聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' to make your speech more fluent. Also, use more natural phrasing and correct grammar, for example, say 'friends are an important part of our lives' and 'they not only help me relax but also provide me with new information.'

範例: Yes, I do. I enjoy chatting with friends because they are an important part of our lives. They not only help me relax but also provide me with new information that I might not know.

建議: Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences. Structure your answer clearly by stating the main topics you chat about and then giving specific examples. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'also' to connect ideas.

範例: I usually chat with my friends about our daily routines. For example, we discuss our classes and help each other with study problems whenever someone falls behind.

建議: Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid repetition. Use linking words to explain your preference logically. For example, say 'I prefer chatting with one friend because group chats can be distracting and less focused.'

範例: I prefer chatting with one friend because group conversations can be noisy and distracting. When I talk to one person, we can share ideas more deeply and focus better.

建議: Reduce filler words and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words like 'however' to contrast ideas. For example, 'I prefer face-to-face communication; however, due to busy schedules, social media is important for staying in touch.'

範例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it feels more personal. However, nowadays we are very busy, so social media is important to keep in touch with friends.

建議: Avoid filler words and complete your sentences fully. Explain why arguing can be positive with clear examples and linking words like 'because' and 'so'.

範例: Yes, I do argue with friends sometimes because it helps me learn new perspectives. When we disagree, we can share valid points and understand each other better.

× I like chatting with friends because friends are the important element of our life.

✓ I like chatting with friends because friends are an important element of our life.

The definite article 'the' is incorrectly used before 'important element'. Since 'important element' is a general statement, the indefinite article 'an' should be used instead.

× They uh, not only give me relax, give me a relax environment, but also umm, provide some information which is uh, not known for me.

✓ They not only help me relax and give me a relaxing environment, but also provide some information which is unknown to me.

The verb 'give me relax' is incorrect; 'help me relax' is appropriate. 'Relax' should be an adjective 'relaxing' to describe 'environment'. Also, 'not known for me' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'unknown to me'.

× I usually chat with my friends about our daily routine and uh, we also help each other about our study whenever he, uh, cannot catch up any lesson, uh, he asked me to help him about the about this study and I will help him as a.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about our daily routine, and we also help each other with our studies. Whenever one of them cannot catch up with any lesson, he asks me to help him with his studies, and I help him.

The pronoun 'he' is used ambiguously; it should be 'one of them' or 'a friend' to generalize. Also, 'help each other about our study' should be 'help each other with our studies'. The sentence is incomplete and needs restructuring for clarity.

× Basically, I don't prefer to chat with a group of people because many people whenever many people engage you with chat, they always fun together.

✓ Basically, I don't prefer to chat with a group of people because whenever many people engage you in chat, they always have fun together.

The phrase 'they always fun together' is incorrect; 'fun' is a noun, so the verb 'have' is needed. Also, 'engage you with chat' should be 'engage you in chat'.

× They are There are no study time, but when we ask only about 1 friend, we share.

✓ There is no study time, but when we ask only one friend, we share.

The phrase 'They are There are' is redundant and incorrect. 'There is no study time' is the correct structure. Also, 'ask only about 1 friend' should be 'ask only one friend'.

× Basically, I prefer to communicate face to face rather than social media.

✓ Basically, I prefer to communicate face to face rather than via social media.

The phrase 'rather than social media' lacks the preposition 'via' which is necessary to indicate the medium of communication.

× communication, uh, with face to face is not possible for all the time, but social media is uh, so important to communicate with one.

✓ Communication face to face is not possible all the time, but social media is very important to communicate with others.

The phrase 'communicate with one' is unclear and incorrect; 'communicate with others' is appropriate. Also, 'with face to face' should be 'face to face' without 'with'.

× I argue with friends because it provides me, uh, greater information.

✓ I argue with friends because it provides me with greater information.

The verb 'provides' requires the preposition 'with' to indicate what is being provided.

× Because when we talk to each other, sometimes we, umm, do not uh, agree with one another. Then one friend give some, uh, valid way to.

✓ Because when we talk to each other, sometimes we do not agree with one another. Then one friend gives some valid suggestions.

The verb 'give' should be 'gives' to agree with singular subject 'one friend'. The phrase 'valid way to' is incomplete and unclear; 'valid suggestions' is clearer and grammatically correct.