聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to use more natural phrasing and correct grammar. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for clarity. For example, use 'I enjoy chatting with friends because I am sociable and have many friends. We often spend time together, eating and visiting places, which leads to chatting throughout the day.'

範例: I enjoy chatting with friends because I am sociable and have many friends. We often spend time together, eating and visiting places, which leads to chatting throughout the day.

建議: Avoid incorrect word choices like 'shout' instead of 'talk' or 'chat'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, be more specific and correct grammar, e.g., 'We usually chat about various topics such as our favorite foods, clothes, and skincare. Additionally, we share our weekly plans and stories from the past or present, which helps us stay updated on each other's lives.'

範例: We usually chat about various topics such as our favorite foods, clothes, and skincare. Additionally, we share our weekly plans and stories from the past or present, which helps us stay updated on each other's lives.

建議: Improve grammar and word choice, and use linking words for coherence. For example, say 'I like both, but I prefer chatting with a group because it allows me to exchange information and learn from others. It's a great opportunity to share and learn together.'

範例: I like both, but I prefer chatting with a group because it allows me to exchange information and learn from others. It's a great opportunity to share and learn together.

建議: Complete your sentences and avoid repetition. Use correct grammar and add linking words. For example, 'I prefer talking with my friends in person because it is a great way to express feelings clearly and understand others better.'

範例: I prefer talking with my friends in person because it is a great way to express feelings clearly and understand others better.

建議: Improve grammar and use linking words for clarity. For example, 'It depends on the type of argument. If you mean aggressive arguments, I don't have those. However, we do have regular friendly arguments daily, such as deciding what to eat or when to start studying.'

範例: It depends on the type of argument. If you mean aggressive arguments, I don't have those. However, we do have regular friendly arguments daily, such as deciding what to eat or when to start studying.

× I got so many friends so I spend a lot of time with them and we talk about a lot of things together.

✓ I have so many friends, so I spend a lot of time with them and we talk about a lot of things together.

The phrase 'I got' is informal and incorrect in this context; the correct form is 'I have' to indicate possession. Also, a comma is needed before 'so' to separate the clauses properly.

× We eat together and also we visit place together.

✓ We eat together and also we visit places together.

The word 'place' should be plural 'places' because it refers to multiple locations visited together.

× So it's end up with chatting with them the whole day.

✓ So it ends up with chatting with them the whole day.

The phrase 'it's end up' is incorrect; the correct form is 'it ends up' to match the subject-verb agreement and proper tense.

× Typically, we shout about several things from food like our favorite dishes to clothes, skin care and a lot of other things.

✓ Typically, we talk about several things from food like our favorite dishes to clothes, skin care, and a lot of other things.

The word 'shout' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'talk' to describe chatting or discussing topics.

× And we also like to share our weekly planned and stories happen to us in the past or even in the correct present.

✓ And we also like to share our weekly plans and stories that happened to us in the past or even in the present.

'Weekly planned' should be 'weekly plans' as a noun phrase. 'Stories happen' should be 'stories that happened' to use the correct past tense and relative clause. 'Correct present' is incorrect; 'present' suffices.

× It's a good way to stay update on each other's life.

✓ It's a good way to stay updated on each other's lives.

The phrase 'stay update' should be 'stay updated' to use the correct adjective form. Also, 'life' should be plural 'lives' because it refers to multiple people.

× Oh I like both, but I lean more toward chatting with a group with people because it's allowed me to exchange information and also to learn from other.

✓ Oh, I like both, but I lean more toward chatting with a group of people because it allows me to exchange information and also to learn from others.

'It's allowed me' is incorrect; the correct form is 'it allows me' to express present ability. 'Group with people' should be 'group of people'. 'Other' should be plural 'others'.

× It's a great opportunity to learn with other while you are sharing in Group.

✓ It's a great opportunity to learn from others while you are sharing in a group.

The phrase 'learn with other' should be 'learn from others' to indicate the source of learning. 'Sharing in Group' should be 'sharing in a group' with the indefinite article.

× I like to talk with my friends in person. It's great way to express your feeling more clearly and understand other others more clearly also and the.

✓ I like to talk with my friends in person. It's a great way to express your feelings more clearly and understand others more clearly as well.

'Great way' needs the article 'a'. 'Feeling' should be plural 'feelings'. 'Other others' is redundant; 'others' suffices. The sentence ending 'and the' is incomplete and removed for clarity.

× It depend what type of argument you mean.

✓ It depends on what type of argument you mean.

The verb 'depend' should be 'depends' to agree with the singular subject 'It'. Also, the preposition 'on' is needed after 'depends'.