聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to use more natural expressions and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of saying "I do like chatting", say "I enjoy chatting". Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax. Usually, I invite them to my house so we can talk freely and cook simple meals together.

建議: Focus on clarity and grammar. Avoid phrases like "without any thinking" which sound unnatural. Use linking words to organize your ideas and be more specific about topics.

範例: I usually chat with my friends about various topics such as stories, movies, and our daily lives because we are close and comfortable with each other.

建議: Improve sentence structure and grammar. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly.

範例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because I feel shy in groups. Talking one-on-one makes me feel more relaxed and comfortable.

建議: Complete your sentences and use correct grammar. Explain your reasons clearly with linking words. Avoid incomplete thoughts.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because personal interaction allows me to observe facial expressions and understand my friend's feelings better.

建議: Use more natural phrases and correct grammar. Instead of "different type of overview", say "different opinions". Use linking words to explain the situation clearly.

範例: Sometimes I argue with my friends when we have different opinions on various topics, but we always discuss the good and bad points respectfully.

× Usually I invite them in my house so that we can talk freely and cook something simple.

✓ Usually I invite them to my house so that we can talk freely and cook something simple.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used here. The correct preposition to indicate going to someone's house is 'to'. So, 'invite them to my house' is correct.

× Usually I chat with my friends without any thinking because of they are my friends.

✓ Usually I chat with my friends without any thinking because they are my friends.

The phrase 'because of they are my friends' is incorrect. 'Because of' should be followed by a noun or noun phrase, not a clause. Here, 'because they are my friends' is correct.

× I can talk with them any kind of topic like some kind of stories or movies or discussions about our daily life.

✓ I can talk with them about any kind of topic like stories, movies, or discussions about our daily life.

The verb 'talk' is usually followed by the preposition 'about' when referring to topics. Also, 'some kind of stories or movies' is better simplified to 'stories, movies' for clarity.

× I do prefer only one friend to chat because I feel very shy to talk in a group so I prefer to talk in person.

✓ I do prefer chatting with only one friend because I feel very shy talking in a group, so I prefer to talk in person.

The phrase 'prefer only one friend to chat' is awkward. Using 'prefer chatting with only one friend' is clearer. Also, 'to talk in a group' is better as 'talking in a group' to match the gerund form after 'feel shy'.

× It fools me more relaxed and comfortable and.

✓ It makes me feel more relaxed and comfortable.

The word 'fools' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'makes'. Also, the sentence was incomplete and needed 'feel' to express the state properly.

× I do prefer to talk face to face because personal interaction is very important to me so that I can observe the face reaction, what she is understand about my feelings and I can also.

✓ I do prefer to talk face to face because personal interaction is very important to me so that I can observe facial reactions, understand what she feels about my feelings, and I can also...

The phrase 'face reaction' should be 'facial reactions'. 'What she is understand' is incorrect; it should be 'understand what she feels'. The sentence is incomplete but corrected for grammar and clarity.

× I do argue with my friends sometimes if we have different type of overview in any kind of topics, we always discuss about the good and bad part.

✓ I do argue with my friends sometimes if we have different types of views on any kind of topic; we always discuss the good and bad parts.

'Different type' should be plural 'different types' to agree with plural 'views'. 'Overview' is better replaced with 'views' or 'opinions'. 'Discuss about' is incorrect; 'discuss' does not need 'about'. Also, 'part' should be plural 'parts'.