聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to reduce the use of filler words like 'uh' and organize your answer more clearly. Start with a direct response, then add specific reasons with linking words to make your answer more natural and effective.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it allows me to discuss work-related situations and exchange ideas. This exchange is helpful and productive for our future plans.

建議: Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples to clarify your points.

範例: We usually talk about our daily work and university experiences. For instance, we share practical solutions to problems we face during the day, which helps us learn from each other.

建議: Try to avoid repetition and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide clearer reasons for your preference.

範例: I prefer chatting with a group of people because, as an extrovert, I enjoy expressing my feelings and interacting with different individuals. This social interaction usually lifts my spirits.

建議: Reduce filler words and complete your sentences fully. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly and provide specific reasons.

範例: Although it depends on the situation, I generally prefer face-to-face communication because I can see everyone's expressions, which helps reduce misunderstandings.

建議: Be careful with grammar and complete your examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific examples to support your answer.

範例: Yes, I occasionally argue with my friends, especially when we have different opinions on important topics. However, these disagreements are usually brief and help us understand each other better. For example, we might disagree about movies or current events.

× I prefer chatting with my friends because I could, uh, debate on any, uh, situation that I had in my, uh, on my, uh, work and we could, uh, exchange our ideas and it could be helpful and productive for our future.

✓ I prefer chatting with my friends because I can, uh, debate any, uh, situation that I have in my, uh, work and we can, uh, exchange our ideas and it can be helpful and productive for our future.

The modal verb 'could' is used incorrectly here to express ability or possibility in the present. 'Can' is the correct modal verb to express present ability or possibility. Also, 'debate on' should be 'debate' without 'on'. The tense of 'had' should be present 'have' to match the present context.

× I prefer chatting with my friends because I could, uh, debate on any, uh, situation that I had in my, uh, on my, uh, work and we could, uh, exchange our ideas and it could be helpful and productive for our future.

✓ I prefer chatting with my friends because I can, uh, debate any, uh, situation that I have in my, uh, work and we can, uh, exchange our ideas and it can be helpful and productive for our future.

The preposition 'on' after 'debate' is unnecessary and incorrect. The verb 'debate' does not require a preposition before its object. Also, 'in my, uh, on my, uh, work' is redundant; 'in my work' is correct.

× We usually chat about our daily topics about our work and university and uh, we try to learn about from each other and use uh, practical solutions for our issues during the day. And it could be very helpful and shares are.

✓ We usually chat about our daily topics related to our work and university, and uh, we try to learn from each other and use uh, practical solutions for our issues during the day. And it can be very helpful and share ideas.

The phrase 'learn about from each other' is incorrect; 'learn from each other' is correct. 'Could be' should be 'can be' to express general truth. 'Shares are' is incomplete and unclear; 'share ideas' is a better completion. Also, 'about our daily topics about' is redundant; 'about our daily topics related to' is clearer.

× I usually prefer to chat with a group of people because I'm an extroverted person and I try to express my feeling to group of people because I could get more interaction with various types of person or individuals and it could lift my spirits.

✓ I usually prefer to chat with a group of people because I'm an extroverted person and I try to express my feelings to a group of people because I can get more interaction with various types of people or individuals and it can lift my spirits.

The singular 'feeling' should be plural 'feelings' to match the context. 'Group of people' needs the article 'a' before it. 'Types of person' should be 'types of people' to be plural and consistent.

× I usually prefer to chat with a group of people because I'm an extroverted person and I try to express my feeling to group of people because I could get more interaction with various types of person or individuals and it could lift my spirits.

✓ I usually prefer to chat with a group of people because I'm an extroverted person and I try to express my feelings to a group of people because I can get more interaction with various types of people or individuals and it can lift my spirits.

The modal verb 'could' is incorrectly used to express present ability; 'can' is the correct modal verb for present ability or possibility.

× It depends on the situation and, uh, I, but in general, I prefer to communicate face to face because I like, uh, to get the expressions for, uh, from, uh, every single person. And uh, it could help me to, uh, to reduce misunder.

✓ It depends on the situation, but in general, I prefer to communicate face to face because I like to get the expressions from every single person. And it can help me to reduce misunderstandings.

The phrase 'expressions for, uh, from' is incorrect; only 'expressions from' is correct. The sentence is incomplete with 'misunder'; it should be 'misunderstandings'. Also, 'could' should be 'can' to express general truth.

× Yes, I occasionally argue with my friends, especially when we have different opinions on important or essential topic. However, this disagreements are usually brief and help us understand each other better. For example, we might have different opinions about movies or current.

✓ Yes, I occasionally argue with my friends, especially when we have different opinions on important or essential topics. However, these disagreements are usually brief and help us understand each other better. For example, we might have different opinions about movies or current events.

The singular 'topic' should be plural 'topics' to match 'opinions on important or essential topics'. 'This disagreements' is incorrect; it should be 'these disagreements' to agree in number. The sentence ending with 'current' is incomplete; 'current events' is the correct phrase.