聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy by not repeating 'chatting' and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me stay connected with those who live far away, allowing us to maintain our friendship through social media.

建議: Your answer covers relevant topics but is somewhat repetitive and lacks clear linking words. Try to organize your ideas logically and use linking words to improve coherence. Also, correct grammar errors like 'advices' to 'advice'.

範例: I usually chat about our daily activities, future plans, and work. Additionally, we discuss any problems we face and offer each other advice.

建議: Your answer has filler words and unclear phrasing. Try to avoid fillers like 'uh' and improve sentence clarity. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly and concisely.

範例: I usually prefer group chats because they allow me to connect with several friends at once, saving time and making conversations more lively.

建議: Avoid filler words and repetition. Improve sentence structure for clarity and use linking words to contrast your preferences effectively.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more personal; however, if that's not possible, I use social media to stay in touch.

建議: Your answer is understandable but grammatically incorrect and awkward. Use correct tense and clearer phrasing. Provide a reason or example to enrich your response.

範例: I don't usually argue with my friends nowadays because we prefer to have friendly conversations and share our thoughts peacefully.

× Yes, I like that from chatting we can connect with friends who are in long distances.

✓ Yes, I like that through chatting we can connect with friends who are at long distances.

The preposition 'from' is incorrectly used here. The correct preposition to indicate the means by which something happens is 'through'. Also, 'in long distances' should be 'at long distances' to correctly express location or distance.

× Yes, I like that from chatting we can connect with friends who are in long distances.

✓ Yes, I like that through chatting we can connect with friends who are at long distance.

The phrase 'long distances' is plural but in this context, 'long distance' as an adjective phrase is more appropriate to describe the type of friends. Alternatively, 'at long distances' can be used but 'long distance' is more natural here.

× So we can continue our friendship by chatting by using social media.

✓ So we can continue our friendship by chatting using social media.

The phrase 'by chatting by using social media' is redundant. The preposition 'by' before 'using' is unnecessary. 'Chatting using social media' is more concise and grammatically correct.

× I chat with them about day-to-day activities, future plans and how they are working and any problems with them or discuss problems with them and get some advices.

✓ I chat with them about day-to-day activities, future plans, how they are working, any problems they have, or discuss problems with them and get some advice.

The pronoun 'them' is used awkwardly and repetitively. Also, 'advices' is incorrect as 'advice' is an uncountable noun. The sentence is also a run-on and needs clearer structure.

× ...and get some advices.

✓ ...and get some advice.

'Advice' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'advices'. Use 'some advice' instead.

× I usually use uh chat with group because uh, we can connect them, connect more friends with a small time by using group chats, so I prefer that.

✓ I usually chat with a group because we can connect with more friends in a short time by using group chats, so I prefer that.

The phrase 'use uh chat with group' is incorrect; 'chat with a group' is correct. 'Connect them' should be 'connect with them'. 'With a small time' should be 'in a short time'.

× I prefer to connect with them by face to face but but if uh not chance for that I choose to chat with them by using social media.

✓ I prefer to connect with them face to face, but if there is no chance for that, I choose to chat with them using social media.

The phrase 'by face to face' is incorrect; 'face to face' is used without a preposition. 'If uh not chance for that' is ungrammatical; it should be 'if there is no chance for that'. 'By using social media' can be simplified to 'using social media'.

× Actually not in this age I not prefer to argue with my friend.

✓ Actually, at this age, I do not prefer to argue with my friends.

The phrase 'not in this age' is awkward; 'at this age' is correct. 'I not prefer' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I do not prefer'. 'My friend' should be plural 'my friends' to match general meaning.