聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to use more natural phrasing and correct grammar, for example, say 'the easiest way to interact with them' instead of 'to interaction'. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating 'friends and also family members' twice. Keep your answer concise and clear.

範例: Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it makes me happy. Sometimes, we don't have time to meet in person, so chatting is the easiest way to stay connected.

建議: Focus on answering the question directly and avoid general statements. Instead of saying 'chatting is really important in our life', give specific examples of topics you discuss. Also, use more natural expressions like 'daily activities' instead of 'daily works'.

範例: I usually chat with my friends about my daily activities, like what I did at school or any interesting events that happened.

建議: Improve grammar by saying 'I would choose to chat' instead of 'to chatting'. Also, use linking words like 'however' to make your answer more coherent. Try to be more concise and avoid repeating similar ideas.

範例: It depends on my mood. If I feel close to someone, I prefer chatting with one friend; however, if I want to share my feelings, I choose to chat with a group.

建議: Use more natural expressions like 'when I feel outgoing' instead of 'extrovert'. Also, avoid filler words like 'uh'. Try to connect your ideas smoothly using linking words such as 'while' or 'but'.

範例: It depends on my mood. When I feel outgoing, I prefer face-to-face conversations, but when I feel lonely, I prefer chatting online.

建議: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure. Instead of 'argue with them with that about the topic', say 'discuss it with them'. Be more specific about the reasons for arguments and keep your answer clear and concise.

範例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends when they do something wrong. I try to explain my opinion and discuss the issue with them calmly.

× Then the chatting is the easiest way to interaction with them.

✓ Then chatting is the easiest way to interact with them.

The verb 'interaction' is a noun, but here a verb is needed after 'to'. The correct verb form is 'interact'. So, 'to interaction' should be corrected to 'to interact'.

× I usually chat about my everyday life.

✓ I usually chat about my daily life.

The phrase 'everyday life' is an adjective phrase meaning common or normal, but 'daily life' is more appropriate when referring to routine activities. Using 'daily life' is clearer and more natural in this context.

× we need to share our daily works and experiences with friends and also family members.

✓ we need to share our daily work and experiences with friends and also family members.

The word 'work' is generally uncountable when referring to tasks or job-related activities, so 'works' is incorrect here. Use 'work' without 's' to refer to daily tasks or activities.

× I would choose to chatting with one friend and also if I want to share my emotions and experiences with a group of people then I will choose to chat with a group.

✓ I would choose to chat with one friend and also if I want to share my emotions and experiences with a group of people then I will choose to chat with a group.

After 'choose to', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. So, 'choose to chatting' is incorrect; it should be 'choose to chat'.

× If I feel really free and also extrovert, I prefer face to face conversation.

✓ If I feel really free and also extroverted, I prefer face-to-face conversation.

'Extrovert' is a noun; the adjective form is 'extroverted'. Also, 'face to face' as an adjective should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face'.

× If my friends uh, are doing something wrong or which is not good, I argue with them with that about the topic.

✓ If my friends are doing something wrong or something that is not good, I argue with them about that topic.

The phrase 'or which is not good' is incorrect; it should be 'or something that is not good'. Also, 'argue with them with that about the topic' is awkward; correct phrasing is 'argue with them about that topic'.