聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Avoid repetition and grammatical errors. Use correct verb forms and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of repeating 'chat', say 'We often chat over coffee and meals, which helps me relax and unwind.'

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it's a great way to catch up and share our experiences. We often chat over coffee and meals, which helps me relax and unwind.

建議: Improve sentence structure and avoid incorrect word usage like 'check chat'. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific. For example, 'We usually talk about our daily lives, news stories, and recent events when we meet over coffee or meals.'

範例: We usually talk about our daily lives, news stories, and recent events when we meet over coffee or meals. It's always enjoyable to catch up with my friends this way.

建議: Correct verb usage and sentence structure are needed. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid awkward phrases like 'check with'. For example, 'I prefer chatting with a group because it allows me to share different experiences and learn from others.'

範例: I prefer chatting with a group because it allows me to share different experiences and learn from others. For instance, we often discuss recent events and meals we've tried, which makes the conversation relaxed and enjoyable.

建議: Avoid incorrect phrases like 'convenient pipe' and improve sentence flow. Use linking words and be more specific. For example, 'I prefer communicating via social media because it's a convenient way to stay in touch with friends and family who live far away.'

範例: I prefer communicating via social media because it's a convenient way to stay in touch with friends and family who live far away. We can easily share recent events and stories through these platforms.

建議: Improve sentence clarity and grammar. Avoid awkward phrases like 'it's a stronger our relationship'. Use linking words properly. For example, 'I sometimes argue with my friends, especially when we disagree or notice mistakes. Although challenging, I believe this helps strengthen our relationship.'

範例: I sometimes argue with my friends, especially when we disagree or notice mistakes. Although it can be challenging, I believe these discussions help strengthen our relationship.

× We always chat chat with over coffee and meals.

✓ We always chat over coffee and meals.

The phrase 'chat chat with over' is incorrect and redundant. The verb 'chat' should be followed directly by the preposition 'over' to indicate the context of chatting. Removing the extra 'chat' and 'with' corrects the sentence.

× It make me relax and unwind.

✓ It makes me relax and unwind.

The subject 'It' is third person singular, so the verb should be 'makes' to agree in number and person.

× We usually check about our daily lives with my friends.

✓ We usually chat about our daily lives with my friends.

The verb 'check' is incorrect in this context; 'chat about' is the correct collocation to express discussing daily lives. Also, 'check about' is not a correct phrase.

× For example, we always check chat with over the coffee and meals and discuss about the news stories and what happened during this time.

✓ For example, we always chat over coffee and meals and discuss the news stories and what happened during this time.

The phrase 'check chat with over' is incorrect and redundant. 'Chat over' is the correct phrase. Also, 'discuss about' is incorrect; 'discuss' does not require 'about'.

× It's a really nice to chatting with with my friend.

✓ It's really nice to chat with my friend.

The phrase 'to chatting' is incorrect; after 'to' (infinitive marker), the base form 'chat' should be used. Also, 'with with' is a repetition and should be corrected to a single 'with'.

× I prefer check with a group of people because it made me to share different experiences and learn more from each other.

✓ I prefer chatting with a group of people because it allows me to share different experiences and learn more from each other.

The verb 'check' is incorrect here; 'chatting' is the correct gerund form after 'prefer'. Also, 'made me to share' is incorrect; 'allows me to share' is more appropriate to express the meaning.

× because it made me to share different experiences and learn more from each other.

✓ because it makes me share different experiences and learn more from each other.

The verb 'made' is past tense, but the context is present preference, so 'makes' (present tense) is correct. Also, 'to' after 'made me' is unnecessary; 'makes me share' is correct.

× For example, we can also talk about the what happened recently and meals we have tried.

✓ For example, we can also talk about what happened recently and the meals we have tried.

The article 'the' before 'what happened' is incorrect and should be removed. Also, 'meals we have tried' should be preceded by 'the' to specify particular meals.

× It's a really relaxed and unwind.

✓ It's really relaxing and unwinding.

'Relaxed' and 'unwind' are incorrect forms here. The correct adjectives are 'relaxing' and 'unwinding' to describe the experience.

× it's a really convenient pipe to contact with our friends and family who stay far away from me.

✓ it's a really convenient way to contact our friends and family who live far away from me.

'Pipe' is incorrect; 'way' is appropriate. Also, 'contact with' is incorrect; 'contact' is a transitive verb and does not require 'with'. 'Stay' is better replaced by 'live' for permanent residence.

× We can also share about the what happened recently and share the stories via the social media.

✓ We can also share what happened recently and share stories via social media.

'Share about' is incorrect; 'share' is used directly with the object. 'The what happened' is incorrect; 'the' should be removed. 'The social media' is incorrect; 'social media' is uncountable and does not need 'the'.

× I do sometimes argue with my friends, especially when we're facing the disagreement and making mistakes.

✓ I sometimes argue with my friends, especially when we face disagreements and make mistakes.

'Facing the disagreement' is incorrect; 'face disagreements' is correct. Also, 'making mistakes' should be parallel with 'face disagreements' and use present tense.

× although it can be challenging, but I think it's a stronger our relationship.

✓ although it can be challenging, I think it makes our relationship stronger.

Using both 'although' and 'but' together is redundant; one should be removed. 'It's a stronger our relationship' is incorrect; the correct form is 'it makes our relationship stronger'.