聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to reduce filler words like 'umm' and 'uh' to make your speech more fluent and natural. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating phrases such as 'if there are' twice. Use clear and concise sentences to express your ideas effectively.

範例: Absolutely. I love chatting with my friends because it allows me to share my ideas and discuss any problems we might have. We can exchange responses and support each other through conversation.

建議: Avoid repeating words like 'that that' and try to provide more specific examples to enrich your answer. Adding linking words can also improve coherence.

範例: We usually chat about our studies and discuss current affairs, such as recent news events or social issues happening around us.

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant. To improve, you could add linking words and more specific reasons or examples to support your preference.

範例: I'd like to chat with a group of people because it allows me to share my ideas and, moreover, I can gain different perspectives on any topic, which broadens my understanding.

建議: Try to organize your answer with clearer structure and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid long sentences by breaking them into shorter, clearer ones.

範例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it allows real-time interaction. Although social media offers video calls, face-to-face conversations feel more natural and realistic.

建議: Reduce the use of filler words significantly to improve fluency. Also, clarify your ideas and avoid contradictory statements. For example, saying 'having an understanding bond helps me have an argument' is confusing. Instead, explain that a good relationship helps avoid arguments.

範例: I rarely argue with my friends because we have a strong understanding. If misunderstandings occur, I prefer to talk them through calmly rather than having a fight.

× if there are and umm, if there are any problems, uh, with me, they can uh, uh, share their umm, uh, response

✓ if there are any problems with me, they can share their responses

The word 'response' should be plural 'responses' because it refers to multiple friends each potentially giving their own response. Using the plural form matches the plural subject 'they' and the context of multiple people responding.

× having many people will help me share my ideas and I can get different perspectives on any topic

✓ having many people will help me share my ideas and I can get different perspectives on various topics

The phrase 'any topic' is singular, but since 'different perspectives' implies multiple topics, 'various topics' is more appropriate to match the plural sense.

× I'd like to communicate face to face because it helps me have a conversation in real time rather than using social media where only voices can be heard even though we have video calls but still having a face to face interaction makes it more realistic

✓ I'd like to communicate face-to-face because it helps me have a conversation in real time rather than using social media where only voices can be heard. Even though we have video calls, still having face-to-face interaction makes it more realistic

The phrase 'face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective or adverb. Also, the original sentence is a run-on sentence and needs to be split for clarity. The preposition usage is correct but punctuation and hyphenation improve correctness and readability.

× having a understanding, uh, bond with my friends helps me, umm, have a argument, uh, uh, with them

✓ having an understanding bond with my friends helps me have an argument with them

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a word starting with a vowel sound like 'argument'. Also, 'a argument' is incorrect; it should be 'an argument'. The phrase 'a understanding' should be 'an understanding' for the same reason.

× if there was any, umm, uh, misunderstanding between us, I would like to, uh, talk rather than, uh, going back and talking about them and having a fight

✓ if there were any misunderstanding between us, I would like to talk rather than going back and talking about it and having a fight

The subjunctive mood requires 'were' instead of 'was' after 'if' when referring to hypothetical situations. Also, 'talking about them' is incorrect because 'misunderstanding' is singular and should be referred to as 'it'. This correction improves grammatical accuracy and clarity.