聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant but lacks clarity and fluency. Try to avoid hesitation and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about how chatting helps you express feelings and solve problems.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends, especially on social media. I often share videos and photos from my life and travels. This helps me express my feelings, especially when I face difficulties, so my friends can support me.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations and repetitions. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use complete sentences. Provide specific topics you discuss and explain your plans coherently.

範例: I usually chat with my friends about games and travel blogs. For example, we are planning a trip to Japan next year, and I often share information about local food and attractions there.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and somewhat confusing. Make sure to finish your sentences and explain your reasons clearly. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: I prefer chatting with a group of people because we can share more ideas. Also, with more people, problems can be solved more easily compared to talking with just one friend.

建議: Your answer has good points but contains some grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct grammar. Also, explain why social media suits your personality.

範例: I am an introverted person, so I prefer communicating via social media. It is more comfortable because I can use emojis, stickers, and GIFs, and I don't have to make eye contact, which makes chatting easier for me.

建議: Your answer is relevant but incomplete and has some grammar errors. Try to complete your sentences and explain your ideas clearly. Use linking words to connect your thoughts logically.

範例: I don't usually argue with friends because I think it's a waste of time and can harm our relationship. When conflicts arise, I believe we should solve them together instead of keeping feelings to ourselves.

× I will share some videos, some photos, some pictures of my life and my travel and that is a very good time to uh, expe express my feeling when I am encounter some difficulty I would like to they can solve with me.

✓ I will share some videos, some photos, some pictures of my life and my travel and that is a very good time to express my feelings when I encounter some difficulties and I would like them to solve it with me.

The phrase 'expe express' is a repetition and should be corrected to 'express'. 'Feeling' should be plural 'feelings' to match the context. 'I am encounter' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I encounter' (present tense). 'Some difficulty' should be plural 'some difficulties' to match the context. 'I would like to they can solve with me' is ungrammatical; it should be 'I would like them to solve it with me' to correctly express the intended meaning.

× I would like to they can solve with me.

✓ I would like them to solve it with me.

The original sentence uses incorrect pronoun structure. 'I would like to they can solve with me' is ungrammatical. The correct form is 'I would like them to solve it with me' where 'them' refers to people and 'it' refers to the problem.

× Some like games or some travels blogs and I like travel like I'm going to share some I'm we're planning for the trip trip next years about going to Japan and I will share a lot of some some local flop.

✓ I like games or some travel blogs and I like to travel. I'm going to share that we're planning a trip next year to Japan and I will share a lot of some local food.

'Travels blogs' should be 'travel blogs' (plural noun with correct adjective). 'Next years' should be 'next year' (singular for a specific time). 'Trip trip' is a repetition and should be 'a trip'. 'Some some local flop' is unclear and likely a mispronunciation of 'local food'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× I'm going to share some I'm we're planning for the trip trip next years about going to Japan

✓ I'm going to share that we're planning a trip next year to Japan

The phrase 'planning for the trip' is better expressed as 'planning a trip'. 'Next years about going to Japan' is awkward; 'next year to Japan' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× I prefer chat with a group of people, so let's talk about why I don't choose with only one friend because they can get more people is we can share more ideas and with more people they can solve problem easily and I can just.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people, so let's talk about why I don't choose to chat with only one friend. Because with more people, we can share more ideas and solve problems easily.

'I prefer chat' should be 'I prefer to chat' (correct verb form). 'I don't choose with only one friend' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't choose to chat with only one friend'. The sentence is fragmented and unclear; it is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× I prefer chat with a group of people, so let's talk about why I don't choose with only one friend

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people, so let's talk about why I don't choose to chat with only one friend

The phrase 'choose with only one friend' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'to' as in 'choose to chat with only one friend'.

× with more people they can solve problem easily

✓ with more people they can solve problems easily

'Problem' should be plural 'problems' because it refers to multiple issues that can be solved.

× I prefer chat with a group of people, so let's talk about why I don't choose with only one friend because they can get more people is we can share more ideas

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people, so let's talk about why I don't choose to chat with only one friend because with more people we can share more ideas

The pronoun 'they' is incorrectly used to refer to 'one friend'. It is corrected to 'with more people' to match the intended meaning.

× I'm an intro first person and I hate social with others and using social media.

✓ I'm an introverted person and I hate socializing with others and using social media.

'Intro first person' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'introverted'. 'Hate social with others' is incorrect; it should be 'hate socializing with others'.

× I hate social with others and using social media.

✓ I hate socializing with others and using social media.

The verb 'social' is incorrect; the correct form is 'socializing'. The preposition 'with' is correct here.

× It's way more comfort for me to chat with friends.

✓ It's way more comfortable for me to chat with friends.

'Comfort' is a noun; the adjective form 'comfortable' is needed to describe the feeling.

× I don't have to have eye contact with them.

✓ I don't have to make eye contact with them.

The phrase 'have eye contact' is incorrect; the correct collocation is 'make eye contact'.

× Actually I don't usually argue with friends because I think it's just waste of time and it's it's very harm to our relationship.

✓ Actually, I don't usually argue with friends because I think it's just a waste of time and it's very harmful to our relationship.

'Waste of time' needs the article 'a'. 'It's very harm' is incorrect; the adjective 'harmful' is needed.

× it's just waste of time

✓ it's just a waste of time

The noun phrase 'waste of time' requires the indefinite article 'a'.

× it's it's very harm to our relationship

✓ it's very harmful to our relationship

The adjective 'harm' is incorrect here; the correct adjective is 'harmful'.

× I think when we encounter some conflict we can solve together and you don't have to keep it in your part and just let it.

✓ I think when we encounter some conflict, we can solve it together and you don't have to keep it to yourself; just let it go.

The sentence is missing 'it' after 'solve'. 'Keep it in your part' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'keep it to yourself'. 'Just let it' is incomplete; 'just let it go' is the correct expression.