聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding redundancy and grammatical errors. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: I don't really enjoy chatting with friends because I find it stressful and time-consuming. Instead, I prefer phone calls since they feel more personal and efficient.

建議: Avoid confusing or unclear expressions and focus on giving specific, relevant details. Use linking words to organize your answer logically.

範例: We usually chat about our daily lives, hobbies, and upcoming plans. For example, we often discuss weekend activities or share interesting experiences from our week.

建議: Correct minor errors and improve clarity by choosing precise vocabulary. Also, explain your reasons clearly with linking words.

範例: I prefer chatting with just one person because I'm introverted. Being around many people tends to drain my social energy, so one-on-one conversations feel more comfortable.

建議: Make your answer more coherent by using appropriate linking words and correcting grammatical mistakes. Also, clarify your preferences clearly.

範例: It depends on the person. If I'm talking to a close friend or acquaintance, I prefer face-to-face communication because I feel more comfortable. However, for people I'm not close to, I usually prefer social media.

建議: Avoid minor grammatical errors and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I do argue with friends sometimes, both over petty and serious matters. However, we always make sure to resolve our issues quickly, usually within a week at most.

× I don't really like chatting with friends and this because I consider it a very stressful activity.

✓ I don't really like chatting with friends because I consider it a very stressful activity.

The conjunction 'and this because' is incorrect here. The correct conjunction to show cause is 'because'. Replace 'and this because' with 'because' to make the sentence grammatically correct.

× I prefer phone calls than chats.

✓ I prefer phone calls to chats.

The verb 'prefer' is followed by 'to' when comparing two things, not 'than'. Therefore, 'prefer phone calls than chats' should be corrected to 'prefer phone calls to chats'.

× It's usually said that communication is 19 percent is 90% nonsense and 10% thanks.

✓ It's usually said that communication is 90% nonsense and 10% thanks.

The phrase '19 percent is 90% nonsense' is incorrect and confusing. The intended meaning is that communication is 90% nonsense and 10% thanks. Remove '19 percent is' to correct the sentence.

× So usually chat about our daily lives, our hobbies, our activities, make plans for the coming weekends and basic stuff.

✓ So we usually chat about our daily lives, our hobbies, our activities, make plans for the coming weekends, and basic stuff.

The sentence lacks a subject 'we' before 'usually chat'. Adding 'we' clarifies the subject and corrects the sentence structure.

× I prefer chatting with one person as being around a lot of people tends to dream my social energy.

✓ I prefer chatting with one person as being around a lot of people tends to drain my social energy.

The word 'dream' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'drain' which means to reduce or exhaust. Replace 'dream' with 'drain' to correct the sentence.

× If he's a close friend or an acquaintance, I could speak.

✓ If he's a close friend or an acquaintance, I would prefer to speak.

The phrase 'I could speak' is awkward and unclear in this context. Using 'I would prefer to speak' better expresses the intended meaning of preference.

× I could prefer communicating to the person face to face, and this is because I'm comfortable around that person.

✓ I would prefer communicating with the person face to face, and this is because I'm comfortable around that person.

The verb 'communicate' is followed by the preposition 'with', not 'to'. Also, 'could prefer' is incorrect; 'would prefer' is appropriate for expressing preference.

× But if it's someone I'm not so close to, our preferred social media conversation.

✓ But if it's someone I'm not so close to, I prefer social media conversation.

The phrase 'our preferred social media conversation' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'I prefer social media conversation' to correctly express the subject's preference.

× Of course I argue with friends and we do argue over petty matters and serious matters alike, but I we always make sure to sort out our issues such that they don't last a week.

✓ Of course I argue with friends and we do argue over petty matters and serious matters alike, but we always make sure to sort out our issues so that they don't last more than a week.

The phrase 'but I we always' contains an extra pronoun 'I'. Also, 'such that' is better replaced with 'so that' for clarity. Adding 'more than' before 'a week' improves the expression of duration.