聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“I'd very like chatting”应为“I really like chatting”。建议加强语法基础，注意主谓一致和时态使用，同时避免重复和冗余表达。

範例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it makes me feel comfortable and happy.

建議: 回答中时态混乱且表达不清晰，如“have don't enough time”应为“don't have enough time”。建议练习正确使用时态和句子结构，表达时要简洁明了。

範例: When I was in school, I used to chat with my friends a lot, but after graduation, I don't have enough time to talk with them.

建議: 回答中有很多语法错误和不连贯的表达，如“it's have different education”不符合语法。建议多练习句子结构，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: It depends on the situation. When I was in school, I usually chatted with friends about study materials, but now I prefer talking to one friend because it feels more comfortable.

建議: 回答基本表达了观点，但存在语法错误，如“can makes”应为“can make”。建议注意动词形式和句子简洁性。

範例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because I can see people's facial expressions, which helps me understand them better.

建議: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多，如“argue is a problem for each other”表达不准确。建议学习如何清楚表达观点，使用正确的句子结构。

範例: Actually, I don't usually argue with my friends because I believe we can solve most problems by talking calmly.

× Yes, I'd very like chatting with friends.

✓ Yes, I'd very much like chatting with friends.

这里'd是would的缩写，后面应该用副词修饰like，very后面缺少副词much，正确表达是very much like。

× I have a lot of friends and I when I chatting with him I feel like comfortable and is and so enjoy it.

✓ I have a lot of friends and when I chat with them, I feel comfortable and enjoy it very much.

动词chat后面不应该用-ing形式，应该用一般现在时chat；feel后面形容词comfortable前不需要like；句子结构混乱，需调整顺序和代词him改为them以匹配复数friends。

× When I was in school, I have a lot of time to chatting my with my friend, but I'm great when I graduate I have don't enough time to chatting with my friend.

✓ When I was in school, I had a lot of time to chat with my friends, but now after I graduated, I don't have enough time to chat with my friends.

to后面接动词原形chat，不是chatting；时态应与时间状语一致，过去时had；句子中have don't应改为don't have；my friend应改为friends以匹配复数。

× Uh, it's have different education because I think, uh, when I was in school, I usually chat with a friend to talk about our reference or something about uh, study.

✓ Uh, it depends on different education because I think, uh, when I was in school, I usually chatted with a friend to talk about our references or something about study.

it's have不正确，应改为it depends；chat后面应使用过去时chatted；reference应复数references；about study前不需要介词about。

× But now I really like uh, with only one friend is me is making me comfortable.

✓ But now I really like chatting with only one friend because it makes me comfortable.

like后面应接动词的-ing形式chatting；with only one friend前不应有is me；句子结构需调整使表达清晰。

× Yes, I'd like to communicate face to face because it can makes me see others people's face.

✓ Yes, I'd like to communicate face to face because it can make me see other people's faces.

情态动词can后动词用原形make，不加s；others people's face应改为other people's faces，复数形式。

× It makes me more clear to understand what they say.

✓ It makes it clearer for me to understand what they say.

more clear应改为比较级clearer；动词understand前加介词for me使句子更自然。

× Actually not, because I think argue is a problem for each other and I think most questions we will talk about and I say it's necessary for argue.

✓ Actually not, because I think arguing is a problem between each other and I think for most questions we will talk about them, and I don't think it's necessary to argue.

argue作为动词，名词形式为arguing；for each other应改为between each other；句子结构混乱，需调整使表达清晰；necessary后接不定式to argue。