聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it is somewhat repetitive and slightly off-topic by mentioning 'fans' instead of 'friends'. Try to avoid redundancy and stay focused on the question. Also, use more varied vocabulary and concise sentences.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my close friends because it helps me stay connected and share important moments in my life. Although I don't have many friends, the ones I have are very important to me, and I appreciate our conversations.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but is somewhat repetitive and lacks linking words. Try to use linking phrases to connect ideas and provide more specific examples to enrich your response.

範例: I usually discuss the challenges I am currently facing, such as work or personal issues, and I seek advice or support from my friends to help me overcome them.

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but some sentences are a bit long and could be more concise. Also, use linking words to improve coherence and try to vary your vocabulary.

範例: I prefer chatting with one friend at a time because, as an introvert, I find it difficult to express myself clearly in groups. Therefore, talking to a single friend helps me feel more comfortable and less overwhelmed.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct grammar and clearer expressions. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: It depends on the person I am communicating with. For close friends, I prefer face-to-face conversations because they feel more personal. However, if I am talking to someone I don't know well, I usually prefer social media as it feels more comfortable.

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by using more varied vocabulary and better sentence structure. Also, try to avoid repetition and use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

範例: Yes, I occasionally argue with my friends, but it doesn't happen often because I am generally calm and prefer to avoid conflicts. I believe that arguments can harm our friendship, so I try to resolve disagreements peacefully.

× I love telling them what's going on with my life, what's happening with my life.

✓ I love telling them what's going on in my life, what's happening in my life.

The preposition 'with' is incorrectly used here; the correct preposition to describe events occurring in one's life is 'in'. This is a preposition usage error, but since it is not listed as a separate problem type, it is considered under singular/plural issue for correction purposes.

× I still have the ones who are really important to me and I really do enjoy talking to them.

✓ I still have the ones who are really important to me, and I really do enjoy talking to them.

A comma is needed before the conjunction 'and' to separate two independent clauses for clarity and correct sentence structure.

× I usually talk about the situations that I'm facing, the challenges that I'm facing at the current state, and I try to get responses from them and try to work that out.

✓ I usually talk about the situations that I'm facing, the challenges that I'm facing at the current stage, and I try to get responses from them and try to work them out.

The phrase 'at the current state' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'at the current stage'. Also, 'work that out' should be 'work them out' to refer to the plural 'challenges'. This is a preposition and pronoun usage error.

× For me it has been always one friend because I'm an introvert which affects me too not being able to express myself clearly in a group of people and I find it more easy just to talk to 1 friend at a time because I don't feel overwhelmed when I'm talking to them.

✓ For me, it has always been one friend because I'm an introvert, which affects me too, not being able to express myself clearly in a group of people, and I find it easier just to talk to one friend at a time because I don't feel overwhelmed when I'm talking to them.

Several corrections: 'has been always' should be 'has always been' for correct adverb placement; 'more easy' should be 'easier' (comparative adjective); '1' should be spelled out as 'one' in formal writing; commas are added for clarity and correct sentence structure.

× For me it will depend on who I am talking to.

✓ For me, it will depend on whom I am talking to.

The pronoun 'who' is incorrectly used as the object of the preposition 'to'; the correct pronoun is 'whom'. This is a pronoun usage error.

× For example, if that person is one of my closest friends or I know that person really well, I would prefer talking to them by face to face.

✓ For example, if that person is one of my closest friends or I know that person really well, I would prefer talking to them face to face.

The phrase 'by face to face' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'face to face' without 'by'. This is a preposition usage error.

× But if I don't know the person really well and defeats a stranger, I would rather to talk to them on social media.

✓ But if I don't know the person really well and they are a stranger, I would rather talk to them on social media.

The phrase 'defeats a stranger' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'they are a stranger'. Also, 'would rather to talk' should be 'would rather talk' as 'would rather' is followed by the base verb without 'to'. This is a pronoun and modal verb usage error.

× Yes I do, but it's not that often because I am the kind of person who is really calm and I don't really seek arguments from my friends because I find it so disturbing it could disturb our friendship.

✓ Yes, I do, but it's not that often because I am the kind of person who is really calm and I don't really seek arguments with my friends because I find it so disturbing it could disturb our friendship.

The phrase 'seek arguments from my friends' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'seek arguments with my friends'. This is a preposition usage error.

× So I don't like argue with them.

✓ So I don't like to argue with them.

After 'don't like', the verb should be in the infinitive form 'to argue' or the gerund 'arguing'. Here, 'to argue' is more appropriate. This is a verb form usage error.