聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise, use correct tense and grammar, and organize into a clear topic sentence plus one specific supporting detail. Avoid filler words (uh, um).

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends. However, since I started working and studying more seriously, I have less time to talk, so now we usually catch up briefly on weekends.

建議: Give a clear topic sentence and specific, coherent examples. Correct vocabulary (e.g., 'my major' not 'sex vision') and use linking words to connect ideas.

範例: We usually talk about our majors and plans for travel. For example, I study environmental science while my friend studies artificial intelligence, so we often discuss how technology affects environmental policy.

建議: State preference clearly, give one focused reason with a linking word and correct nouns/phrases. Reduce hesitations and make the explanation specific.

範例: I prefer chatting one-on-one because I can be more open with my best friend and I trust her not to share my private matters with others.

建議: Give a direct answer followed by a clear, specific reason. Use correct expressions (facial expressions) and avoid repetition.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because you can read facial expressions and tone of voice, which helps avoid misunderstandings that often happen online.

建議: Answer directly, use correct grammar and sequencing words (e.g., 'sometimes', 'afterwards'), and give a brief specific example of how you resolve arguments.

範例: We sometimes argue when our opinions differ, but afterwards we usually apologize and calm down; for instance, we once disagreed about trip plans and then compromised on a new schedule.

× Yes, I do like chatting with friends, uh, when I was young, but after, uh, I growing up, it's uh, less time for me to have a chit chat with my besties because all of we are busy in the working and the, uh, study.

✓ Yes, I liked chatting with friends when I was young, but after I grew up, I have less time to chat with my besties because we are all busy with work and study.

Tense and verb form errors: 'do like' conflicts with past context 'when I was young' so change to past 'liked'; 'I growing up' is incorrect form, use past 'I grew up'; 'it's less time for me to have a chit chat' should be 'I have less time to chat' for natural present meaning; word order and preposition errors 'all of we are busy in the working and the study' should be 'we are all busy with work and study'. Suggestions: keep consistent tense for time phrases, use correct past forms, use 'busy with' and simpler verbs like 'chat'.

× Umm, we usually travel with the, with Saturday's topic about, umm, our major, like I am, uh, umm, my sex vision major and she is uh, artificial intelligence. So we do have some chat with the umm, policy and government.

✓ We usually talk on Saturdays about our majors, like mine is sex vision and hers is artificial intelligence, so we also chat about policy and government.

Tense and word choice errors: 'travel with the, with Saturday's topic' is incorrect—use 'talk on Saturdays about'; maintain present simple 'we usually talk'; 'I am... my sex vision major' should be 'mine is sex vision'; 'she is artificial intelligence' -> 'hers is artificial intelligence'; 'do have some chat with the policy and government' -> 'chat about policy and government'. Suggestions: use 'talk' or 'chat about' and possessive pronouns 'mine/hers' for majors, place time expressions correctly ('on Saturdays').

× Umm, I prefer to chat with only one friends, uh, which is my uh, who is my bestie because umm, compared with a group of people, maybe you don't know who will share your umm, privacy to others, but the only best thing you share, you can know her personality.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend, who is my bestie, because compared with a group of people you may not know who will share your private matters with others, but with just one close friend you can get to know her personality.

Singular/plural and pronoun use: 'one friends' should be singular 'one friend'; 'which is my... who is my bestie' needs 'who is my bestie'; 'privacy to others' is awkward—use 'share your private matters with others'; 'the only best thing you share' unclear—rephrased to 'with just one close friend you can get to know her personality'. Suggestions: ensure noun number matches numerals, use 'who' for people, and use clearer phrasing for privacy and knowing personality.

× Umm, I, I prefer to chat face to face because, umm, when uh, in the face to face sharing time, you can see what the, what's the images? I mean, what's the people shows on face, but it's not can be done in the social media.

✓ I prefer to chat face to face because during face-to-face conversations you can see people's expressions, which you cannot do on social media.

Tense and word form errors: 'in the face to face sharing time' is unnatural—use 'during face-to-face conversations'; 'what the images? I mean, what's the people shows on face' should be 'people's expressions' or 'facial expressions'; 'it's not can be done in the social media' -> 'you cannot do on social media'. Suggestions: use 'face-to-face' as adjective, 'during' for time periods, and 'facial expressions' for clarity; use modal 'cannot' correctly.

× An is not always happen but we do have some argue with each other and when we have the umm different opinion with one thing, maybe we'll we'll argue and but after they argue we all realize it and stay calm.

✓ It does not always happen, but we do sometimes argue with each other, and when we have different opinions about something, we may argue, but after arguing we realize it and stay calm.

Verb tense and form errors: 'An is not always happen' unclear—change to 'It does not always happen'; 'we do have some argue' should be 'we sometimes argue' or 'we do sometimes argue'; 'different opinion with one thing' -> 'different opinions about something'; 'we'll we'll argue and but after they argue we all realize it' -> 'we may argue, but after arguing we realize it and stay calm'. Suggestions: use correct auxiliary verbs for negation ('does not happen'), plural 'opinions', and consistent verb forms ('argue' vs 'arguing').