聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ответ должен быть более структурированным и естественным. Избегайте повторений и старайтесь использовать связующие слова для плавности речи.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and feel happy. Usually, we talk about our daily lives or share interesting stories, which makes our time together enjoyable.

建議: Старайтесь давать более конкретные и разнообразные детали, избегайте повторений и используйте связующие слова для логичности.

範例: We usually chat about various topics such as school assignments, daily chores, and sometimes we share gossip about people we know. This variety keeps our conversations interesting.

建議: Ответ должен быть более чётким и грамматически правильным. Используйте связующие слова для объяснения причин вашего выбора.

範例: I definitely prefer chatting with just one friend because it allows me to share my thoughts openly. Moreover, one-on-one conversations feel more personal and comfortable.

建議: Старайтесь строить предложения грамматически правильно и избегать пауз. Используйте связующие слова для плавности и ясности.

範例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face with my best friend because it's more personal. However, with others, I usually use social media since it's more convenient for casual chats.

建議: Избегайте повторений и пауз, стройте предложения более плавно и логично, используя связующие слова.

範例: No, I don't argue with my friends. Since childhood, I've had many friends, including two best friends, and our strong relationships help us avoid conflicts.

× I always like to spend my time with my friends and chatting with them of course, or staying at home with them and this type of things.

✓ I always like to spend my time with my friends, chatting with them of course, or staying at home with them and these types of things.

After 'like to spend my time with my friends,' the verb 'chatting' should be in the gerund form to correctly express activities. Also, 'this type of things' is incorrect; it should be 'these types of things' to match plural 'things.'

× this type of things

✓ these types of things

'This type of things' is incorrect because 'type' is singular and 'things' is plural. The correct phrase is 'these types of things' to agree in number.

× And I think if I chat with them, I feel really enjoyable and.

✓ And I think if I chat with them, I feel really happy and enjoy myself.

'Feel really enjoyable' is incorrect because 'enjoyable' describes something that causes enjoyment, not a feeling. The sentence is incomplete and needs a proper adjective or verb phrase to express the feeling.

× we have a different type of themes to chat with.

✓ we have different types of themes to chat about.

'Chat with' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'chat about' when referring to topics. Also, 'a different type of themes' is incorrect; it should be 'different types of themes' to agree in number.

× we have a different type of themes to chat with.

✓ we have different types of themes to chat about.

'A different type' is singular, but 'themes' is plural. The phrase should be pluralized to 'different types' to match 'themes.'

× My friends especially, we talk.

✓ My friends, especially, we talk.

The sentence is awkward due to misplaced commas. Adding commas around 'especially' clarifies the sentence structure.

× we always chat about our homeworks or house, house chores.

✓ we always chat about our homework or house chores.

'Homework' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'homeworks.' Also, the repetition 'house, house chores' is incorrect; it should be 'house chores.'

× when you will be with a one person, you can say everything inside you.

✓ when you are with one person, you can say everything inside you.

'A one person' is incorrect; 'one person' does not need an article 'a.' Also, 'will be' is unnecessary here; present tense 'are' fits better in this context.

× If I will be with my really best friend, I prefer to communicate with her face to face,

✓ If I am with my really best friend, I prefer to communicate with her face to face,

In conditional sentences, the present tense is used after 'if' to talk about future possibilities. 'If I will be' is incorrect; it should be 'If I am.'

× I really prefer to uh, chat with with in via social media.

✓ I really prefer to, uh, chat via social media.

The phrase 'chat with with in via social media' is redundant and incorrect. The correct preposition is 'via' when referring to communication through social media.

× I can't really talk with them about many things.

✓ I can't really talk to them about many things.

The verb 'talk' is usually followed by the preposition 'to' when indicating the person spoken to, not 'with' in this context.

× Since my childhood I've I have many friends and of course I have two best friends but I never and ever argue with them until this time.

✓ Since my childhood, I've had many friends and, of course, I have two best friends, but I have never argued with them until now.

The present perfect 'I've had' is needed to indicate an action continuing from the past to present. 'Never and ever argue' is incorrect; 'have never argued' is the correct form. 'Until this time' should be 'until now.'