聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use simpler, more natural expressions and correct verb forms. Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas more smoothly.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax when I have free time. Talking with them is a great way to unwind and stay connected.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and has some grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points. Also, avoid incomplete sentences and be more specific about the topics.

範例: I usually talk with my friends about interesting topics, such as our future plans and different trips we want to take together.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains some awkward phrasing and grammatical errors. Use simpler sentence structures and correct verb tenses. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

範例: I prefer chatting with a group of friends because everyone has different opinions. This helps us make better decisions and explore new ideas together.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains several grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct vocabulary. Also, explain your reasons more specifically and avoid confusing sentences.

範例: I prefer to communicate via social media because it allows us to stay in touch continuously without interruptions, and we can chat anytime without meeting face-to-face.

建議: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and has grammatical errors. Try to use more natural expressions and avoid redundancy. Also, provide a brief explanation or example to support your answer.

範例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends because we have different opinions. However, these disagreements usually help us understand each other better.

× Absolutely, I love chatting with my friends because it will make me feel more relaxed when I have no other works to do.

✓ Absolutely, I love chatting with my friends because it makes me feel more relaxed when I have no other work to do.

The verb 'make' should be in the present simple form 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'works' is incorrect here; 'work' is an uncountable noun in this context, so it should be singular.

× It is a process that make me communicate with my friends in a leisure time.

✓ It is a process that makes me communicate with my friends in my leisure time.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'process'. Also, 'a leisure time' is incorrect; 'leisure time' is uncountable and does not need an article. Adding 'my' clarifies possession.

× I usually chat with my friends about topics that are interesting and things that we like to do in our future and also we would like to talk about different. Trips.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about interesting topics and things we would like to do in the future, and we also like to talk about different trips.

The phrase 'in our future' is better expressed as 'in the future'. The sentence structure is awkward; combining ideas smoothly improves clarity. Also, 'different. Trips' is a punctuation error; 'different trips' should be together.

× I would like prefer to chat with a group of friends because all will be having different kinds of opinions and if we wanted to make a decision or wanted to explore new things, we can get together and make a solution for that.

✓ I would prefer to chat with a group of friends because everyone has different kinds of opinions, and if we want to make a decision or explore new things, we can get together and find a solution.

The phrase 'would like prefer' is redundant; 'would prefer' is correct. 'All will be having' is awkward; 'everyone has' is better. The tense should be consistent: 'if we want' instead of 'if we wanted'. 'Make a solution' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'find a solution'.

× I would like to prefer to communicate via social media because there will be no break between us.

✓ I would prefer to communicate via social media because there will be no break between us.

The phrase 'would like to prefer' is incorrect; 'would prefer' is the correct form.

× There will be a continuous flow of communication. No means that we can have heard by someone else or no need to face.

✓ There will be a continuous flow of communication, which means that we can be heard by others and do not need to meet face-to-face.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. Combining them and correcting the structure improves clarity. 'No means that we can have heard by someone else or no need to face' is grammatically incorrect and unclear.

× We all will be arguing with our friends, no matter whatever age we are, whatever situation we have been, we always tend to fight with our friends with different kinds of opinions.

✓ We all argue with our friends, no matter our age or the situations we have been in; we always tend to have different opinions and sometimes argue.

The phrase 'will be arguing' suggests future continuous, which is inappropriate here. Present simple 'argue' fits better for general truths. 'No matter whatever age we are' is awkward; 'no matter our age' is better. 'Fight with our friends with different kinds of opinions' is awkward; 'have different opinions and sometimes argue' is clearer.