聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains minor grammatical errors such as 'too stressful' instead of 'too stressed'. Try to be more concise and avoid redundancy. Also, use clearer linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: I like chatting with friends when I'm feeling stressed or have interesting news to share. However, I usually don't enjoy chatting much because I find it a bit time-consuming.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and contains hesitations and grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas better and use linking words to connect your points. Also, avoid filler words like 'uh' and be specific in your examples.

範例: I usually chat with my friends about our hobbies. For instance, we often discuss recently released movies and sometimes talk about celebrities and the latest scandals.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations and grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to explain your preference logically. Avoid repeating phrases and filler words.

範例: Although I'm not very talkative, I prefer chatting with a group of friends because if I run out of things to say, others can keep the conversation going and make it more interesting.

建議: Your answer is generally clear but contains some repetition and minor grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating words and improve sentence structure for better fluency. Use linking words to contrast ideas effectively.

範例: I prefer communicating via social media because it gives me more time to think about my messages. However, face-to-face communication can sometimes lead to misunderstandings.

建議: Your answer has many hesitations and some grammatical errors. Try to speak more confidently and clearly. Also, organize your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details using linking words.

範例: I rarely argue with my friends because we share similar interests and opinions. Therefore, we usually get along well and avoid conflicts.

× Well, sometimes when I'm too stressful or too stressed out, or when I have some interesting news stories to share with my friends, I'd like to chat with the with them.

✓ Well, sometimes when I'm too stressed or too stressed out, or when I have some interesting news stories to share with my friends, I'd like to chat with them.

The adjective 'stressful' describes something that causes stress, not a person's feeling. The correct adjective to describe a person feeling stress is 'stressed'. Also, 'with the with them' is redundant; it should be 'with them'.

× For example, we'll discuss a movie, a recent, really a recently released movies, uh, I also talked to my friend about celebrities and, uh, the scandals around.

✓ For example, we'll discuss a movie, a recent, really a recently released movie. I also talk to my friend about celebrities and the scandals around.

The phrase 'recently released movies' is plural, but the context suggests a singular 'movie'. Also, 'I also talked' should be 'I also talk' to maintain present tense consistency. The sentence was also split for clarity.

× I'd like to chat with the with them.

✓ I'd like to chat with them.

The phrase 'with the with them' is redundant and incorrect. The correct pronoun usage is simply 'with them'.

× there would all it's true that there's someone else to make up the whole make up the floor and make the conversation more interesting.

✓ there would always be someone else to make up the floor and make the conversation more interesting.

The phrase 'there would all it's true that there's' is incorrect and confusing. The correct phrase is 'there would always be'. Also, 'make up the floor' is the correct idiom, not 'make up the whole make up the floor'.

× I prefer communication through social media.

✓ I prefer communicating via social media.

The verb 'prefer' is usually followed by a gerund ('communicating') rather than a noun ('communication'). Also, 'via' is more commonly used with social media than 'through'.

× I also talked to my friend about celebrities and, uh, the scandals around.

✓ I also talk to my friend about celebrities and the scandals around.

The sentence should maintain present tense to be consistent with the rest of the answer. 'Talked' is past tense; 'talk' is present tense.

× what we we wanna talk to, what messages we wanna convey.

✓ what we want to talk about, what messages we want to convey.

The phrase 'wanna talk to' is informal and incorrect here; it should be 'want to talk about'. Also, 'wanna' should be replaced with 'want to' for formal correctness.

× Uh, I'd say that I really have any arguments with my friends.

✓ Uh, I'd say that I really don't have any arguments with my friends.

The sentence is missing the negation 'don't' to correctly express the intended meaning of not having arguments.