聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ответ должен быть более естественным и грамматически правильным. Избегайте повторений и нечетких выражений, таких как "my friends and I" в данном контексте. Также старайтесь использовать связующие слова для логичности.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because we can talk about many things, such as our homework or share personal secrets. It helps us feel closer and more comfortable with each other.

建議: Старайтесь строить предложения более грамотно и использовать связующие слова для плавности речи. Избегайте ошибок в согласовании и повторений.

範例: We usually talk about our personal experiences and secrets. Most of all, we discuss our homework and help each other, which makes me feel happy and supported.

建議: Используйте более точные выражения и правильную грамматику. Добавьте связующие слова для улучшения связности ответа.

範例: Actually, I like both options. However, if I don't know the group well, I prefer talking to just one friend because I don't feel comfortable speaking with people who are not close to me.

建議: Ответ содержит много грамматических ошибок и нечетких выражений. Следует использовать более простые и правильные конструкции, а также связующие слова для ясности.

範例: I prefer communicating face-to-face with people I know because it feels more natural. However, when it comes to strangers, I feel more comfortable talking via social media.

建議: Избегайте повторений и используйте более точные выражения. Добавьте связующие слова для улучшения структуры ответа.

範例: Yes, sometimes my friends and I argue because we have different opinions. However, I think it's normal and helps us understand each other better.

× Yes, I like chatting with my friends and I.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends.

The phrase 'my friends and I' is incorrect here because 'I' is a subject pronoun and the phrase is used as an object of the preposition 'with'. The correct pronoun is 'me'. However, since 'my friends and me' sounds awkward, it's better to say 'my friends' only.

× we can talk about everything, for example like our from like homework or chatting about on the shares about our secrets or something else that we comfortable to talk about.

✓ we can talk about everything, for example, our homework or sharing our secrets or something else that we are comfortable talking about.

Incorrect prepositions 'from like', 'about on the shares' are used. The correct prepositions are 'about' for topics and 'sharing' as a gerund. Also, 'we comfortable to talk about' should be 'we are comfortable talking about' to use correct verb forms and prepositions.

× We usually talk about our personal experience or about our secrets and most of all we talk about our homeworks and help each other.

✓ We usually talk about our personal experiences or our secrets and, most of all, we talk about our homework and help each other.

'Experience' should be plural 'experiences' to match 'our'. 'Homeworks' is incorrect; 'homework' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized.

× I enjoy it and it's really helps me feel good.

✓ I enjoy it and it really helps me feel good.

The subject 'it' is singular, so the verb should be 'helps' without 'is'. The phrase 'it's really helps' is incorrect; it should be 'it really helps'.

× Actually I prefer both of them, but if I don't know group of people well, I prefer to talk with only one of my friends because I don't feel comfortable to talk people that not close to me.

✓ Actually, I prefer both, but if I don't know a group of people well, I prefer to talk with only one of my friends because I don't feel comfortable talking to people who are not close to me.

Missing article 'a' before 'group of people'. 'Talk people' should be 'talking to people'. Also, 'that not close to me' should be 'who are not close to me' to refer to people correctly.

× I prefer communicate face to face and this via social media but it's not comforting me to talk face to face with not familiar people with me.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face and also via social media, but it's not comfortable for me to talk face to face with people who are not familiar to me.

Missing 'to' after 'prefer'. 'This via social media' is unclear; 'also via social media' is better. 'Not comforting me' should be 'not comfortable for me'. 'Not familiar people with me' should be 'people who are not familiar to me'.

× I'm not comfortable with it but I prefer via social media with persons that I really don't know.

✓ I'm not comfortable with it, but I prefer to use social media to communicate with people that I really don't know.

'Prefer via social media with persons' is incorrect. It should be 'prefer to use social media to communicate with people'. Also, 'persons' is less common; 'people' is preferred.

× Yes, we sometimes argue with my friends because at some moments we can have different opinions or argue something, argue about something else and it's normal between friends.

✓ Yes, we sometimes argue with my friends because at times we can have different opinions or argue about something else, and it's normal between friends.

'At some moments' is better as 'at times'. 'Argue something' is incorrect; it should be 'argue about something'. Added commas for clarity.