries, our future plans, or something deeper.

'Works' is usually plural for creative pieces or jobs; in this context 'work' (uncountable) or 'jobs' is more natural. Also add 'or' before 'something deeper' to join the list correctly.

× But if we're not close enough, then we're just talk about some funny stuff and some delicious food, traveling experience, etcetera.

✓ But if we're not close enough, then we just talk about some funny stuff, delicious food, travel experiences, etcetera.

'We're just talk' is incorrect; use 'we just talk' (simple present) for habitual action. 'Traveling experience' should be plural 'travel experiences' or 'travel experiences' and 'delicious food' doesn't need 'some' twice; streamline list punctuation.

× I definitely prefer chatting with only one friend because a one-on-one conversation can be more personal, deeper and without interruption, while group chats often stay on service levels.

✓ I definitely prefer chatting with only one friend because a one-on-one conversation can be more personal, deeper and without interruption, while group chats often stay on a surface level.

'a one-on-one' is correct but 'on service levels' is incorrect phrase; likely intended 'on a surface level'. Use the article 'a' before 'surface level'.

× More talk.

✓ There is more opportunity for talking.

'More talk' is a fragment and not a complete sentence. Rephrase to a full clause such as 'There is more opportunity for talking' or 'People talk more' to convey the idea clearly.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because I can see people's facial expressions and feel their emotions directly, while text messages often lead to misunderstandings.

✓ I prefer to communicate face-to-face because I can see people's facial expressions and feel their emotions directly, while text messages often lead to misunderstandings.

Use hyphenated 'face-to-face' when used as an adverbial phrase modifying 'communicate'; it's the standard form. Otherwise sentence is correct.

× So I find in person conversations clearer and more satisfying.

✓ So I find in-person conversations clearer and more satisfying.

Use hyphenated 'in-person' as a modifier before 'conversations'. Also plural 'conversations' fits; alternatively 'So I find conversations in person clearer...' The hyphen clarifies adjectival usage.

× I usually avoid arguing with my friends because I don't like confrontation.

✓ I usually avoid arguing with my friends because I don't like confrontation.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. Included to show it's fine.

× Instead, I tell them what upsets me calmly and try to resolve the problems so that otherwise I'll just let it go if it's not important so that our friendship stays peaceful and we can move on quickly.

✓ Instead, I calmly tell them what upsets me and try to resolve the problems; otherwise, if it's not important, I'll just let it go so our friendship stays peaceful and we can move on quickly.

Original contains multiple conjunctions and misplaced 'so that' fragments causing run-on and awkward structure. Reorder to place adverb 'calmly' before the verb, separate ideas with a semicolon or periods, and use 'otherwise' correctly to contrast the actions. This improves clarity and grammar.