聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it contains some redundancy and minor grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating phrases like "chatting with my friends" multiple times and correct small mistakes such as "help me refresh me" to "help me refresh". Also, aim to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Absolutely, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it provides me with useful information and interesting stories. Moreover, it helps me to refresh and clear my mind after a long day.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has some repetition and awkward phrasing, such as "when I was when when I was in the low mood". Try to be more concise and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, use more precise vocabulary like "daily life" instead of "daily basis" and correct expressions like "keep my chin up" to "cheer me up".

範例: I usually chat with my friends about everyday topics, such as my daily routine. Additionally, when I feel down, I like to talk to a friend to help cheer me up.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrasing. For example, "chatting with one friends" should be "chatting with one friend", and "talk something really private that only one friend know it" should be clearer. Also, avoid repetition and improve coherence by using linking words. Try to express your ideas more clearly and concisely.

範例: I prefer chatting with just one friend because it allows me to share private thoughts that I wouldn't share in a group. This one-on-one conversation helps me relax whether I'm in a good or bad mood.

建議: Your answer conveys your preference clearly but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward expressions, such as "it feel likes more authentic" and "if you likes more true". Try to use correct verb forms and smoother phrasing. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: Personally, I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it feels more authentic. Seeing someone's facial expressions makes the conversation more genuine, so I think face-to-face communication is better than chatting on social media.

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant but somewhat repetitive, especially with phrases like "so we don't have conflicts, so we don't have any reason for argument." Try to avoid redundancy and use linking words to improve coherence. Also, consider adding a specific example to enrich your answer.

範例: I seldom argue with my friends because they are friendly and I am a good listener. As a result, we rarely have conflicts. For example, last week we resolved a disagreement calmly without any argument.

× Chatting with my friends can provide me some useful information and also some interesting stories.

✓ Chatting with my friends can provide me with some useful information and also some interesting stories.

The verb 'provide' requires the preposition 'with' to correctly link the object 'some useful information'. Without 'with', the sentence is grammatically incorrect.

× But the most important thing, they can help me refresh me and clear my mind.

✓ But the most important thing is that they can help me refresh and clear my mind.

The sentence incorrectly repeats the pronoun 'me' and lacks a linking verb. Adding 'is that' clarifies the subject and removes the redundant pronoun.

× I usually chat with my friends about something really common or daily basis like my routine or timeline.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about something really common or on a daily basis like my routine or timeline.

The phrase 'daily basis' requires the preposition 'on' to be grammatically correct.

× Also when I was when when I was in the low mood, I would like to chat with my friend to help keep my chin up.

✓ Also, when I was in a low mood, I would like to chat with my friend to help keep my chin up.

The sentence contains repeated words and incorrect article usage. 'In a low mood' is the correct expression, and removing repeated words improves clarity.

× I prefer to chat with only one friend because chatting with one friends which means that you can talk something really private that only one friend know it.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because chatting with one friend means that you can talk about something really private that only that friend knows.

'Friends' should be singular to match 'one friend'. Also, 'talk something' requires the preposition 'about', and subject-verb agreement is corrected with 'knows'.

× So I think it is a good way to to refresh us when I when we were in a good mood, when we were in a bad mood.

✓ So I think it is a good way to refresh us when we are in a good mood or a bad mood.

The sentence has repeated words and inconsistent pronouns. Using 'we are' maintains present tense and consistency.

× Personally I prefer communicate face to face because it feel likes more authentic or if you likes more true if you can see their facial expressions.

✓ Personally, I prefer to communicate face to face because it feels more authentic and truer if you can see their facial expressions.

The verb 'prefer' requires 'to' before the verb. 'Feel' should be 'feels' to agree with 'it'. 'Likes' should be 'like' to agree with 'you'. 'More true' is better expressed as 'truer'.

× So I think face to face communication is better than social media conversation.

✓ So I think face-to-face communication is better than social media conversations.

'Face-to-face' should be hyphenated as a compound adjective. 'Conversation' should be plural to match the general context.

× My friends are mostly friendly and I'm good at listening so we don't have conflicts, so we don't have any reason for argument.

✓ My friends are mostly friendly and I'm good at listening, so we don't have conflicts and don't have any reason for arguments.

'Conflicts' and 'arguments' should be plural to indicate general occurrences. Also, adding a comma improves sentence flow.