聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to reduce filler words like 'uh' and 'and' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, organize your ideas clearly by starting with a direct answer and then providing specific reasons or examples. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear endings.

範例: Yes, I definitely enjoy chatting with my friends because I am an outgoing person. Talking with them allows me to learn new things and gain different perspectives. It also helps me generate new ideas, which I find very valuable.

建議: Avoid repeating words and incomplete sentences. Provide a clear topic sentence and then support it with specific examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Usually, I chat with my friends about important topics such as politics and the law and order situation in our country. Sometimes, we also discuss work-related issues like law enforcement and mob control techniques, since many of my friends work in these fields.

建議: Try to avoid sentence fragments and improve grammar, such as subject-verb agreement. Use linking words to connect your ideas and complete your thoughts clearly.

範例: I usually prefer chatting with a group of people because it allows me to hear different ideas and perspectives. Most of my friends work in various capacities, such as district police and metropolitan police, so our discussions are quite diverse and informative.

建議: Avoid hesitation and repetition to improve fluency. Provide a clear preference and explain reasons with specific examples. Complete your sentences to avoid abrupt endings.

範例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it feels more personal. However, nowadays it is difficult to meet in person often, so I use social media platforms like Facebook and other online tools to stay in touch with my friends.

建議: Reduce repetition and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to show contrast and conclusion. Finish your thoughts completely to make your answer coherent.

範例: Yes, I often argue with my friends to get genuine ideas on a topic. When we discuss important issues, we share our opinions and sometimes agree or disagree. In the end, we usually reach a consensus or better understanding.

× I enjoy too, uh, chat with my friends as I'm outgoing.

✓ I also enjoy chatting with my friends as I'm outgoing.

The verb 'enjoy' should be followed by the '-ing' form of the verb, so 'chat' should be 'chatting'. Also, 'too' is better replaced with 'also' for clarity.

× So I talk, it gives me opportunity to learn new things, new perspectives from my friend and to generate new idea as also.

✓ So I talk, it gives me the opportunity to learn new things, new perspectives from my friends and to generate new ideas as well.

'Opportunity' and 'idea' need the definite article 'the' and should be pluralized to 'opportunity' and 'ideas' to match the context. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends' because multiple perspectives are implied. 'As also' is incorrect; 'as well' is the correct phrase.

× And the most of the cases, uh, which at.

✓ And in most cases, uh, that happens.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. It needs restructuring to form a complete and meaningful sentence.

× Most of the cases I usually chat with my friends about some important issues like the politics, the law and order situation of our country and and and and sometimes we discuss about the issues related to our jobs like law enforcement and mob control technique.

✓ In most cases, I usually chat with my friends about some important issues like politics, the law and order situation of our country, and sometimes we discuss issues related to our jobs like law enforcement and mob control techniques.

'Most of the cases' should be 'In most cases'. 'Discuss about' is incorrect; 'discuss' does not require 'about'. 'The politics' should be 'politics' without 'the'. 'Mob control technique' should be plural 'techniques' to match the context.

× So as most of my friends are fully.

✓ So, most of my friends are fully involved.

The sentence is incomplete and needs a predicate to be complete and meaningful.

× Because most of my friend they work in a different capacities.

✓ Because most of my friends work in different capacities.

'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match 'most of'. 'A different capacities' is incorrect; 'different capacities' without 'a' is correct.

× Some work in district police, some works in Metropolitan Police.

✓ Some work in district police, some work in Metropolitan Police.

The verb should agree with the plural subject 'some'; therefore, 'works' should be 'work'.

× So when we chat we get the different.

✓ So when we chat, we get different perspectives.

The sentence is incomplete and needs an object to complete the meaning.

× But nowadays it, it become very hard for us to keep in touch face to face.

✓ But nowadays it becomes very hard for us to keep in touch face to face.

The verb 'become' should be in the third person singular present tense 'becomes' to agree with the subject 'it'.

× So with the blessing of Internet and and Facebooks or other social platform, we can communicate via online.

✓ So with the blessing of the Internet and Facebook or other social platforms, we can communicate online.

'The Internet' requires the definite article 'the'. 'Facebooks' should be singular 'Facebook'. 'Social platform' should be plural 'social platforms'. 'Communicate via online' is incorrect; 'communicate online' is correct.

× So it's it's it's really.

✓ So it's really helpful.

The sentence is incomplete and needs a complement to complete the thought.

× I guess that I always argue with my friend because to to get the genuine idea from a topic.

✓ I guess that I always argue with my friends to get genuine ideas from a topic.

'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the context. 'Idea' should be plural 'ideas' because multiple ideas are implied. 'Because to to get' is redundant; 'to get' suffices.

× When we discuss an important issues I submit my opinion and at the same time my other friends to also submit their opinions.

✓ When we discuss important issues, I submit my opinion and at the same time my other friends also submit their opinions.

'An important issues' is incorrect; 'important issues' without 'an' is correct. 'My other friends to also submit' should be 'my other friends also submit' for correct verb form and word order.

× So we we agree and disagree with our post opinion and at the end we come.

✓ So we agree and disagree with each other's opinions, and in the end, we come to a conclusion.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. It needs restructuring to express the intended meaning clearly.