聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammatical accuracy and fluency by using correct verb forms and avoiding redundancy. For example, say 'I like chatting with my friends' instead of 'I'd like to chatting'. Also, avoid unnecessary words like 'firstly' and 'secondly' if the answer is short. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it helps strengthen our relationships. Also, talking with them makes me feel happier and more relaxed.

建議: Focus on clarity and correct word choice. Replace incorrect words like 'charge' with 'share' and improve sentence structure. Provide specific examples clearly and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

範例: I usually share my life experiences with my friends. For example, I tell them about beautiful places I visit or when I achieve important goals in my studies.

建議: Work on grammar, especially subject-verb agreement and article usage. Avoid repetition and improve fluency. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly.

範例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because I am not a social butterfly. I feel that one friend can understand me more deeply.

建議: Correct grammar and vocabulary errors, such as 'sang' to 'say' and 'phrase language' to 'body language'. Make sentences clear and concise, and use linking words to explain reasons logically.

範例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it allows me to understand meanings through body language and facial expressions.

建議: Improve naturalness by using common expressions like 'have arguments' instead of 'make an argument'. Also, add linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide a brief explanation.

範例: Yes, I sometimes have arguments with my friends about studies or work. However, I believe that these arguments can help strengthen our relationships because they allow us to understand each other better.

× Uh, yes, I'd like to chatting with my friends.

✓ Uh, yes, I'd like to chat with my friends.

After 'would like to', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. Therefore, 'chatting' should be corrected to 'chat'.

× Secondly, when I chatting with friends, I will be much more happier than often.

✓ Secondly, when I am chatting with friends, I will be much happier than usual.

The verb 'chatting' needs an auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. Also, 'more happier' is incorrect because 'happier' is already comparative; 'more' should be removed. 'Than often' is incorrect; 'than usual' is appropriate.

× Uh, actually I used to charge my life, uh, with my friends, uh, for instance, when I say in some beautiful landscape or when, umm, I achieve a best goals on my studies, I will share with them.

✓ Uh, actually I used to share my life with my friends. For instance, when I see some beautiful landscapes or when I achieve the best goals in my studies, I share them with them.

The verb 'charge' is incorrect; it should be 'share'. 'Say' should be 'see' to make sense. 'A best goals' is incorrect; 'the best goals' is correct. Also, tense consistency is needed; 'will share' should be 'share' to match the habitual past action.

× Actually, I prefer like to chat with only one friends.

✓ Actually, I prefer to chat with only one friend.

'Friends' is plural but 'one' indicates singular, so 'friends' should be 'friend'. Also, 'prefer like to' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer to'.

× Well, you know I I don't social butterfly so I tend to chat with only one friends because I think one friends can understood me deeply.

✓ Well, you know I am not a social butterfly, so I tend to chat with only one friend because I think one friend can understand me deeply.

'I don't social butterfly' is incorrect; it should be 'I am not a social butterfly'. 'Friends' should be singular 'friend' to match 'one'. 'Can understood' should be 'can understand' because modal verbs are followed by base verbs.

× Umm, actually I'd like to communicate face to face because I sang face to face. Communications can understood your meanings by the body or the phrase language you know.

✓ Umm, actually I'd like to communicate face to face because I think face-to-face communication can help you understand meanings through body language or gestures, you know.

'Sang face to face' is incorrect; likely intended 'think face to face'. 'Communications can understood' is incorrect; should be 'communication can help you understand'. 'By the body or the phrase language' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'through body language or gestures'.

× Actually, I sometimes make an argument with my friends in my studies or in my work.

✓ Actually, I sometimes have arguments with my friends in my studies or at work.

'Make an argument' is less natural; 'have arguments' is better. 'In my work' should be 'at work' for correct preposition use.