聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' to make your speech more fluent and natural. Also, use correct grammar such as 'speaks very well' instead of 'talks very good'. Keep your answer concise and clear.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially with those who speak well. I usually prefer chatting over calling because it feels more relaxed.

建議: Avoid filler words and unclear phrases. Use complete sentences and explain your ideas clearly. For example, say 'I usually chat about my daily routines and sometimes discuss arguments I have with my partner to feel calmer.'

範例: I usually chat about my daily routines and sometimes share any disagreements I have with my partner. Talking with my friends helps me feel calm and supported.

建議: Try to reduce filler words and improve sentence structure. Use linking words like 'however' to contrast your preferences. Also, avoid repeating 'chat' too often by using synonyms.

範例: It depends on my mood. Sometimes, I enjoy chatting with a group of people to discuss various topics; however, other times I prefer talking one-on-one with my best friend about my daily routines and recent events.

建議: Use correct grammar such as 'both of them are very good' and avoid filler words. Be more specific about when you prefer each method and use linking words to organize your ideas.

範例: I think both face-to-face communication and social media are important. For example, I prefer face-to-face conversations on some days for deeper connection, while on other days, social media is more convenient to stay in touch with friends.

建議: Avoid filler words and improve sentence clarity. Use past tense correctly and provide a clear example with linking words to explain how you resolve conflicts.

範例: I don't argue with my friends often, but it does happen sometimes. For instance, once my friend was angry with me, but she told me about it, and we resolved the issue through honest communication.

× I like, uh, chatting with one of my friends who, uh, talks very, uh, good.

✓ I like, uh, chatting with one of my friends who, uh, talks very, uh, well.

The word 'good' is an adjective and should be used to describe nouns, but here it is used to describe the verb 'talks'. The correct form is the adverb 'well' to modify the verb.

× And I prefer to chat with my friends, uh, instead of call them.

✓ And I prefer to chat with my friends, uh, instead of calling them.

After 'instead of', a gerund (-ing form) should be used. 'Call' should be changed to 'calling' to be grammatically correct.

× I usually chat about my umm, routines, especially when I uh, have some argue or umm, some talk with my partner.

✓ I usually chat about my umm, routines, especially when I uh, have some arguments or umm, some talks with my partner.

The word 'argue' is a verb, but here a noun is needed. The correct noun form is 'arguments'. Similarly, 'talk' as a noun should be pluralized to 'talks' to match 'some'.

× I can chat with my friends too. Became umm, calm.

✓ I can chat with my friends too to become umm, calm.

The sentence 'Became umm, calm.' is a fragment without a subject and verb. It should be connected to the previous sentence to form a complete sentence.

× Sometimes I really enjoy to chat with a group of people and uh, talk about different topics,

✓ Sometimes I really enjoy chatting with a group of people and uh, talking about different topics,

After 'enjoy', the verb should be in the gerund (-ing) form, not the infinitive 'to chat'.

× I think both of them is very good and both of them are essential.

✓ I think both of them are very good and both of them are essential.

The subject 'both of them' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'.

× For example, one times my friend was uh, angry about uh, of me and she said to me and we uh, corrected.

✓ For example, one time my friend was uh, angry with me and she said to me and we uh, corrected it.

The phrase 'angry about of me' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'angry with me'. Also, 'one times' should be 'one time'. The verb 'corrected' needs an object, so 'it' is added.