聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant but a bit lengthy and slightly repetitive. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise, and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relieve stress after a busy day. We usually call each other to catch up on daily activities, which not only relaxes us but also strengthens our friendship.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and has some grammatical errors. Try to organise your ideas better and use linking words to make your response coherent. Also, be more specific about the topics you discuss.

範例: I usually chat with my best friends about daily events or upcoming important occasions. This helps us stay updated about each other's lives and support one another when needed.

建議: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to express your ideas fully and use correct sentence structures. Also, explain your preference clearly with reasons.

範例: I prefer chatting one-on-one with a close friend because it helps me build a personal bond. For example, I often talk to my best friend who understands me well, rather than chatting in a group.

建議: Your answer is disorganised and incomplete. Avoid filler words and unclear phrases. Provide a clear opinion with reasons and use linking words to connect your ideas.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to read my friends' expressions and understand their moods better. Moreover, I feel social media is less secure as chats can be leaked.

建議: Your answer is relevant but a bit long and has some grammatical mistakes. Try to use shorter sentences and linking words to improve clarity and coherence.

範例: I rarely argue with my friends. Although we sometimes have different opinions, we respect each other's views and find common ground to avoid conflicts, as I believe arguments can harm long-term relationships.

× After the hectic schedule of the day, we always try to call me and my friend always try to catch up and talk about the day-to-day activities which helps us feel a bit relaxed and strengthen our relationship.

✓ After the hectic schedule of the day, my friend and I always try to call each other and catch up and talk about the day-to-day activities which help us feel a bit relaxed and strengthen our relationship.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'try to call me' which is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'my friend and I try to call each other' to correctly express mutual action. Also, 'helps' should be 'help' to agree with the plural subject 'activities'. The sentence structure was confusing and needed reordering for clarity.

× After the hectic schedule of the day, we always try to call me and my friend always try to catch up and talk about the day-to-day activities which helps us feel a bit relaxed and strengthen our relationship.

✓ After the hectic schedule of the day, my friend and I always try to call each other and catch up and talk about the day-to-day activities which help us feel a bit relaxed and strengthen our relationship.

The pronoun 'me' is incorrectly used as the object of 'try to call'; it should be 'my friend and I try to call each other' to correctly indicate mutual calling. Using 'me' here is incorrect because the subject and object roles are confused.

× Normally I'll talk about daily events with my best friends or if something important is coming up.

✓ Normally, I talk about daily events with my best friends or if something important is coming up.

The use of 'I'll talk' (future tense) is inappropriate when describing habitual actions. The present simple tense 'I talk' is correct for habitual or regular actions.

× We don't talk about anything in particular, just random day-to-day stuff so that we are just updating about each other's life and have a stronger mode and always aware of if anyone needs.

✓ We don't talk about anything in particular, just random day-to-day stuff so that we are just updating each other about our lives and have a stronger bond and are always aware if anyone needs help.

The phrase 'updating about each other's life' is incorrect; it should be 'updating each other about our lives' to correctly use pronouns and possessives. Also, 'mode' is likely a typo for 'bond'. The sentence was incomplete and unclear, so it was corrected for clarity and grammar.

× I believe in creating personal bonds and that thing that can only be done with just few people, maybe one or two.

✓ I believe in creating personal bonds and that can only be done with just a few people, maybe one or two.

The phrase 'just few people' is incorrect; it should be 'just a few people' because 'few' without 'a' implies almost none, whereas 'a few' means some. The article 'a' is necessary here.

× So I always prefer talking to one by one of my friends.

✓ So I always prefer talking to my friends one by one.

The phrase 'talking to one by one of my friends' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'talking to my friends one by one' to properly place the quantifier and pronoun.

× She is my go to person and everything. No new people and new friends adding to my life but still she's my.

✓ She is my go-to person and everything to me. I don't add new people or new friends to my life, but she is still my closest friend.

The original sentences are fragmented and incomplete. 'No new people and new friends adding to my life but still she's my' is incomplete and unclear. The correction provides complete sentences with proper structure and clarity.

× And set them up between my days and hits.

✓ I arrange meetings between my busy days and breaks.

The original sentence is unclear and incomplete. It seems to attempt to express scheduling meetings between busy times. The correction provides a clear and grammatically correct sentence conveying the intended meaning.

× Personally, I believe that communicating face to face is the best option and the best way that I feel comfortable in because I can't trust social media.

✓ Personally, I believe that communicating face to face is the best option and the way I feel most comfortable because I can't trust social media.

The phrase 'the best way that I feel comfortable in' is awkward and incorrect. It should be 'the way I feel most comfortable' to correctly use pronouns and comparative adverbs.

× Your chats can get leaked and also, uh, I think I cannot read my friends expressions and cannot understand their mood, which is.

✓ Your chats can get leaked and also, I think I cannot read my friends' expressions or understand their mood, which is difficult.

The phrase 'read my friends expressions' lacks the possessive apostrophe; it should be 'friends' expressions'. Also, 'which is' is incomplete; adding 'difficult' completes the thought. The conjunction 'and' is better replaced with 'or' to express inability to do either.

× I don't recognize arguing with my friends though I know sometimes me and my friend have opposite opinions on something but we understand each other's opinions and decisions and come on a common point instead of arguing about a certain thing as I think it will ruins the relationship created over the years.

✓ I don't engage in arguing with my friends, though I know sometimes my friend and I have opposite opinions on something, but we understand each other's opinions and decisions and come to a common point instead of arguing about a certain thing, as I think it will ruin the relationship created over the years.

The phrase 'me and my friend' is incorrect; it should be 'my friend and I' as the subject. 'I don't recognize arguing' is awkward; 'I don't engage in arguing' is better. 'Come on a common point' should be 'come to a common point'. 'It will ruins' should be 'it will ruin' because 'will' is followed by the base verb form.