聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to avoid repetition and unclear words. Use clearer expressions and avoid redundancy. Also, correct spelling mistakes like 'surcast' (probably meant 'sarcastic'). Keep your answer concise and natural.

範例: Actually, I don't enjoy chatting much because I tend to overshare my personal experiences, and sometimes my friends make sarcastic comments about that.

建議: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Be more specific and concise in your answer.

範例: We usually chat about Hollywood gossip, and besides that, we share academic information to help each other improve our skills and succeed in our studies.

建議: Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use clear and natural expressions. Provide a complete answer with supporting details and linking words.

範例: I prefer chatting with one friend because the conversation is more meaningful, and we can share our emotions deeply, which strengthens our bond.

建議: Reduce filler words and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Try to use more precise vocabulary.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because social media interactions often lack emotional depth, making physical conversations more genuine and effective.

建議: Avoid repetition and filler words. Use clearer and more natural expressions. Explain your reasons with linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends, especially when discussing my opinions, because I want to defend my views and maintain my self-respect.

× Actually I don't like chatting with my friends because when it comes to that myself always over share over share the details and my personal experiences.

✓ Actually I don't like chatting with my friends because when it comes to that I always overshare the details and my personal experiences.

The reflexive pronoun 'myself' is incorrectly used here; the subject pronoun 'I' should be used instead. Also, 'over share' should be one word 'overshare' as a verb. Using the correct pronoun clarifies the subject performing the action.

× So they would always try to surcast at me on my overshared details.

✓ So they would always try to sarcast at me on my overshared details.

The word 'surcast' is incorrect; likely the intended word is 'sarcast' or 'make sarcastic remarks'. However, 'sarcast' is not a verb in English. A better correction would be 'So they would always try to be sarcastic about my overshared details.' The original sentence has a vocabulary error rather than a grammar problem, but it affects clarity.

× We always used to chat about, uh, gossips from Hollywood specially, uh, so other than that, we always, uh, share our, uh, academic related, related information among us to develop our academic skills and, uh, as they will be very helpful in our education as well.

✓ We always used to chat about, uh, gossip from Hollywood especially, uh, and other than that, we always share our academic-related information among us to develop our academic skills, and it is very helpful in our education as well.

The phrase 'used to' indicates past habitual action, but 'always' with 'used to' is redundant. Also, 'gossips' should be 'gossip' as an uncountable noun. 'Specially' should be 'especially'. The phrase 'academic related, related information' is repetitive; 'academic-related information' is correct. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× I prefer to chat with a single person because it will be very profound and the communication, the meaning and the bond between our, between our us, between us will be magnificent and memorable.

✓ I prefer to chat with a single person because it will be very profound and the communication, the meaning, and the bond between us will be magnificent and memorable.

The phrase 'between our, between our us, between us' is redundant and incorrect. The correct pronoun phrase is 'between us'. Removing redundancy improves clarity and correctness.

× So and we will be shared our emotions and.

✓ So we will share our emotions.

The original sentence is incomplete and has incorrect verb form 'will be shared'. The correct structure is 'we will share' to indicate future action. Removing unnecessary conjunctions and completing the sentence improves clarity.

× Actually, I prefer to communicate face to face because communication over the Internet or social media will be superficial.

✓ Actually, I prefer to communicate face-to-face because communication over the Internet or social media is superficial.

'Face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective or adverb. Also, 'will be' is changed to 'is' to indicate a general truth rather than future tense.

× So as they uh tend to perform lack of emotions, therefore I think uh, physical communication is the quite best method for me.

✓ So as they tend to lack emotions, I think physical communication is the best method for me.

The phrase 'perform lack of emotions' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'lack emotions'. 'The quite best' is incorrect; it should be 'the best'. Also, 'therefore' is redundant after 'so'. Removing filler words improves clarity.

× Yeah, in some cases I argue because when it comes to a question related to my own opinion opinions, I would always try to argue and prove myself correct.

✓ Yeah, in some cases I argue because when it comes to questions related to my own opinions, I always try to argue and prove myself correct.

'A question' should be plural 'questions' to match 'opinions'. 'Would always try' is changed to 'always try' to maintain present tense consistency. Removing redundancy improves clarity.

× That's why I always get into arguments uh, uh, especially because of my self value.

✓ That's why I always get into arguments, especially because of my self-value.

'My self value' should be hyphenated as 'my self-value' to form a compound noun. Removing filler words and adding a comma improves sentence flow.