聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains many hesitations and filler words, which affects the natural flow. Try to give a direct response with clear reasons and avoid redundancy. Also, use correct grammar and sentence structure.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends. We often create group chats to stay connected, especially since many of my friends know each other.

建議: Your answer is unclear and lacks specific details. Try to directly state the topics you discuss and provide examples. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid vague phrases.

範例: We usually chat about current events and new music releases. For example, we often discuss popular songs and share our opinions on recent news.

建議: Your answer is generally clear but could be improved by organizing your ideas better and using linking words. Also, avoid repetition and clarify your points with specific reasons.

範例: I prefer chatting with one friend because it feels more personal. However, I also enjoy small group chats of about three people since they help us stay connected in a relaxed way.

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by using more varied vocabulary and linking words to enhance coherence.

範例: I definitely prefer face-to-face communication because I can observe facial expressions and tone of voice. However, social media is convenient since it offers voice messages and video calls.

建議: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contains many hesitations. Try to clearly explain when and why you argue with friends, and use linking words to organize your ideas logically.

範例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, especially when jokes are misunderstood during chats. I think face-to-face communication is better to avoid such misunderstandings.

× Yes, I really like chatting with my friends, even with many friends we have a chat groups uh, with each other because uh, we umm, uh, my friends is a friend of my friends.

✓ Yes, I really like chatting with my friends, even with many friends we have chat groups, uh, with each other because, uh, we, umm, uh, my friend is a friend of my friends.

The phrase 'my friends is a friend' is incorrect because 'friends' is plural and 'is' is singular. It should be 'my friend is a friend' to maintain subject-verb agreement and singular/plural consistency. Also, 'a chat groups' is incorrect because 'groups' is plural and 'a' is singular; it should be 'chat groups' without 'a'.

× I think the most common theme of chats of all my friends, uh, is a mass media, maybe, umm, some you serious or have hop song uh, released via chats about uh, new value or management.

✓ I think the most common theme of chats among all my friends, uh, is mass media, maybe, umm, some serious or popular songs, uh, released via chats about, uh, new value or management.

'A mass media' is incorrect because 'mass media' is an uncountable noun and does not take an article 'a'. Also, 'some you serious or have hop song' is unclear and likely meant to be 'some serious or popular songs'. The plural form 'songs' fits better here. 'Chats of all my friends' should be 'chats among all my friends' for correct preposition use.

× I prefer to chat with one friend I think, but I have a lot of small groups, maybe for three people and it helps to connect when we are we are chatting in free form.

✓ I prefer to chat with one friend, I think, but I have a lot of small groups, maybe of three people, and it helps to connect when we are chatting in free form.

The phrase 'maybe for three people' is incorrect; it should be 'maybe of three people' to correctly describe the size of the groups. Also, the repeated phrase 'we are we are' is redundant and should be corrected to 'we are'.

× Of course I prefer face to face communication more than chatting because I can see the face and mimics and the tone of voice. But in social media we have voice messages and video of course.

✓ Of course, I prefer face-to-face communication more than chatting because I can see the face, expressions, and the tone of voice. But on social media, we have voice messages and video, of course.

'Face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective. 'Mimics' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'expressions'. Also, the preposition 'in social media' should be 'on social media' to correctly indicate the platform.

× Of course, sometimes I argue with my friends, uh, for example, when we chatting, I can take this joke or a serious opinion and that's, uh, the problem is chat. Of course, I think, uh, it will be better than we face to face communicate.

✓ Of course, sometimes I argue with my friends, uh, for example, when we are chatting, I can take a joke or a serious opinion, and that's, uh, the problem with chat. Of course, I think, uh, it would be better if we communicate face-to-face.

The phrase 'when we chatting' is missing the auxiliary verb 'are' and should be 'when we are chatting'. 'The problem is chat' is awkward; it should be 'the problem with chat'. 'It will be better than we face to face communicate' is incorrect; it should be 'it would be better if we communicate face-to-face' to express a hypothetical situation and correct word order.