聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了观点，但有语法错误和用词不当，如“stressness”应为“stress”，以及“as a approach”应为“as an approach”。建议使用更自然的表达，避免语法错误，并简洁明了地表达观点。

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially at school. It helps me relieve stress and express my feelings and thoughts clearly.

建議: 回答内容较好，但句子结构不够自然，如“how well did they do on the test”应改为“how well they did on the test”。建议使用更自然的语序和连接词，使表达更流畅。

範例: It depends on the situation. After a test at school, I usually talk about how well my friends did, but outside school, our conversations are more casual.

建議: 回答较长且有语法错误，如“talking with one people”应为“talking with one person”，句子结构不够清晰。建议简化句子，直接回答问题，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

範例: I prefer chatting with one friend because it's more personal. Group chats are usually about general topics, but one-on-one talks allow for private conversations.

建議: 回答表达了观点，但有语法和用词错误，如“client's face show it expressions”应为“their facial expressions”。建议使用更准确的词汇和简洁的句子。

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because online chats don't allow me to see facial expressions, making it hard to understand emotions accurately.

建議: 回答中有多处语法和表达错误，如“a easygoing guiding school”不通顺，建议简化表达，使用正确的语法，并更清晰地表达观点。

範例: I am easygoing, so I rarely argue with my friends. But if we do, I try to stay calm and talk peacefully to resolve the issue without damaging our friendship.

× Yes, of course, when in school I'll chat with my friends and perhaps the teachers.

✓ Yes, of course, when I am in school I chat with my friends and perhaps the teachers.

The original sentence uses 'I'll chat' which implies future tense, but the context is habitual action, so present tense 'I chat' is appropriate.

× For me, chatting is something that can help me to release stressness and as a approach to express my own sense of feeling and thoughts.

✓ For me, chatting is something that can help me to release stress and is an approach to express my own feelings and thoughts.

The word 'stressness' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'stress'. Also, 'a approach' should be 'an approach' because 'approach' starts with a vowel sound. 'Sense of feeling' is redundant; 'feelings' is sufficient.

× If I am in school and post test then I'll probably talk about how well did they do on the test, but if it's outside of school I will talk more casually.

✓ If I am in school and after a test, then I'll probably talk about how well they did on the test, but if it's outside of school I will talk more casually.

The phrase 'post test' is awkward; 'after a test' is better. The question form 'how well did they do' should be changed to statement form 'how well they did' in indirect speech.

× Once you want to talk something in private, I'm OK.

✓ Once you want to talk about something in private, I'm OK.

The verb 'talk' requires the preposition 'about' when followed by an object. Also, 'talk something' is incorrect; it should be 'talk about something'.

× I prefer to talk with people face to face offline because when you're online you tend not to see your client's face show it expressions and can't perceive their, umm, emotions and feelings accurately.

✓ I prefer to talk with people face to face offline because when you're online you tend not to see your client's face show its expressions and can't perceive their, umm, emotions and feelings accurately.

The possessive pronoun 'it' should be 'its' to correctly refer to 'client's face'. 'It' is a subject pronoun, while 'its' is possessive.

× I'm a easygoing guiding school, so I don't often argue with my friends, but inevitably sometime when we argued, I'd often try to calm my feeling down and try to talk to them as tranquil as possible so that we can solve the problem without harming our relationships, our friends.

✓ I'm an easygoing high school student, so I don't often argue with my friends, but inevitably sometimes when we argue, I often try to calm my feelings down and try to talk to them as calmly as possible so that we can solve the problem without harming our relationships.

The phrase 'a easygoing guiding school' is incorrect; it should be 'an easygoing high school student'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'Argued' should be 'argue' to match present tense context. 'Feeling' should be plural 'feelings'. 'As tranquil as possible' should be 'as calmly as possible' because 'calmly' is the correct adverb form.