聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains redundancy and hesitations. Try to make your response more concise and structured by directly answering the question and providing clear examples without filler words.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me relax. We often share funny stories or update each other about our lives. Sometimes, we also exchange interesting videos or news.

建議: Your answer covers relevant topics but lacks fluency and clear structure. Avoid hesitations and improve coherence by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: We usually chat about politics in my country and also about our future plans. For example, we discuss whether to continue with a master's degree or focus on personal life, like getting married.

建議: Your answer is clear but can be improved by avoiding hesitations and providing more specific reasons with linking words to enhance coherence.

範例: I prefer chatting with one friend because it allows for deeper and more focused conversations. In contrast, group chats can be distracting and often lead to off-topic discussions.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrasing. Try to use correct sentence structures and clearer expressions with linking words.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication for serious topics because it is more personal. However, for regular or simple conversations, chatting via social media is sufficient.

建議: Your answer has several grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. Focus on using correct grammar and clearer vocabulary to express your ideas effectively.

範例: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends when we disagree on certain issues. However, I believe that these arguments can strengthen our friendship by helping us understand each other better.

× Yes, I do like chatting with friends, talking about something funny or just updating or the conditions, uh, from me or from friend friend's perspective or, or just chatting randomly about something happens like, uh, give, uh, funny video or tech texting. That's.

✓ Yes, I do like chatting with friends, talking about something funny or just updating the conditions, uh, from my or my friend's perspective, or just chatting randomly about things that happen, like, uh, sharing funny videos or texting. That's.

The original sentence has incorrect prepositions such as 'updating or the conditions' which should be 'updating the conditions'. Also, 'from me or from friend friend's perspective' is incorrect; it should be 'from my or my friend's perspective'. Additionally, 'something happens like' should be 'things that happen, like'. Correct preposition use improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Sometimes we discuss a lot about politics in the, in my country especially, or maybe just discuss about the future.

✓ Sometimes we discuss a lot about politics in my country especially, or maybe just discuss the future.

The phrase 'discuss about' is incorrect because 'discuss' is a transitive verb and does not require the preposition 'about'. The correct form is 'discuss politics' or 'discuss the future' without 'about'.

× Uh, do you want to continue to your master's degree or do you prefer to get married?

✓ Uh, do you want to continue your master's degree or do you prefer to get married?

The verb 'continue' does not require the preposition 'to' when followed by a noun phrase. The correct form is 'continue your master's degree'.

× But yeah, that's topics.

✓ But yeah, those are topics.

The word 'that's' is a contraction of 'that is' which is singular, but 'topics' is plural. The correct phrase is 'those are topics' to agree in number.

× Personally I prefer to chat with only one friend because it's really helpful, enjoyable.

✓ Personally, I prefer to chat with only one friend because it's really helpful and enjoyable.

Adding 'and' between 'helpful' and 'enjoyable' improves sentence structure and clarity. Also, a comma after 'Personally' is needed for correct punctuation.

× Uh. Somehow when I chat with a group of people I just feel distracted and sometimes to discuss wider to something else, so I don't think it's good.

✓ Uh. Somehow, when I chat with a group of people, I just feel distracted and sometimes the discussion goes off to something else, so I don't think it's good.

The phrase 'sometimes to discuss wider to something else' is incorrect. It should be rephrased to 'sometimes the discussion goes off to something else' to correctly express the idea. Also, commas are added for clarity.

× I think if we have a serious topics I prefer to communicate it face to face with my friends then social media.

✓ I think if we have serious topics, I prefer to communicate face to face with my friends rather than through social media.

'A serious topics' is incorrect because 'topics' is plural and does not need 'a'. Also, 'communicate it face to face' is awkward; 'communicate face to face' is better. 'Then social media' should be 'rather than through social media' for correct comparison and preposition use.

× But to us something regularly or basic it's good enough to chat via social media.

✓ But to us, for something regular or basic, it's good enough to chat via social media.

The phrase 'to us something regularly or basic' is incorrect. It should be 'for something regular or basic' to correctly use the preposition and adjective form.

× So depend topics what you need.

✓ So it depends on the topics you need.

The phrase 'So depend topics what you need' is ungrammatical. The correct form is 'So it depends on the topics you need' using the verb 'depends on' and proper sentence structure.

× Yes, I do argue with friends sometimes, maybe because we uh, done agree to something.

✓ Yes, I do argue with friends sometimes, maybe because we haven't agreed on something.

The phrase 'done agree' is incorrect past tense usage. The correct form is 'haven't agreed' to express the negative present perfect tense indicating an agreement has not been reached.

× We have not such an agreement.

✓ We do not have such an agreement.

The phrase 'We have not such an agreement' is awkward and incorrect. The correct form is 'We do not have such an agreement' to properly negate possession.

× So then it's normal for me to have some argument with your friends and you know that argument will lead to better connections.

✓ So then it's normal for me to have some arguments with my friends, and you know that arguments will lead to better connections.

The pronouns 'your friends' and 'that argument' are inconsistent with the speaker's perspective. It should be 'my friends' and 'arguments' to maintain consistency and correct plural form.