聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'like' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. Usually, we talk about our daily lives and discuss specific topics such as local news or recent hot issues. This helps us stay informed and connected.

建議: Reduce hesitation and filler words to improve fluency. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' effectively to connect your ideas. Also, be more specific in your supporting details to enrich your answer.

範例: I usually chat with my friends about our daily lives and recent hot issues because it's a good way to catch up and understand each other's experiences better.

建議: Work on sentence structure and grammar to make your answer clearer. Avoid incomplete sentences and explain your reasons more clearly with linking words. Also, try to use a wider range of vocabulary.

範例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because in a group, the topics often get separated, making it hard for me to concentrate. Talking one-on-one allows for deeper and more focused conversations.

建議: Avoid filler words and improve grammar, such as subject-verb agreement and comparative forms. Use linking words to contrast your preferences clearly and provide specific reasons.

範例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it allows for deeper conversations about our daily lives. In contrast, social media can be distracting and less personal.

建議: Improve sentence structure and grammar to make your answer clearer. Use linking words to explain your reasons logically. Also, try to use a wider range of vocabulary to express your ideas more effectively.

範例: I usually don't argue with my friends because I prefer to listen to their opinions and understand their thoughts. This helps me agree with them and avoid conflicts.

× I like chatting with my friends, so normally I will, uh, chat with them like, uh, daily life and some, uh, small shop with them about, uh, uh, specific topic like the local news and some, uh, hot issues that already happened.

✓ I like chatting with my friends, so normally I chat with them about daily life and some small topics like the local news and some hot issues that have already happened.

The use of 'will' here is unnecessary because the sentence describes a habitual action, which is better expressed in the simple present tense. Also, 'small shop' seems incorrect in context and is replaced with 'small topics'. The phrase 'that already happened' should be 'that have already happened' to correctly use the present perfect tense for recent events.

× I normally will talk with my friends about the daily life and some, uh, hot issues that happen recently because, uh, it's a kind of good way to catch up each other's, uh, normally life and, uh, it's quite good way to know each other. What happened recently.

✓ I normally talk with my friends about daily life and some hot issues that have happened recently because it's a good way to catch up on each other's normal life and it's quite a good way to know each other.

Again, 'will' is unnecessary for habitual actions and should be omitted. 'That happen recently' should be 'that have happened recently' to use the present perfect tense for recent events. 'Catch up each other's normally life' is incorrect; it should be 'catch up on each other's normal life'. Also, 'quite good way' needs an article 'a' before 'good way'.

× I prefer chat with only one friend because I think I'll check with the group of people, maybe would separate the topics.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I think chatting with a group of people may separate the topics.

After 'prefer', the verb should be in the infinitive form 'to chat'. 'I'll check with the group of people' is unclear and likely incorrect; it is better expressed as 'chatting with a group of people'. 'Maybe would separate' is incorrect modal usage; 'may separate' is appropriate.

× It's quite hard to concentrate for me and talking with one friends is the key linking with all of us so it's.

✓ It's quite hard to concentrate for me and talking with one friend is the key link among all of us.

'One friends' is incorrect because 'one' requires a singular noun; it should be 'one friend'. 'Key linking' is awkward; 'key link' is more appropriate. 'Linking with all of us' is better expressed as 'link among all of us'.

× I prefer communicates, uh, face to face because, uh, only face to face can talk about uh, our daily life more deeper.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because only face-to-face communication can talk about our daily life more deeply.

'Prefer' should be followed by the infinitive 'to communicate', not 'communicates'. 'More deeper' is incorrect because 'deeper' already implies comparison; 'more deeply' is the correct adverb form.

× Uh, while the social media may be uh, have some, uh, uh, cannot concentrate for me.

✓ While social media may have some aspects that I cannot concentrate on.

The phrase 'cannot concentrate for me' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on' as in 'concentrate on something'. Also, 'the social media' is incorrect; 'social media' is uncountable and does not need 'the'.

× I basically not argue with my friend because I prefer listening my friends talking.

✓ I basically do not argue with my friend because I prefer listening to my friends talking.

The negative form requires 'do not' before the verb: 'do not argue'. 'Listening' requires the preposition 'to' before the object: 'listening to my friends'.

× Express his opinions and I want to know what he's thinking about so that I can provide I I can agree with him and not argue with him.

✓ I listen to him express his opinions because I want to know what he's thinking about so that I can agree with him and not argue with him.

The original sentence lacks a subject and proper structure. 'Express his opinions' needs a subject, so 'I listen to him express his opinions' is correct. Also, 'provide I I can agree' is incorrect and should be simplified to 'so that I can agree'.