聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear but contains some awkward phrasing and redundancy, such as "helps to say, stay connected." Try to use more natural expressions and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends during my free time because it helps me stay connected and share experiences with them.

建議: Your answer has several grammatical errors and unclear phrases, such as "chat about on different topics" and "I'm ha share." Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, be specific and avoid vague expressions.

範例: I usually chat about various topics, such as our studies, daily tasks, and how things are going in my friends' lives. Sometimes, I also share my happiness and sorrows with them.

建議: Your answer is quite detailed but contains some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing, such as "I have one close friend is none other than my husband." Try to use simpler, clearer sentences and correct verb forms. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

範例: I am an introverted person, so I prefer chatting with just one close friend, who is my husband. I feel comfortable sharing my happiness and sorrows with him, and he always tries to comfort me when I feel sad.

建議: Your answer has some unclear phrases like "hacked schedule" and inconsistent verb tenses. Try to use correct expressions and maintain consistent tense. Also, organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words.

範例: Nowadays, because of my busy schedule, I don't have much time for face-to-face conversations. Therefore, I usually prefer to communicate via social media during my free time at work or at home. I often call my friends to ask how their lives are going.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains several errors, such as "lonely delta" and "do not have enough person to talk." Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct vocabulary and grammar. Also, avoid redundancy and organize your answer logically with linking words.

範例: Sometimes, when I feel lonely or upset, I argue with my friends because I don't have many people to talk to. However, when they call me, I usually share my feelings and sorrows with them.

× During my free time, I really like to chat with my friends because it helps to say, stay connected with friends.

✓ During my free time, I really like chatting with my friends because it helps me stay connected with them.

The phrase 'helps to say, stay connected' is incorrect. The verb 'help' is often followed by the gerund form without 'to'. Also, 'helps me stay connected' is the correct structure. Additionally, 'with friends' is repetitive; 'with them' refers back to friends.

× I usually chat about on different topics for example about study, daily tasks and also how's everything going on my Friends Life as well as sometimes I'm ha share with my happiness and sorrows.

✓ I usually chat about different topics, for example, studies, daily tasks, and also how everything is going in my friends' lives. Sometimes I share my happiness and sorrows as well.

The phrase 'chat about on' is incorrect; 'chat about' is sufficient. 'About study' should be 'studies' to refer to the subject generally. 'How's everything going on my Friends Life' is incorrect; it should be 'how everything is going in my friends' lives'. Also, 'I'm ha share' is a typo and should be 'I share'.

× I have one close friend is none other than my husband.

✓ I have one close friend who is none other than my husband.

The sentence lacks a relative pronoun 'who' to connect the clauses properly. Also, 'friend is none other than' needs 'who' for correct sentence structure.

× Every time when I feel sad, my husband try to convince me.

✓ Every time when I feel sad, my husband tries to convince me.

The verb 'try' should be in third person singular form 'tries' to agree with the singular subject 'my husband'.

× Nowadays, during hacked schedule, I do not have enough time to talk face to face.

✓ Nowadays, during a hectic schedule, I do not have enough time to talk face to face.

The phrase 'hacked schedule' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'hectic schedule' meaning busy or intense.

× I usually prefer social media whenever I have a free time during my work or when I was at home.

✓ I usually prefer social media whenever I have free time during my work or when I am at home.

'A free time' is incorrect because 'time' is uncountable here; it should be 'free time'. Also, 'when I was at home' should be 'when I am at home' to maintain present tense consistency.

× That time I usually call my friends and ask him how's going in their life.

✓ At that time, I usually call my friends and ask them how things are going in their lives.

'Ask him' is incorrect because 'friends' is plural; it should be 'ask them'. Also, 'how's going in their life' is ungrammatical; it should be 'how things are going in their lives'.

× Sometimes when I feel aggressive and lonely delta I argue with my friends because I do not have enough person to talk in my life.

✓ Sometimes, when I feel aggressive and lonely, I argue with my friends because I do not have enough people to talk to in my life.

The word 'delta' is incorrect and likely a typo. 'Person' should be plural 'people' to match the context. Also, 'talk in my life' should be 'talk to in my life' to use the correct preposition.

× So whenever my friend calls me on that time then I argue and share my sorrows with them.

✓ So, whenever my friend calls me at that time, I argue and share my sorrows with them.

The phrase 'on that time then' is incorrect; it should be 'at that time'. Also, 'whenever' and 'then' together are redundant; removing 'then' improves clarity.