聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Make your answer more coherent by linking ideas smoothly and keeping it concise within 5 sentences.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me stay connected, especially when we are busy. We often share funny videos and interesting stories, which makes our conversations enjoyable. Overall, chatting with friends is a great way to relax and feel close to them.

建議: Avoid filler words and unclear phrases. Provide a clear and specific answer with relevant details and use linking words to organize your ideas.

範例: We usually chat about funny videos and interesting stories. Additionally, we discuss popular topics on social media, such as trends and news. This keeps our conversations lively and up-to-date.

建議: Work on sentence clarity and grammar. Express your preference clearly and support it with reasons using linking words.

範例: I prefer chatting with a group of people because I have many friends. Moreover, group chats are more lively and allow me to interact with several friends at once, which is more enjoyable than talking to just one person.

建議: Reduce hesitation and incomplete sentences. Provide a complete explanation with clear reasons and use linking words to connect your ideas.

範例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it is the best way to understand people's real emotions. Additionally, you can observe their body language and facial expressions, which makes communication more effective and meaningful.

建議: Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure. Give a clear and specific answer with supporting details and use linking words for coherence.

範例: Actually, I don't argue with my friends because we usually share the same opinions on most topics. Therefore, our relationship is very friendly and harmonious.

× Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because I because it helps me stay connected with them.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me stay connected with them.

The sentence contains a repeated phrase 'because I because' which is redundant and disrupts sentence structure. Removing the extra 'because I' corrects the sentence.

× Especially when we are busy.

✓ Especially when we are busy,

This is a sentence fragment lacking a main clause. It should be connected to the previous sentence with a comma to form a complete sentence.

× We often share funny videos and interesting stories, so it's a great way.

✓ We often share funny videos and interesting stories, so it's a great way to stay connected.

The phrase 'so it's a great way' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'to stay connected' clarifies the meaning and completes the sentence.

× MMM we often share funny videos and interesting stories.

✓ We often share funny videos and interesting stories.

The filler 'MMM' is unnecessary and should be removed for clarity and formality.

× So, umm, usually our conservation was about were about conservation was about umm, like the popular time of social media.

✓ So, usually our conversation is about popular topics on social media.

The sentence is repetitive and contains incorrect words like 'conservation' instead of 'conversation' and confusing tense usage. Simplifying and correcting the vocabulary and tense improves clarity.

× I prefer more chat with a group of people because I have a lot of friends so I think it it it was it will be more easier than chatting with or was only 1 friend.

✓ I prefer chatting with a group of people because I have a lot of friends, so I think it will be easier than chatting with only one friend.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'prefer more chat' should be 'prefer chatting'; 'more easier' is incorrect comparative form, should be 'easier'; 'or was only 1 friend' is unclear and should be 'only one friend'. Correcting these improves grammar and clarity.

× I prefer more to communicate face to face because it's always be the, uh, best way of communicating because you can see the real emotion of people.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because it's always the best way of communicating since you can see people's real emotions.

The phrase 'it's always be' is incorrect; 'be' should be removed. Also, 'prefer more to communicate' is awkward; 'prefer to communicate' is correct. 'The real emotion of people' is better expressed as 'people's real emotions'.

× Umm, his action and uh, just, umm, you can be very umm.

✓ Umm, their actions, and you can be very expressive.

'His action' is incorrect when referring generally; 'their actions' is more appropriate. The original sentence is incomplete and unclear; adding 'you can be very expressive' completes the thought.

× Actually no, because we always had the same ideas about the theme.

✓ Actually no, because we always have the same ideas about the topic.

The use of past tense 'had' conflicts with 'always' which indicates a habitual action; present tense 'have' is correct. Also, 'theme' is better replaced with 'topic' in this context.

× We're very glad, umm, and friendly.

✓ We're very close and friendly.

'Glad' is an emotion and does not fit well here; 'close' better expresses a positive relationship between friends. This correction improves meaning and appropriateness.