聊天— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you like chatting with friends?
考生
I like to chat with my friends because I can share my moods and my experience with them to let my feeling become better and sometimes get some subjection from them.
考官
What do you usually chat about with friends?
考生
I talk about my job and the problem I faced in my work time and sometimes we just talk about what our next journey will be and started to plan about it.
考官
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
考生
I prefer chat with one person at one time because I can focus on the conversation between he or she and me and like in a group of people, sometimes too many.
考官
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
考生
I think it depends on the situation. If I talk to my friends I prefer like face to face and we also can have lunch or dinner. But if the person I chat is not that familiar with, I prefer to talk on the social media 1st and then to see.
考官
Do you argue with friends?
考生
When I was little I will say yes, but after I grow up I will first understand what they think and what cause them to speak like that and then I will try to express my opinion to see if we can.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you like chatting with friends?
分數: 65.0建議: 你的回答有點冗長且語法不夠自然。建議你用更簡潔且正確的句子來表達，並避免使用不正確的詞彙，例如「subjection」應該是「suggestion」。
範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me share my feelings and experiences, which makes me feel better. Sometimes, I also get useful suggestions from them.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
分數: 60.0建議: 回答中語法錯誤較多，且句子結構不完整。建議使用連接詞使句子更流暢，並注意時態一致。
範例: I usually talk about my job and the problems I face at work. Sometimes, we also discuss our upcoming trips and start planning them.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
分數: 55.0建議: 回答中缺少冠詞且語法不正確，句子結構不清晰。建議使用正確的冠詞和代詞，並簡化句子使其更自然。
範例: I prefer chatting with one person at a time because I can focus better. In a group, there are sometimes too many people, which can be distracting.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
分數: 65.0建議: 回答中有語法和用詞錯誤，建議使用更自然的表達方式，並注意句子結構和連接詞的使用。
範例: It depends on the situation. I prefer face-to-face communication with my friends because we can have lunch or dinner together. However, if I don't know the person well, I usually start chatting on social media first.
Do you argue with friends?
分數: 60.0建議: 回答中時態使用不當且句子不完整。建議使用正確的時態並完整表達想法，讓回答更清晰。
範例: When I was little, I used to argue with my friends. But now, I try to understand their opinions first and then express mine to find a solution.
文法
× I like to chat with my friends because I can share my moods and my experience with them to let my feeling become better and sometimes get some subjection from them.
✓ I like to chat with my friends because I can share my moods and my experiences with them to let my feelings become better and sometimes get some suggestions from them.
The word 'feeling' should be plural 'feelings' to match the context of multiple moods. 'Subjection' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'suggestions' meaning advice or ideas. Also, 'experience' should be plural 'experiences' to match 'moods'.
× I talk about my job and the problem I faced in my work time and sometimes we just talk about what our next journey will be and started to plan about it.
✓ I talk about my job and the problems I faced during my work time and sometimes we just talk about what our next journey will be and start to plan it.
The verb 'started' should be in present tense 'start' to keep consistency with 'we just talk' which is present tense. Also, 'problem' should be plural 'problems' to match the context. 'Plan about it' is incorrect; it should be 'plan it'.
× I prefer chat with one person at one time because I can focus on the conversation between he or she and me and like in a group of people, sometimes too many.
✓ I prefer to chat with one person at a time because I can focus on the conversation between him or her and me, unlike in a group of people where sometimes there are too many.
The phrase 'prefer chat' needs 'to' before 'chat'. 'At one time' is better as 'at a time'. The pronouns 'he or she' should be in object form 'him or her' because they are objects of the preposition 'between'. The sentence structure is improved by adding 'unlike' and clarifying the last part.
× I think it depends on the situation. If I talk to my friends I prefer like face to face and we also can have lunch or dinner. But if the person I chat is not that familiar with, I prefer to talk on the social media 1st and then to see.
✓ I think it depends on the situation. If I talk to my friends, I prefer face-to-face communication and we can also have lunch or dinner. But if the person I chat with is not that familiar, I prefer to talk on social media first and then meet in person.
The phrase 'prefer like face to face' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer face-to-face communication'. 'The person I chat is not that familiar with' is incorrect; it should be 'the person I chat with is not that familiar'. 'On the social media' should be 'on social media'. '1st' should be spelled out as 'first'. 'Then to see' is unclear; better to say 'then meet in person'.
× When I was little I will say yes, but after I grow up I will first understand what they think and what cause them to speak like that and then I will try to express my opinion to see if we can.
✓ When I was little, I would say yes, but after I grew up, I first try to understand what they think and what causes them to speak like that, and then I try to express my opinion to see if we can agree.
The use of 'will' is incorrect when talking about past habits; 'would' is appropriate. 'After I grow up' should be past tense 'after I grew up'. 'Cause' should be 'causes' to agree with singular subject 'what'. The phrase 'try to express my opinion to see if we can' is incomplete; adding 'agree' clarifies the meaning.
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