聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ответ должен быть более структурированным и естественным, избегайте повторов и пауз. Используйте связующие слова для плавности речи и старайтесь давать более конкретные причины.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps us stay connected all the time. Moreover, it's a fun way to relax and also a useful tool to ask questions or share information.

建議: Старайтесь строить предложения грамматически правильно и использовать связующие слова для логичности. Давайте более конкретные примеры и избегайте лишних слов.

範例: Usually, we chat about our daily activities and ask each other how our day went. For instance, yesterday I asked my friend about his mood, and we had a nice conversation.

建議: Используйте правильные формы слов и избегайте лишних слов. Связывайте предложения логически и объясняйте свои предпочтения более подробно.

範例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because private conversations feel safer and more comfortable for me. It allows for a deeper and more personal connection.

建議: Избегайте повторов и пауз, используйте правильные грамматические конструкции. Добавьте связующие слова для плавности и конкретизируйте свои мысли.

範例: I believe that communicating face-to-face is better than via social media because you can see your friend's emotions and facial expressions, which makes the interaction more genuine.

建議: Старайтесь говорить более связно и избегать повторов. Объясняйте причины и приводите конкретные примеры, используя связующие слова для логичности.

範例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, usually depending on the situation. For example, we had a misunderstanding last time while playing soccer, which led to a small argument.

× Of course, I like chatting with friends, helps us to be in touch every time, I mean always.

✓ Of course, I like chatting with friends because it helps us to be in touch all the time.

The original sentence is a run-on sentence lacking proper conjunctions and subject-verb agreement. Adding 'because' clarifies the relationship between clauses and 'helps' requires a subject 'it' to be grammatically correct.

× I also uh, is a type of entertainment and uh, uh, you can use it as a tool to ask any question from your friend.

✓ I also think it is a type of entertainment, and you can use it as a tool to ask any question from your friend.

The original sentence lacks a clear subject for 'is a type of entertainment'. Adding 'I also think it' provides the necessary subject and verb. Removing filler words improves clarity.

× OK we usually chat about our day or to ask how is my friends day.

✓ OK, we usually chat about our day or ask how my friend's day was.

The phrase 'to ask how is my friends day' is incorrect in word order and possessive form. It should be 'ask how my friend's day was' to correctly use the possessive and proper word order in indirect questions.

× For example yesterday I chatted to my friend just to ask how is his mood so we just conversate any.

✓ For example, yesterday I chatted with my friend just to ask how his mood was, so we just conversed a bit.

The sentence has incorrect prepositions ('chatted to' should be 'chatted with'), incorrect word order in indirect question, and 'conversate' is not standard English; 'conversed' is correct. Also, 'any' is unclear and replaced with 'a bit' for clarity.

× I prefer to chat only with one friend because I love private chattings and.

✓ I prefer to chat only with one friend because I love private chatting.

The noun 'chattings' is incorrect; 'chatting' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized.

× Thanks to only to one person gives you feeling safety and it more comfortable for me so I like it.

✓ Talking to only one person gives you a feeling of safety and it is more comfortable for me, so I like it.

The original sentence has awkward phrasing and missing verbs. 'Thanks to only to one person' is incorrect; it should be 'Talking to only one person'. Also, 'feeling safety' should be 'a feeling of safety', and 'it more comfortable' needs the verb 'is'.

× I believe that uh, communicate face to face is more better than via social media because uh, you can see uh, your friends emotions and mimic so you will feel him or her in real.

✓ I believe that communicating face to face is better than via social media because you can see your friends' emotions and expressions, so you will feel their presence in real life.

'More better' is incorrect; 'better' alone suffices. 'Communicate' should be 'communicating' to function as a gerund. 'Mimic' is incorrect here; 'expressions' or 'facial expressions' is appropriate. 'Feel him or her in real' is awkward; 'feel their presence in real life' is clearer.

× Of course, I sometimes argue with my friends and the reason why we argue is depends on the situation.

✓ Of course, I sometimes argue with my friends, and the reason why we argue depends on the situation.

The phrase 'is depends' is incorrect; 'depends' alone is correct. The modal verb 'is' is unnecessary here.

× For example, last time we when we had a misunderstanding was when we played soccer.

✓ For example, the last time we had a misunderstanding was when we played soccer.

The phrase 'we when we' is redundant and incorrect. Removing 'we' after 'last time' corrects the sentence structure.