聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to avoid filler sounds like 'MMM' and repeated words such as 'I I'. Also, make your answer more concise and structured by starting with a clear topic sentence and then adding supporting details with linking words.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it is a relaxing activity. Moreover, it allows me to learn different perspectives and experiences from them.

建議: Avoid starting sentences with conjunctions like 'And' or 'But'. Use linking words to connect ideas clearly. Also, clarify and complete your thoughts to avoid ambiguity, such as explaining 'performances within' more clearly.

範例: We usually share details about our daily lives and current events. Additionally, I enjoy discussing my ongoing creative projects, such as commissions, exhibitions, and performances.

建議: Reduce filler words like 'uh' and improve grammar, for example, use 'responding' instead of 'responsing'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid sentence fragments.

範例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because it helps me focus on responding and addressing my concerns. When talking to many people, I sometimes get distracted and find it hard to speak at the right moment.

建議: Improve sentence structure and vocabulary for clarity. For example, say 'face-to-face' instead of 'face by face talk'. Avoid awkward phrases like 'exchange idea' and use linking words to explain reasons clearly.

範例: Definitely, I prefer to communicate face-to-face because social media exchanges often lack emotional connection, which can lead to misunderstandings and conflicts.

建議: Avoid repetition such as 'if if' and improve sentence clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and express your feelings more naturally.

範例: No, I don't usually argue with friends because I believe that most issues are not important enough to cause conflicts. Besides, arguing makes me feel tired and frustrated.

× I think it's a really relaxing activity and also I I am happy to learn different perspectives and experiences from my friends.

✓ I think it's a really relaxing activity and also I am happy to learn different perspectives and experiences from my friends.

The repetition of 'I' is unnecessary and incorrect. Removing the extra 'I' corrects the sentence structure.

× And we usually share our daily lives and current events. But I also enjoy discussing my ongoing project, especially something about my creative project like commissions, exhibitions, performances within.

✓ We usually share our daily lives and current events. But I also enjoy discussing my ongoing projects, especially things about my creative projects like commissions, exhibitions, and performances.

Starting a sentence with 'And' is generally discouraged in formal speech. Also, 'something about my creative project' is vague and ungrammatical; pluralizing 'projects' and clarifying the list improves clarity and grammar.

× But I also enjoy discussing my ongoing project, especially something about my creative project like commissions, exhibitions, performances within.

✓ But I also enjoy discussing my ongoing projects, especially things about my creative projects like commissions, exhibitions, and performances.

The singular 'project' should be plural 'projects' to match the plural examples given (commissions, exhibitions, performances). Also, 'something' should be plural 'things' to agree with the plural noun.

× I prefer to chat with only one friend because that can make me focus on responsing and addressing my concerns.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because that can make me focus on responding and addressing my concerns.

The word 'responsing' is incorrect; the correct gerund form of the verb 'respond' is 'responding'.

× If I am talking to, uh, too many people, Sometimes I got distracted and also I don't know how to, uh, say something at the right moment.

✓ If I am talking to, uh, too many people, sometimes I get distracted and also I don't know how to, uh, say something at the right moment.

'Sometimes' should not be capitalized mid-sentence. 'Got distracted' is past tense and inconsistent with the present continuous 'am talking'; 'get distracted' is the correct present tense form.

× Definitely, I prefer to talk to someone face by face talk.

✓ Definitely, I prefer to talk to someone face to face.

The phrase 'face by face talk' is incorrect. The correct idiom is 'face to face' to describe direct communication.

× The exchange idea on social media is a terrible experience.

✓ Exchanging ideas on social media is a terrible experience.

'The exchange idea' is ungrammatical; the gerund form 'Exchanging ideas' correctly functions as the subject of the sentence.

× You cannot really to feel emotion and concerns, so it always cause conflicts.

✓ You cannot really feel emotions and concerns, so it always causes conflicts.

The infinitive marker 'to' is unnecessary after 'cannot really'. Also, 'emotion' should be plural 'emotions' to match 'concerns'. 'Cause' should be 'causes' to agree with singular subject 'it'.

× I think there's no such important things that you really need to argue to your friends, if if not very important.

✓ I think there are no such important things that you really need to argue about with your friends, if they are not very important.

'There's' (there is) is incorrect with plural 'things'; it should be 'there are'. 'Argue to' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'argue about'. Also, the sentence needs 'if they are not very important' for clarity and grammar.

× And so argue makes me feel very tired and frustrated.

✓ And so arguing makes me feel very tired and frustrated.

'Argue' should be in gerund form 'arguing' to function as the subject of the sentence.