聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains many hesitations and filler words, which affects the natural flow. Try to make your sentences more concise and avoid repeating words. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it is both fun and relaxing. I can share details about my personal life and also get valuable advice from them, which helps me a lot.

建議: Your answer has many hesitations and repetitions, which makes it hard to follow. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect your points. Also, be specific about the topics you discuss.

範例: I usually chat with my friends about various topics. For example, I often ask for advice about my career, share my daily routines, and sometimes talk about happy moments in my life.

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains many hesitations and grammatical errors. Try to speak more confidently and use correct sentence structures. Also, use linking words to explain your reasons clearly.

範例: I prefer chatting with a group of people rather than just one friend because it allows me to gain different perspectives and learn more from everyone involved.

建議: Your answer is unclear and incomplete, with many hesitations and grammatical mistakes. Try to complete your thoughts fully and use clear, simple sentences. Explain why you prefer face-to-face communication with specific reasons.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can see the other person's facial expressions and body language, which helps me understand their feelings better.

建議: Your answer is repetitive and incomplete, making it difficult to understand. Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid repeating words. Provide specific reasons or examples when explaining why you argue with friends.

範例: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends when we have different opinions or when I feel disrespected. However, we usually resolve our disagreements quickly.

× Yes, I like chatting with friends because it was, was so much fun that, uh, uh, and I can share a share, share a lot about my, my personal life and as well as I can, uh, I can, uh, get advice from my friends.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with friends because it is so much fun, and I can share a lot about my personal life as well as get advice from my friends.

The original sentence incorrectly uses past tense 'was' when referring to a general present habit. The verb should be in present tense 'is' to match the ongoing action. Also, repeated words and filler sounds were removed for clarity.

× So who chatting with, with friends is, is, is very relaxing and so much fun.

✓ So chatting with friends is very relaxing and so much fun.

The phrase 'who chatting with' is incorrect; 'chatting with friends' is the correct form. The unnecessary repetition of words was removed to improve clarity.

× I usually chest about with my friends is, is is sometime sometime I I'm and I ask advice about my career and sometime I I share with my my my daily, daily routines and and and sometimes I share my happiness with them.

✓ I usually chat with my friends. Sometimes I ask for advice about my career, sometimes I share my daily routines, and sometimes I share my happiness with them.

The verb 'chest' is incorrect; it should be 'chat'. The sentence structure was fragmented and repetitive. Also, 'ask advice' should be 'ask for advice'. The corrected sentence uses proper verb forms and clearer structure.

× Uh, I'm prefer for a chat with, with so many people rather than that only went because it's so much, uh, uh, talking with a group can gain a lot of knowledge and a lot of perspective from, from the people and, and who you share with and, umm.

✓ I prefer to chat with many people rather than only one because talking with a group can help me gain a lot of knowledge and perspectives from different people.

The phrase 'I'm prefer for a chat' is incorrect; it should be 'I prefer to chat'. 'Only went' is a mispronunciation of 'only one'. The sentence was restructured for clarity and correct preposition use.

× I prefer for face to face option better because, uh, you can, uh, guess, uh, guess the person when they went to see and and and seeing their phrase and, and sometimes if they, if they, when I said something, something that they don't like and, and and can.

✓ I prefer the face-to-face option because you can observe the person when you see them and see their expressions. Sometimes, if I say something they don't like, it is easier to understand in person.

'Prefer for face to face option better' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer the face-to-face option'. 'Guess the person when they went to see' is unclear and corrected to 'observe the person when you see them'. The sentence was clarified and corrected for preposition and article use.

× Uh, yes, sometime I argue with my friends if we don't, don't, uh, if we don't match, match the idea about same things. And sometimes, sometimes they sometime when I don't get respect as I went, then I I argue with my friends about, about, about things that.

✓ Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends if we don't agree on the same ideas. And sometimes, when I don't feel respected, I argue with my friends about those things.

The phrase 'if we don't match the idea about same things' is incorrect; it should be 'if we don't agree on the same ideas'. 'Don't get respect as I went' is unclear and corrected to 'don't feel respected'. The sentence was restructured for clarity and correct tense usage.