聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and coherent by directly answering the question, avoiding redundancy, and using correct grammar. For example, clarify what you mean by 'Weather is a small thing of big news' or omit it if irrelevant.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it makes me happy. We often talk about various topics, which helps us stay connected and share our experiences.

建議: Your answer is repetitive and contains grammatical mistakes. To improve, provide a clear topic sentence and use linking words to add supporting details. Avoid repeating words and ensure your sentences are complete and natural.

範例: Usually, we chat about everyday topics such as what to eat or the weather. These small talks help us relax and enjoy each other's company without discussing serious matters.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Also, complete your sentences to make your point clear.

範例: I prefer chatting in a group because it is more exciting and dynamic. When people talk together, it creates a fun atmosphere and helps us connect better.

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by using linking words and slightly more varied vocabulary. Also, try to avoid minor grammatical errors for a more natural response.

範例: I definitely prefer face-to-face communication because I can see body language and facial expressions, which help me understand the other person better than just hearing their voice.

建議: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. To improve, respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence and provide specific supporting details using correct grammar and linking words.

範例: I rarely argue with my friends, but sometimes we have different opinions. When that happens, we discuss our views calmly to resolve any misunderstandings.

× Yes, chatting with friends is always fun, it make me happy.

✓ Yes, chatting with friends is always fun, it makes me happy.

The subject 'it' requires the verb 'makes' in the third person singular form to agree in number and person.

× We love talk to each other.

✓ We love talking to each other.

After the verb 'love', the gerund form 'talking' should be used instead of the base form 'talk'.

× Weather is a small thing of big news.

✓ The weather is a small topic compared to big news.

The original sentence is unclear and structurally incorrect; adding 'The' and rephrasing clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× Well, we're just like talking small things like what to eat.

✓ Well, we just like talking about small things like what to eat.

The phrase 'like talking' is correct, but 'talking small things' is incorrect; 'talking about small things' is the proper collocation.

× The what weather is just just some small talk, not not something serious.

✓ The weather is just some small talk, not something serious.

The phrase 'The what weather' is incorrect; removing 'what' and duplicate words corrects the sentence.

× I would say I prefer chat as group, group people because there's more exciting and more dynamic when people talk together.

✓ I would say I prefer chatting in a group because it's more exciting and more dynamic when people talk together.

After 'prefer', the gerund form 'chatting' is required; 'in a group' is the correct prepositional phrase; 'there's' should be followed by an adjective with 'it' as subject.

× I think that's a fun thing and then that make people connect and I can.

✓ I think that's a fun thing and then that makes people connect and I can.

The subject 'that' requires the verb 'makes' in the third person singular form to agree in number and person.

× Well I definitely prefer face to face because in a communication I want to see their body language and the facial expression, not just voice that can help me understand more about them.

✓ Well, I definitely prefer face-to-face communication because I want to see their body language and facial expressions, not just their voice; that can help me understand more about them.

'Face-to-face' should be hyphenated as an adjective; 'in a communication' is incorrect, 'face-to-face communication' is correct; 'facial expression' should be plural to match 'body language'; 'not just voice' should be 'not just their voice' for clarity.

× Very few but it happened and sometimes we have a different opinion.

✓ Very few, but it happens and sometimes we have different opinions.

The present tense 'happens' fits better with 'sometimes'; 'a different opinion' should be plural 'different opinions' to match the context.

× So we argued umm but not every relationship just about things we have a different.

✓ So we argue, umm, but not every relationship is just about things we disagree on.

The present tense 'argue' fits better with the ongoing context; the sentence is incomplete and unclear, so it is rephrased for clarity and grammatical correctness.