聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and redundant phrases such as 'while we are chatting' repeated twice. Also, try to use more varied vocabulary and provide a more specific example to enrich your answer.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it allows us to share interesting stories and exchange ideas. For instance, last week we discussed our favorite books, which helped me discover new authors.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and contains many hesitations and repetitions. Try to organize your ideas clearly and avoid filler sounds. Also, complete your sentences fully and provide specific examples to make your answer more coherent and informative.

範例: Usually, I like to chat about food, especially desserts and main courses. For example, we often exchange recipes using seasonal ingredients, which helps me try new dishes at home.

建議: Your answer is relevant but incomplete and contains many hesitations and repetitions. Try to finish your thoughts clearly and avoid filler words. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific examples to support your preference.

範例: It depends on the topic. For personal matters, I prefer chatting one-on-one with my best friend. However, for topics like politics, I enjoy group discussions because they offer diverse opinions.

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid repeating phrases like 'while we are communicating with social media'. Use more concise language and add a linking word to improve coherence.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it reduces misunderstandings. Moreover, seeing facial expressions helps me understand the other person better than communicating through social media.

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure. Provide a clear and polite way to express disagreement with friends.

範例: I usually avoid arguing with friends, but sometimes I need to explain my point clearly when there is a misunderstanding or incorrect information.

× Usually I would like to chat with, uh, chat about foods, specially desserts, uh, and also I like, like to chat about main courses and the recipes of that and about the seasonal ingredients and you, how to you, how to, how to.

✓ Usually I would like to chat about food, especially desserts, and also I like to chat about main courses, their recipes, and seasonal ingredients.

The word 'foods' is generally uncountable when referring to types of food, so 'food' is correct. 'Specially' should be 'especially' to indicate emphasis. 'The recipes of that' is unclear; 'their recipes' correctly refers to the main courses. The phrase 'and you, how to you, how to, how to' is incomplete and unclear, so it was omitted for clarity.

× If I'm chatting about a personal things, I would like to chat with the chat with only one person friend, uh, just like my best friend umm, if I'm talking about umm, politics or the common areas politics or.

✓ If I'm chatting about personal things, I would like to chat with only one person, just like my best friend. If I'm talking about politics or common areas of politics, ...

The phrase 'a personal things' mixes singular and plural; it should be 'personal things' without 'a'. 'The chat with only one person friend' is redundant and awkward; 'chat with only one person' is clearer. The sentence is incomplete at the end, but the correction improves grammatical structure.

× I think face to face communication is more effective than via social media because social media, while we are communicating with the social media, it can be many misunderstandings and also with the face to face communication, we can see their expressions.

✓ I think face-to-face communication is more effective than communication via social media because, while communicating through social media, there can be many misunderstandings, and with face-to-face communication, we can see their expressions.

The phrase 'while we are communicating with the social media' is incorrect; 'communicating through social media' is appropriate. 'It can be many misunderstandings' is ungrammatical; 'there can be many misunderstandings' is correct. 'Face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective.

× Are you sure? Not going to argue with friends, but sometimes we have to explain very hardly uh when they are having a misunderstanding or in a wrong thoughts.

✓ Are you sure? I don't usually argue with friends, but sometimes we have to explain very firmly when they have misunderstandings or wrong thoughts.

'Not going to argue' is incomplete; 'I don't usually argue' is clearer. 'Explain very hardly' is incorrect; 'hardly' means 'barely' and does not fit here. 'Explain very firmly' or 'explain strongly' is appropriate. 'In a wrong thoughts' is incorrect; 'have misunderstandings or wrong thoughts' is correct.