聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains redundancy. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly stating your opinion and providing clear reasons without repeating ideas.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me share my thoughts and get advice when I face different situations.

建議: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Use clear vocabulary and structure your answer with a topic sentence followed by specific examples or reasons. Avoid filler words and unclear phrases.

範例: I usually chat with my friends when I need help making decisions, like choosing between two options, because they know me well and can give good advice.

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be more concise and better structured. Start with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: I prefer chatting with one friend because I am introverted and have a small circle. When I need advice or want to share my thoughts, I usually talk to a close friend.

建議: Your answer is good but contains some hesitation and filler words. Try to speak more fluently and organize your answer with clear linking words to show contrast or conditions.

範例: I prefer both face-to-face and social media communication. If either of us is busy, I use social media, but otherwise, I like to talk face-to-face.

建議: Your answer is repetitive and unclear. Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid repeating the same point. Use linking words to explain the relationship between debating and arguing.

範例: Yes, sometimes my friends and I argue when we have different opinions during debates. However, these arguments are usually minor and not serious.

× I chat with my friends whenever I feel like sharing my thoughts and want some situation about the thing I'm doing.

✓ I chat with my friends whenever I feel like sharing my thoughts and want some advice about the thing I'm doing.

The phrase 'want some situation' is incorrect; 'situation' is a noun that does not fit here. The intended meaning is likely 'advice' or 'input'. Using 'advice' fits the context better.

× So chatting with my friends is kind of mandatory in my life so I do whenever I need them and need their suggestion.

✓ So chatting with my friends is kind of mandatory in my life, so I do it whenever I need them and need their suggestions.

The verb 'do' requires an object here; adding 'it' clarifies the action. Also, 'suggestion' should be plural 'suggestions' to match the context of needing multiple pieces of advice.

× So basically I chat with my friends whenever I need transition about the thing I'm doing in two days.

✓ So basically I chat with my friends whenever I need advice about the thing I'm doing in two days.

The word 'transition' is incorrectly used here; the correct word is likely 'advice' or 'guidance'. 'Transition' refers to change, not advice.

× Uh, or I need uh, best OP opinion between the two where I can't choose between the two options so I need I have from them to choose one for me because they know me well.

✓ Or I need the best opinion between the two options when I can't choose, so I ask them to choose one for me because they know me well.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Rephrasing improves clarity and grammatical correctness, including adding articles and proper sentence structure.

× Personally speaking I'm a introverted person so I have only a small circle friend.

✓ Personally speaking, I'm an introverted person, so I have only a small circle of friends.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a vowel sound. Also, 'circle friend' should be 'circle of friends' to be grammatically correct.

× So whenever I want to share my thoughts or any suggestions from my friends so I only be with one friend and ask her whatever I need or suggestion and opinion or her opinion.

✓ So whenever I want to share my thoughts or get any suggestions from my friends, I only spend time with one friend and ask her whatever I need, including suggestions and opinions.

The original sentence has incorrect verb forms and structure. 'Be with one friend' is awkward; 'spend time with one friend' is better. Also, the sentence is fragmented and needs conjunctions for clarity.

× Umm, definitely, I will choose both 'cause I feel comfortable with my friend, uh, whether it's face to face or social media, chatting with them.

✓ Umm, definitely, I will choose both because I feel comfortable with my friends, whether it's face to face or social media chatting with them.

The singular 'my friend' conflicts with the plural pronoun 'them'. Changing to 'my friends' aligns the pronouns correctly.

× So whenever I am busy or she's busy, I prefer to use social media or otherwise I will choose face to face to speak up with her.

✓ So whenever I am busy or she's busy, I prefer to use social media; otherwise, I will choose face-to-face to speak with her.

The phrase 'speak up with her' is incorrect; 'speak with her' or 'talk to her' is correct. Also, 'face to face' should be hyphenated when used as an adjective or adverb.

× To be honest, yes, sometime whenever we debate about something we going to a argument.

✓ To be honest, yes, sometimes whenever we debate about something, we end up in an argument.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'We going to a argument' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'we end up in an argument'.

× So it's normal and that argument doesn't count seriously.

✓ So it's normal, and that argument doesn't count seriously.

A comma is needed before 'and' to separate independent clauses. The sentence is otherwise correct.

× But if we debate about something then there will be a small debate with her.

✓ But if we debate about something, then there will be a small argument with her.

Repeating 'debate' is redundant; replacing the second 'debate' with 'argument' improves clarity. Also, a comma is needed after the introductory clause.