聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally relevant but could be more concise and natural. Avoid filler words like 'umm' and redundant phrases such as 'like the fun thing or like interesting things'. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep your answer within 5 sentences.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it allows us to share life experiences and interesting events. Moreover, it helps strengthen our relationships and is an enjoyable way to spend time together.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and contains some grammatical errors. Avoid repeating phrases like 'for example' multiple times. Use linking words such as 'for instance' or 'also' to organize your ideas. Try to be more specific and concise in your descriptions.

範例: Usually, we chat about school events, such as who is dating or who broke up. We also share family news; for instance, I recently told them about my brother's accident.

建議: Your answer has several grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. Avoid phrases like 'round round up of conversation' and 'spaces, blank spaces in'. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' properly to connect your ideas. Try to express your thoughts more clearly and naturally.

範例: I prefer chatting with a group of people because I find it difficult to maintain one-on-one conversations. In group chats, there are more ideas and participants, so the conversation flows smoothly without awkward pauses.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains filler words and some awkward phrasing. Avoid 'umm' and phrases like 'what thing I should talk about'. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'however' correctly. Try to make your sentences more concise and natural.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can observe facial expressions, which helps me understand what topics interest the other person. However, social media feels less real since I cannot see their reactions clearly.

建議: Your answer is repetitive and contains filler words. Avoid repeating phrases like 'I argue' and 'like'. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'but' to connect ideas logically. Try to express your thoughts clearly and concisely.

範例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends because we have different opinions. However, we usually resolve our disagreements quickly by discussing them afterward.

× Yes, I do like chatting with my friend cause chatting with my friend we can umm exchange the life experience we had and also we can know about like the fun thing or like interesting things that happened between umm in our life.

✓ Yes, I do like chatting with my friends because chatting with my friends we can exchange the life experiences we had and also we can know about fun things or interesting things that happened in our lives.

The sentence incorrectly uses singular 'friend' when referring to multiple friends, which requires plural form 'friends'. Also, 'life experience' should be plural 'life experiences' to match the context of multiple experiences. 'Fun thing' should be plural 'fun things' to be consistent with 'interesting things'. 'In our life' should be 'in our lives' to match plural subject.

× Yes, I do like chatting with my friend cause chatting with my friend we can umm exchange the life experience we had and also we can know about like the fun thing or like interesting things that happened between umm in our life.

✓ Yes, I do like chatting with my friends because chatting with my friends we can exchange the life experiences we had and also we can know about fun things or interesting things that happened in our lives.

The phrase 'happened between umm in our life' is incorrect. The preposition 'between' is unnecessary and confusing here. The correct preposition is 'in' to indicate events occurring within our lives.

× Usually I gossip without with the school things that happen between us.

✓ Usually I gossip about the school things that happen between us.

The phrase 'gossip without with' is incorrect. The correct preposition to use with 'gossip' is 'about'. Also, 'school things' is vague but acceptable here.

× So for example, who's dating and who, who broke up and just the usual thing we talk about or like for example, we share about things happen in our family, for example, maybe my brother fall or something like that.

✓ So for example, who's dating and who broke up and just the usual things we talk about or like for example, we share about things happening in our family, for example, maybe my brother fell or something like that.

'Usual thing' should be plural 'usual things' to match the context of multiple topics. 'Things happen' should be 'things happening' to correctly describe ongoing events. 'My brother fall' should be past tense 'my brother fell' to indicate a past event.

× Maybe my brother fall or something like that.

✓ Maybe my brother fell or something like that.

The verb 'fall' should be in the past tense 'fell' to correctly indicate a past event.

× I prefer to chat with a group of people because I don't think I'm the person that I can handle with like one-on-one talk.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people because I don't think I'm the person who can handle one-on-one talks.

'One-on-one talk' should be plural 'one-on-one talks' to refer to the general activity. Also, 'that I can handle with' is incorrect; 'who can handle' is the correct relative pronoun and verb structure.

× I prefer to chat with a group of people because I don't think I'm the person that I can handle with like one-on-one talk.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people because I don't think I'm the person who can handle one-on-one talks.

The preposition 'with' after 'handle' is unnecessary and incorrect. The verb 'handle' does not require 'with' in this context.

× So we often round round up of conversation if I'm talking just with one people.

✓ So we often run out of conversation if I'm talking just with one person.

'Round round up of conversation' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo; the correct phrase is 'run out of conversation'. Also, 'one people' is incorrect; 'people' is plural, so the singular form 'person' should be used.

× But with group chat, we I can have like more ideas and more people who are in this conversation.

✓ But with group chat, I can have more ideas and more people who are in this conversation.

The phrase 'we I can have' is incorrect; it should be 'I can have'. The pronoun 'we' is unnecessary and causes confusion.

× So there won't be like spaces, blank spaces in.

✓ So there won't be blank spaces.

The preposition 'in' at the end is unnecessary and incorrect. The phrase 'blank spaces' stands alone without needing 'in'.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because by face to face I can look at their facial expressions to understand umm what thing I should talk about and they're interested in what topic.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because by face to face I can look at their facial expressions to understand what I should talk about and what topics they're interested in.

The phrase 'what thing I should talk about' is awkward; 'what I should talk about' is better. Also, 'they're interested in what topic' should be 'what topics they're interested in' for correct word order and plural form.

× But however in social media I can see about their facial expression or like their reaction so it feel more unreal for me to chat with people on social media.

✓ But however, on social media I cannot see their facial expressions or reactions, so it feels more unreal for me to chat with people on social media.

The preposition 'in' should be 'on' when referring to social media. 'See about' is incorrect; it should be 'see'. Also, 'facial expression' should be plural 'facial expressions' to match 'reactions'. 'It feel' should be 'it feels' for subject-verb agreement.

× So it feel more unreal for me to chat with people on social media.

✓ So it feels more unreal for me to chat with people on social media.

The subject 'it' is singular, so the verb should be 'feels' to agree in number.

× Yes, I argue, I argue with my friend, 'cause, umm, we are, we are like human.

✓ Yes, I argue, I argue with my friends, 'cause, umm, we are like humans.

'My friend' should be plural 'my friends' to match the context of general arguments. 'Human' should be plural 'humans' to agree with 'we are'.

× So we often have like different opinions.

✓ So we often have different opinions.

The filler word 'like' is unnecessary and informal; removing it improves clarity and formality.

× So every time if our opinions are different and we can not settle, we cannot have like a settlement about the ideas that we might have, the argument between us.

✓ So every time our opinions are different and we cannot settle, we cannot reach a settlement about the ideas we have, leading to an argument between us.

The phrase 'if our opinions are different and we can not settle' is awkward; 'every time our opinions are different and we cannot settle' is clearer. 'Like a settlement' is informal; 'a settlement' is better. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× But we often like settle this argument very fast 'cause we talk about it afterward.

✓ But we often settle this argument very quickly because we talk about it afterward.

The word 'like' is unnecessary and informal. 'Very fast' should be 'very quickly' to use the correct adverb form. 'Cause' should be 'because' for formality.