聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct, use correct grammar and keep it concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No), then one or two specific reasons with linking words. Correct verb forms and prepositions (prefer communicating, face-to-face). Avoid unclear phrases like 'not as soon as' or 'in good life'.

範例: No, I don't really like chatting with friends online. I prefer face-to-face conversations because they feel more personal and it's easier to understand tone and body language.

建議: Answer directly, then give one or two specific topics with clear linking words. Use correct tense and concise phrasing. Avoid long, confusing sentences and unclear ideas like 'I just add them'.

範例: I rarely chat online, but when I do we usually discuss work or school. For example, we share information about homework and deadlines, and sometimes we remind each other about tasks we still need to complete.

建議: Begin with a clear preference and explain the reason using linking words (if, when, because). Use accurate vocabulary (private, personal) and avoid repetition. Keep sentences short and coherent.

範例: It depends. If the topic is private, I prefer to chat with one close friend because it's more personal. However, if I have a funny or general story, I enjoy sharing it with a group because everyone can join the conversation.

建議: State your preference clearly, then give two concise, specific reasons using linking words (because, because of). Correct awkward phrases ('100% sure by tries', 'cause to the loss'). Mention concrete effects like losing practice in speaking or missing non-verbal cues.

範例: I strongly prefer face-to-face communication because it helps me practice speaking and I can read facial expressions and tone. In contrast, social media feels less engaging and can weaken real-life communication skills.

建議: Answer directly, then clarify the nature of your arguments with specific details and linking words (but, however). Fix grammar and redundancy (not too offensive; arguments are friendly debates). Give a brief example of a typical topic to show concreteness.

範例: Yes, I do argue with friends, but our arguments are usually friendly debates rather than fights. For example, we often discuss which restaurant to choose or which course is better, and we try to decide by explaining our reasons.

× I would say not because I would prefer communicate face to face with my friend because I thought chatting online is not as soon as when I talk to my friend in good life.

✓ I would say no because I would prefer to communicate face to face with my friends; I think chatting online is not as immediate as talking to them in real life.

Missing 'to' before the verb 'communicate' (infinitive required) and incorrect adjective/adverb use: 'as soon as' is wrong for comparing immediacy; use 'as immediate as' or 'as immediate'. Also 'my friend' should be plural 'my friends' to match general meaning. 'Good life' is wrong collocation; use 'real life'. Suggestions: use 'prefer to + verb', compare with 'as + adjective + as', and use correct nouns ('friends', 'real life').

× I rarely chat with my friends but if I have to communicate with them online, I would talk about the work and the study that are some homework that I have done but I don't remember so I just add them and I will accomplish it under pressure.

✓ I rarely chat with my friends, but if I have to communicate with them online, I talk about work and studies or the homework I have done but don't remember; I just add them and complete it under pressure.

Mixed and incorrect verb tenses and awkward noun phrases. Use simple present for habitual actions ('I rarely chat', 'I talk'). 'The work and the study' should be 'work and studies' or 'work and schoolwork'. 'Some homework that I have done but I don't remember' is unclear; simplify to 'the homework I have done but don't remember'. Avoid future 'will' when describing habitual reaction; use present. Suggestions: keep consistent present tense for habits, use clearer noun phrases, and simplify clauses.

× It would depend on whether the story is profit or or just a full story I want to share with everyone.

✓ It depends on whether the story is important or whether it is just something I want to share with everyone.

Incorrect word choice 'profit' and repeated 'or or'. Use 'important' or 'private' instead of 'profit'. Also use consistent clause structure: 'It depends on whether X or whether Y'. Suggestions: choose appropriate vocabulary and avoid repetition.

× If this is a private story or just a small communication. I would rather check with my friends who is my best friend and if a funny story had that I can't share with everyone I would share it to.

✓ If it is a private matter or just a small conversation, I would check with my best friend; if there is a funny story that I can't share with everyone, I would share it with them.

Sentence fragments and wrong pronoun and preposition usage. 'Who is my best friend' should be 'my best friend' as object. 'Had that I can't share' is ungrammatical; use 'there is a funny story that I can't share with everyone'. Use 'share it with' not 'share it to'. Suggestions: combine fragments into full sentences, use correct relative clauses, and use 'share with'.

× Oh that would be a 100% sure by tries to. I would prefer face to face communication because I find chatting online with friends is not interesting and it can cause to the loss of the communication skills and I cannot really talk to them by a small screen.

✓ I would definitely prefer face-to-face communication because I find chatting online with friends uninteresting; it can lead to a loss of communication skills, and I cannot really connect through a small screen.

Awkward phrasing and tense/modal misuse: 'that would be a 100% sure by tries to' is ungrammatical—use 'I would definitely' or 'I'm 100% sure'. 'Find chatting online with friends is not interesting' should be 'find chatting online with friends uninteresting' or 'not interesting'. 'Cause to the loss of' should be 'lead to a loss of'. 'Talk to them by a small screen' is awkward—use 'connect through a small screen'. Suggestions: use natural adverbs ('definitely'), correct collocations ('lead to a loss'), and use more natural verbs ('connect').

× Of course yes, but every argument is not a it's not too offensive or just to know who is wrong and who is right.

✓ Of course, yes, but not every argument is offensive; often they are just to find out who is wrong and who is right.

Redundant and fragmented phrasing: 'is not a it's not too offensive' is confusing. Use clear negative form and concise structure: 'not every argument is offensive' and 'they are just to find out'. Maintain subject consistency ('arguments' -> 'they'). Suggestions: avoid repetition, use clear negative constructions, and maintain plural agreement.

× My argument between me and my friends is often just a debate to find out which is the better options and that's why I think that argument or debate.

✓ Arguments between my friends and me are often just debates to find out the better option, and that's why I consider them debates rather than personal attacks.

Incorrect pronoun order: use 'my friends and me' not 'me and my friends'. Number agreement: 'which is the better options' should be 'the better option' (singular) or 'better options' with rephrasing. Last clause is incomplete: clarify 'I think that argument or debate' to state opinion. Suggestions: use correct pronoun order, match singular/plural nouns, and complete the final clause to express the idea.