聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が多いです。例えば、「I like chatting with my friend every time」は「I like chatting with my friends often」などに修正し、また「using on the phone or such as lines on Instagram」は「using the phone or apps like LINE and Instagram」と具体的に言い換えると自然です。

範例: Yes, I do. I enjoy chatting with my friends often, whether face-to-face or using the phone and apps like LINE or Instagram.

建議: 内容が不明瞭で文法も誤っています。話題を明確にし、具体的な内容を簡潔に述べることが必要です。例えば、「I usually talk about our hobbies, especially anime and comics, because my friends love them. We often share information about new series.」のように整理しましょう。

範例: I usually talk about our hobbies, especially anime and comics, because my friends love them. We often share information about new series.

建議: 文法の誤りと意味の不明瞭さがあります。「I prefer talking with one person because I can concentrate better and don't have to pay attention to others. This allows me to think freely and focus on the conversation.」のように簡潔に表現しましょう。

範例: I prefer talking with one person because I can concentrate better and don't have to pay attention to others. This allows me to think freely and focus on the conversation.

建議: 文が長くて不自然で、意味が伝わりにくいです。簡潔に「I prefer face-to-face communication because I can see my friends' expressions, which helps me understand their feelings better. Social media makes it difficult to do that.」と述べると良いです。

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can see my friends' expressions, which helps me understand their feelings better. Social media makes it difficult to do that.

建議: 内容が不明瞭で文法も誤っています。具体的な例を簡潔に述べることが大切です。例えば、「Yes, sometimes I get angry when my friends are late because I don't like waiting. This can cause arguments.」のように表現しましょう。

範例: Yes, sometimes I get angry when my friends are late because I don't like waiting. This can cause arguments.

× Yes I do, I like chatting with my friend every time so I talk face to face and using on the phone or such as lines on Instagram.

✓ Yes I do, I like chatting with my friends every time so I talk face to face and use the phone or apps such as Line on Instagram.

'friend' should be plural 'friends' because chatting usually involves more than one friend. 'using on the phone' is incorrect; it should be 'use the phone'. Also, 'lines on Instagram' is unclear; 'apps such as Line on Instagram' is more appropriate.

× I usually talk about the friends talks on the our hobbies often.

✓ I usually talk about my friends' talks on our hobbies often.

'the friends talks' is incorrect; it should be 'my friends' talks' to show possession and plural form. 'the our hobbies' is incorrect; 'our hobbies' is correct.

× My friends loves anime and comics, so I often talk about the dot and and we share the information about the.

✓ My friends love anime and comics, so I often talk about that and we share information about them.

'friends' is plural, so the verb should be 'love' not 'loves'. 'the dot and and' is unclear and likely a typo; replaced with 'that'. 'the information about the' is incomplete; corrected to 'information about them'.

× I prefer talking with one people.

✓ I prefer talking with one person.

'people' is plural; when referring to one individual, use 'person'.

× This is because I can concentrate on the talking and I can't.

✓ This is because I can concentrate on the conversation and I don't have to.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'I can't' is ambiguous; corrected to 'I don't have to' to clarify meaning.

× I don't need to pay attention to other people so I can free thinking and only talking about.

✓ I don't need to pay attention to other people, so I can think freely and talk only about what I want.

'free thinking' should be 'think freely' to be grammatically correct. The sentence was incomplete; added 'what I want' for clarity.

× I like talking face to face this is because in social media I can't see the face of my friends so I can't guess the P friends feelings so it is very difficult for me to talk so I probably.

✓ I like talking face to face because on social media I can't see my friends' faces, so I can't guess their feelings. Therefore, it is very difficult for me to talk.

Run-on sentence corrected by splitting into clearer sentences. 'P friends feelings' corrected to 'my friends' feelings'. 'so I probably' is incomplete and removed.

× Yes I do for example, I angry with my friends because of late I don't I can't wait many times so if if my friend read me oh wait it is very.

✓ Yes, I do. For example, I get angry with my friends when they are late because I can't wait many times. If my friend asks me to wait, it is very difficult.

'I angry' is incorrect; should be 'I get angry'. Mixed tenses and incomplete sentences corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.