聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally natural and relevant, but avoid filler words like 'Uh' and try to be more concise. Also, clarify the last sentence for better effectiveness, for example, specify how chatting helps you stay connected and support each other.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends almost every day, especially my classmates. We discuss our daily lives, share our passions, and collaborate on group projects. This helps us stay connected and support each other academically and personally.

建議: Try to use plural forms correctly (e.g., 'topics') and avoid repetition of words like 'like'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, be more specific about the topics and give examples to enrich your answer.

範例: We usually chat about various topics such as our education, including how teachers and the school operate. Additionally, we discuss our friends' personalities and share our opinions and ideas. Sometimes, we also share stories from our past experiences.

建議: Good answer with clear structure and relevant details. To improve, correct minor grammar errors (e.g., 'a platform like Facebook or Xello') and use linking words like 'however' to contrast your preferences more smoothly.

範例: It largely depends on my mood. I usually chat with a group of friends on platforms like Facebook or Xello because it's fun and lively. However, when I feel down or want to discuss personal matters, I prefer one-to-one conversations, usually with my desk mate.

建議: Your answer is clear but could be more concise and structured. Use linking words like 'but' and 'now' effectively to show contrast. Also, avoid unnecessary phrases like 'like when speaking'.

範例: In the past, I was quite timid and preferred communicating via social media. But now, I have regained my confidence and feel more comfortable speaking face-to-face with my friends, so I prefer meeting in person.

建議: Avoid filler words like 'umm' and improve grammar, for example, say 'accept my opinion' instead of 'accept with me'. Also, explain more about how you handle disagreements to provide specific supporting details.

範例: Fortunately, I rarely argue with my friends because when we have different opinions, I consider their feelings and try to find the best solution. As a result, they usually accept my point of view.

× We chat about various topic, it may be our like education, like how the teacher and the school works or maybe about our friends, their personality and we like express our own opinions and ideas.

✓ We chat about various topics, such as education, like how the teacher and the school work, or maybe about our friends, their personalities, and we like to express our own opinions and ideas.

The word 'topic' should be plural 'topics' because 'various' indicates more than one. 'Works' should be 'work' because 'teacher and the school' together form a plural subject. 'Personality' should be plural 'personalities' to match 'friends'. Also, 'like express' should be 'like to express' to correctly use the verb after 'like'.

× Sometimes we also like share our story from the past.

✓ Sometimes we also like to share our stories from the past.

'Story' should be plural 'stories' because it refers to multiple experiences. Also, 'like share' should be 'like to share' to correctly use the verb after 'like'.

× I usually share with my group of friends on platform like a Facebook or Xello because it's fun and lively to do it.

✓ I usually share with my group of friends on platforms like Facebook or Xello because it's fun and lively to do it.

'Platform' should be plural 'platforms' because more than one platform is mentioned. Also, 'a Facebook' is incorrect; 'Facebook' is a proper noun and does not need an article.

× But sometimes when I feel down or want to talk about personal thing I prefer one to one conversation and my go to person is my desk mate.

✓ But sometimes when I feel down or want to talk about personal things, I prefer one-to-one conversations and my go-to person is my desk mate.

'Thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple personal matters. 'One to one conversation' should be hyphenated as 'one-to-one conversations' to correctly describe the type of conversation. 'Go to' should be hyphenated as 'go-to' when used as an adjective.

× In the past I'm quite a timid and shy person so I prefer via social media communication but now I've gained back my confidence and I feel more comfortable when chatting, like when speaking face to face with my friends, so I prefer meeting in person.

✓ In the past, I was quite a timid and shy person, so I preferred communication via social media, but now I've regained my confidence and I feel more comfortable when chatting, like when speaking face to face with my friends, so I prefer meeting in person.

The past tense 'was' should be used instead of 'I'm' to describe a past state. 'Prefer' should be in past tense 'preferred' to match the past time frame. 'Gained back' is better expressed as 'regained'.

× I usually share with my group of friends on platform like a Facebook or Xello because it's fun and lively to do it.

✓ I usually share with my group of friends on platforms like Facebook or Xello because it's fun and lively to do it.

The preposition 'on' is correctly used with 'platforms', but 'a Facebook' is incorrect; proper nouns like Facebook do not require an article.

× But sometimes when I feel down or want to talk about personal thing I prefer one to one conversation and my go to person is my desk mate.

✓ But sometimes when I feel down or want to talk about personal things, I prefer one-to-one conversations and my go-to person is my desk mate.

The phrase 'talk about personal thing' should be 'talk about personal things' to be plural and correct. Also, 'one to one conversation' should be hyphenated as 'one-to-one conversations' to correctly describe the type of conversation.

× We usually discuss our daily lives, share the things that we're passionate about, or sometimes we collab, collaborate on group work.

✓ We usually discuss our daily lives, share the things that we're passionate about, or sometimes we collaborate on group work.

The word 'collab' is informal and should be replaced with 'collaborate' for proper grammar. The sentence structure is correct, but the informal term is inappropriate in this context.

× So they umm, usually accept with me.

✓ So they, umm, usually accept me.

The verb 'accept' does not require the preposition 'with'. The correct phrase is 'accept me'.