聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to avoid redundancy and improve naturalness by using more precise vocabulary and clearer sentence structure. For example, instead of repeating 'share many stories' and 'share a lot of stories', use varied expressions and avoid filler words like 'yeah'.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends. We often exchange interesting stories and keep each other updated on the latest news.

建議: Make your answer more coherent by using linking words and avoid listing without connection. Also, be more specific and avoid ending abruptly with 'That's all'.

範例: I usually chat with my friends about different topics, such as upcoming exams, cultural programs, and interesting videos we share. We also discuss questions related to our cultural traditions.

建議: Improve sentence structure and use linking words to make your answer more fluent. Avoid repeating the same idea and filler words like 'Yeah'.

範例: I prefer chatting with one friend because group chats often involve many opinions, which can sometimes lead to conflicts or misunderstandings. Therefore, one-on-one conversations feel more comfortable and clear.

建議: Work on grammar and clarity. Replace informal fillers like 'Uh' and unclear phrases like 'no scariness about the opposite people' with clearer expressions. Use linking words to connect ideas.

範例: I prefer communicating via social media because people can reply when they are free. Also, I feel more comfortable expressing myself honestly online without feeling shy.

建議: Improve grammar and sentence flow. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repeating similar phrases. Avoid filler words like 'Yeah'.

範例: No, I try to avoid arguments with my friends because they can damage trust. Instead, I focus on communicating openly to resolve any disagreements and strengthen our friendship.

× I love to do that.

✓ I love doing that.

In English, after verbs like 'love', the gerund form (-ing) is more natural than the infinitive 'to do'. So, 'I love doing that' is preferred over 'I love to do that'.

× I share many stories with my friends through chat.

✓ I share a lot of stories with my friends through chat.

'Many' is used with countable nouns, but 'stories' is countable, so 'many' is acceptable; however, 'a lot of' is more natural in spoken English here. This is a stylistic suggestion rather than a strict grammar error.

× We save many gossips and we share a lot of stories, yeah.

✓ We save a lot of gossip and we share a lot of stories, yeah.

'Gossip' is an uncountable noun, so 'many gossips' is incorrect. Use 'a lot of gossip' instead.

× There are various topics I chat with my friends, such as exams, cultural programs or reels we share, or many types of questions we text and answer about our cultural tradition, about our upcoming exam.

✓ There are various topics I chat about with my friends, such as exams, cultural programs, reels we share, or many types of questions we text and answer about our cultural tradition and our upcoming exams.

The verb 'chat' is usually followed by the preposition 'about'. Also, 'exam' should be plural to match 'many types of questions' and 'upcoming exams'. Commas are added for clarity.

× I prefer to chat with only one friend because when we chat in Group of people, there are a lot of people, they have various opinion.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because when we chat in a group of people, there are a lot of people, and they have various opinions.

'Group' should be lowercase and preceded by an article 'a'. 'Opinion' should be plural 'opinions' to agree with 'a lot of people'. Also, 'and' is added to connect the clauses properly.

× I prefer to chat with only one friend because when we chat in Group of people, there are a lot of people, they have various opinion.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because when we chat in a group of people, there are a lot of people, and they have various opinions.

The preposition 'in' is correct here, but 'Group' should be lowercase and preceded by 'a'. Also, 'opinion' should be plural 'opinions'.

× Sometimes it can create conflict or misunderstanding.

✓ Sometimes it can create conflict or misunderstandings.

'Misunderstanding' can be countable or uncountable, but here plural 'misunderstandings' fits better to match 'conflict'.

× I prefer to chat with one friend rather than a group of people.

✓ I prefer to chat with one friend rather than with a group of people.

The preposition 'with' should be repeated before 'a group of people' for clarity and correctness.

× I prefer to communicate via social media because whenever people will be free, they will reply my text or they will receive my call.

✓ I prefer to communicate via social media because whenever people are free, they reply to my texts or receive my calls.

In conditional clauses with 'whenever', present simple is used instead of 'will'. Also, 'reply' is followed by 'to' and 'texts' and 'calls' should be plural for general statements.

× I prefer to communicate via social media because whenever people will be free, they will reply my text or they will receive my call.

✓ I prefer to communicate via social media because whenever people are free, they reply to my texts or receive my calls.

'Reply' requires the preposition 'to' before the object.

× Uh, also, I can tell anything freely via social media 'cause there is no scariness about the opposite people that's.

✓ Also, I can say anything freely via social media because there is no fear of the other people.

'Tell anything' is incorrect; 'say anything' is better. 'Scariness' is not commonly used; 'fear' is better. 'Opposite people' is unclear; 'other people' is correct. The phrase 'that's' is unnecessary and unclear.

× No, I always try to avoid argument in friendship, cause argument distrust the friendship.

✓ No, I always try to avoid arguments in friendship because arguments distrust friendship.

'Argument' should be plural 'arguments' to match the context. 'In friendship' is acceptable but 'in a friendship' or 'in friendships' is more natural. 'Cause' should be 'because' in formal speech.

× I always try to strengthen my friendship.

✓ I always try to strengthen my friendships.

'Friendship' can be singular or plural; plural 'friendships' is better if referring to multiple friends.

× That's why I like to avoid all of these things.

✓ That's why I like to avoid all these things.

'All of these things' is acceptable but 'all these things' is more natural and concise.

× We always communicate to finish the argument.

✓ We always communicate to resolve the argument.

'Finish the argument' is awkward; 'resolve the argument' or 'settle the argument' is more appropriate.