聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammatical accuracy and clarity by using correct verb tenses and avoiding repetition. Also, make the answer more concise and natural by directly answering the question and providing specific details.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends every evening after school. We usually talk about interesting stories and experiences from medical school.

建議: Focus on clear sentence structure and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples of topics you discuss.

範例: I usually talk about what happened during my day with my friends. Sometimes, I also ask them questions about the subjects I need to study for the next day.

建議: Work on sentence fluency and clarity. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly and avoid vague expressions. Provide specific reasons for your preference.

範例: To be honest, I prefer chatting with a group of friends because they have different perspectives, which makes the conversation more interesting and informative.

建議: Improve grammatical accuracy and clarity. Use correct verb forms and expressions. Explain your preference clearly with supporting reasons.

範例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it allows me to see my friends' expressions and understand them better.

建議: Avoid hesitation and repetition. Structure your answer clearly by stating if you argue and under what circumstances, using linking words to connect ideas logically.

範例: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends when we have different opinions about a topic, especially before we make important decisions.

× I have always chat with my friend in the evening when I finish school

✓ I have always chatted with my friend in the evening when I finish school

The verb 'chat' should be in the past participle form 'chatted' to correctly follow the present perfect tense 'have always'.

× I always shared share with my friends about the story in medical school

✓ I always share with my friends about the stories in medical school

The verb 'shared share' is incorrect; it should be 'share'. Also, 'story' should be plural 'stories' to match 'friends' and the context of multiple stories.

× I I always share with share about what happened in my day with my friend

✓ I always share about what happened in my day with my friend

The repeated phrase 'share with share' is incorrect; it should be just 'share'.

× sometimes I can't ask all about the subject I have to study in next next day

✓ sometimes I can't ask about all the subjects I have to study the next day

The phrase 'ask all about' is incorrect; it should be 'ask about all'. Also, 'next next day' is redundant and should be 'the next day'.

× I prefer chat with a group of friends

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of friends

The verb 'chat' needs the infinitive form 'to chat' after 'prefer'.

× because in the group of friend has a lot of people and each other have one mindset

✓ because in the group of friends there are a lot of people and each has one mindset

'group of friend' should be 'group of friends' (plural). 'each other have' is incorrect; it should be 'each has'. Also, 'there are' is needed to indicate existence of people.

× I think they can give me a different

✓ I think they can give me a different perspective

The sentence is incomplete; 'a different' needs a noun to complete the meaning, such as 'perspective'.

× I'm am prefer communicate face to face thought for me when I am talk with my friend in reality

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because when I talk with my friend in person

'I'm am prefer' is incorrect; it should be 'I prefer'. 'communicate' needs 'to' before it. 'thought for me' is incorrect; 'because' fits better. 'when I am talk' should be 'when I talk'. 'in reality' is better expressed as 'in person'.

× I can seize of them in reality

✓ I can see them in person

'seize of' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'see'. 'in reality' is better expressed as 'in person'.

× sometimes, uh, so else when we have or when we have different, different opinions in, in the subject

✓ sometimes, uh, when we have different opinions on a subject

'so else' is incorrect and unnecessary. 'in the subject' should be 'on a subject'. Repetition of 'different' is redundant.