聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally relevant but contains some unclear and redundant phrases such as "It it is, it will" and lacks fluency. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise, avoiding repetition. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my close friends because it strengthens our bond. Moreover, these conversations often lead to spending more time together, which I find very enjoyable.

建議: Your answer is relevant and provides specific details, but the sentence structure is a bit awkward. Try to use clearer linking words and improve sentence flow. Also, avoid filler words like "well" and ensure grammar accuracy.

範例: We talk about various topics, but since I love football, we often discuss sports. Additionally, because my job is related to technology, we sometimes chat about the latest tech trends.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but contains some grammatical errors and hesitations. Try to avoid filler words like "uh" and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to clarify your preference and provide a clear example.

範例: I prefer chatting with one or two close friends because I am an introvert. For instance, when I go out with a large group, I usually find a few friends to talk to quietly.

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains many hesitations and filler words, which affect fluency. Try to speak more confidently and clearly. Use linking words to explain your preference and avoid repeating "uh" and "well."

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to see facial expressions, which makes conversations more enjoyable and meaningful.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct sentence structures. Avoid redundancy and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: I usually avoid arguing with my friends because I value our relationship. However, if I notice they are making a serious mistake, I might discuss it with them to help them understand my point of view.

× Well, I love speaking with my friends, especially if that person was close to me.

✓ Well, I love speaking with my friends, especially if that person is close to me.

The sentence refers to a present condition, so the verb should be in the present tense 'is' instead of past tense 'was' to maintain subject-verb agreement in the third person singular.

× It it is, it will.

✓ If it is, it will be.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'If' at the beginning and 'be' at the end completes the conditional sentence structure, making it grammatically correct.

× It is definitely a pleasure for me to speak with them and if it leads to hanging out with them more or going out with them, it definitely great experience.

✓ It is definitely a pleasure for me to speak with them, and if it leads to hanging out with them more or going out with them, it is definitely a great experience.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' before 'definitely great experience' and needs a comma before 'and' to separate the clauses properly.

× I prefer to chat with one or two person, especially my friends, because I am a introvert person.

✓ I prefer to chat with one or two people, especially my friends, because I am an introvert person.

The word 'person' should be plural 'people' when referring to more than one individual. Also, the article 'a' should be 'an' before a vowel sound in 'introvert'.

× because I am a introvert person.

✓ because I am an introvert person.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a word starting with a vowel sound like 'introvert'.

× if I go out well well with a bunch of friends, I prefer to, uh, grab one, one or two of them and speak with them quietly.

✓ if I go out well with a bunch of friends, I prefer to, uh, grab one or two of them and speak with them quietly.

The repeated 'well' is unnecessary and should be removed. Also, 'grab one, one or two' is redundant; 'grab one or two' is correct.

× if I see that person goes wrong in the life or in the even seeing well the mistake of my friends forced me to argue with them and talk them and make them in sense.

✓ if I see that person goes wrong in life or even see the mistakes of my friends, it forces me to argue with them, talk to them, and make them understand.

The original sentence has incorrect pronoun usage and awkward phrasing. 'Talk them' should be 'talk to them', and 'make them in sense' should be 'make them understand'. Also, verb forms and sentence structure are corrected for clarity.