聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が見られます。例えば、「I can know my friends experience and news these days」は「I can learn about my friends' experiences and recent news」のように言い換えると自然です。また、文を簡潔にし、5文以内に収めることを意識しましょう。

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me learn about their recent experiences and news.

建議: 内容は理解できますが、表現が不自然で文法的な誤りがあります。「these days news」や「what is the favorite eating?」は不自然です。具体的な話題を明確にし、自然な表現に直しましょう。

範例: We usually talk about our recent experiences and current news, like popular events or favorite foods.

建議: 回答は明確で内容も理解しやすいですが、「choose a group of people rather than one-on-one」は少し不自然です。「prefer chatting with a group rather than one-on-one」のように言い換えると自然です。

範例: I prefer chatting with a group of people rather than just one friend because it's more enjoyable to hear different experiences and ideas.

建議: 文法と語彙の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。「directory communication」や「with on my friends」は誤りです。より自然で正確な表現を使い、理由を明確に述べましょう。

範例: I prefer communicating face-to-face rather than online because I can see my friends' smiles, which makes the conversation more interesting.

建議: 内容は伝わりますが、「and but」などの誤りや不自然な表現があります。理由と結果を明確にし、文を簡潔にまとめましょう。

範例: Sometimes, I argue with my friends about how to increase sales, but these discussions help us become closer.

× Yes, I really like talking with my friends because I can know my friends experience and news these days.

✓ Yes, I really like talking with my friends because I can know my friends' experiences and news these days.

The noun 'experience' should be pluralized to 'experiences' to correctly refer to multiple experiences. Also, a possessive apostrophe is needed in 'friends' to indicate that the experiences belong to the friends.

× Yes, I really like talking with my friends because I can know my friends experience and news these days.

✓ Yes, I really like talking with my friends because I can know my friends' experiences and news these days.

The word 'experience' should be plural 'experiences' because it refers to multiple experiences. Also, the possessive form 'friends'' is needed to show ownership.

× We usually talk about our experiences and these days news such as what is the best news and what is the favorite eating?

✓ We usually talk about our experiences and recent news such as what is the best news and what is the favorite food?

The phrase 'these days news' is incorrect; 'recent news' is more appropriate. Also, 'favorite eating' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'favorite food'.

× I prefer communicating face to face to on the Internet because I can see the smiling face with on my friends and the directory communication helps me more interesting.

✓ I prefer communicating face to face rather than on the Internet because I can see my friends' smiling faces and direct communication is more interesting to me.

The prepositions 'to on' are incorrect; 'rather than on' is correct. 'With on my friends' is incorrect; it should be 'my friends' smiling faces'. 'Directory communication' is a wrong phrase; it should be 'direct communication'. Also, 'helps me more interesting' is incorrect; 'is more interesting to me' is correct.

× I sometimes argue with my friends about how to increase my sales and but. As a result, we get close to each other.

✓ I sometimes argue with my friends about how to increase my sales, but as a result, we get closer to each other.

The conjunction 'and but' is incorrect; only 'but' is needed. Also, 'get close' should be 'get closer' to indicate comparative degree.